Chaotic Maelstrom shinobi and Pokémon Trainer
Update 1
Hello everyone. This is an update to get a few things done.
First, I'll be addressing some of my reviews from the last chapter:
Pensuka: I do agree with your comment. No man should experience that, however Menma did deserve that, however the lightning part was on pure adrenaline, and when you run on pure adrenaline you tend to tap into that second gear so to speak.
Zero Fullbuster: Thanks, and glad you enjoy my story so far.
Aclux & Guest reviewer: Both of you are correct. While the idea of Naruto coming into contact with Orochimaru isn't plausible, it's the only logical point, since Naruto wouldn't be taken seriously if he just said "I actually got these elements from a video game", however the Mokuton is probably the one sub-element that will make everyone guess where he learned it, since Yamato is around. As for the Ice style & Ice moves that will probably be more difficult due to that being of the Yuki clan, and shinobi of Yukigakure, but I think we all know who will help Naruto with that. Now as it pertains to the adults being psychofanatical about the prophecy then yes. I like to think with the proper amount of training a shinobi can create their own sub-elements on their own, as well as learn elemental manipulation on their own.
Rebmul: I do like your idea of Mifune and the Kages learning about that. As for Kushina in the Pokémon world, I'm afraid I'll have to say no, but she and Delia will meet face to face, and I'll say it now, it won't be pretty.
Specter-LL7: As it pertains to Naruto having political backing in the village I agree with you, and with a confirmed idea of an early Kage Summit, Naruto will gain political backing from Mifune and the other Kages, the daimyos, and high-rank civilians like the Haruno family, Naruto will be pretty safe, and because Mebuki is on the civilian council, Naruto falls under her jurisdiction until he becomes a shinobi.
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Second, I was thinking of doing a second version of this story, only I'll tweak a few things, so tell me what you think?
My next question for you guys is if you think characters like Jessie, James, Butch, Cassidy, Domino, Annie & Oakley, Shelly, Commanders Jupiter, Mars, Saturn, Aliana, Bryony, and Celosia should be Naruto's big brothers/sisters, and turn on their respective organizations?
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Third, I'm going to put Naruto's current team down.
Naruto's Kanto Team:
Naruto's Pikachu: Static (Lightning Rod) Hidden:
Swift
Quick Attack
Thunderbolt
Charm
Agility
Iron Tail
Volt Tackle
Growl
Tail Whip
Light Screen
Charge
Discharge
Egg: Zap Cannon
Electric Terrain
Thunder
Naruto's Squirtle: Torrent
Water Gun
Rapid Spin
Withdraw
Hydro Pump
BubbleBeam
Skull Bash
Aqua Ring
Water Pulse
Egg: Ice Beam
Rain Dance
Blizzard
Earthquake
Naruto's Bulbasaur: Overgrow (Chlorophyll) Hidden)
Tackle
Growl
Leech Seed
Razor Leaf
Vine whip
SolarBeam
Petal Dance Sunny Day
Toxic
Synthesis
GrassWhistle
Egg: Petal Blizzard
Leaf Storm
Grassy Terrain
Naruto's Charizard: Blaze
Flamethrower
Dragon Claw
Dragon Tail Steel Wing
Sunny Day
Slash
Leer
Dragon Pulse
Fire Fang
Overheat
Fire Punch
Fire Blast
Flare Blitz
Wing Attack
Seismic Toss
Naruto's Lapras:
Sing
Perish Song
DragonBreath
SolarBeam
Mist
Water Pulse
Icy Wind
Aurora Beam
Hail
Naruto's Tauros: Anger Point
Rage
Horn Attack
Tail Whip
Tackle
Headbutt
Zen Headbutt
Head Smash
Stomp
Fissure
Thunder
Hyper Beam
Eevee, Vulpix, Riolu, and Dratini are pretty young, and will battle during the Johto arc. This is all I'll reveal for the moment, and the remainder of Naruto's Kanto team will be seen in the next chapter.
Also, the idea of Lapras learning SolarBeam and DragonBreath are taken from Pokémon Red and Blue for SolarBeam, while DragonBreath is from Gold, Silver, and Crystal. (I'm not sure if that was a glitch, but I was able to do it with my version.)
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Finally, for the harem, I'm going to put up four different polls to determine the harem.
I decided to divide it into these four polls:
Naruto canon pairings:
This will have the main girls from the Naruto canon, with the part 1 filler girls.
Naruto Rare Pairings:
The rare or unused girls
Pokémon Canon Shippings:
Includes the main girls from the series and the gym leaders.
Pokémon Rare Shippings:
The recurring and female characters of the day.
This is to make it so that all groups can have a fair shake, and the popular choices don't dominate.
I've put up the first poll, so head to my profile page and vote. I'll take the poll down in a month, and start the next poll.
Also so you guys know, someone asked me about Hinata, Yakumo, and Sayuri in the harem, and to that I'm going to think a little on that because I don't feel like rushing into anything, and I'll give my answer in the next chapter. Due to this, they will not be on the poll, and it wouldn't be fair to anyone who vote for other girls, and a particular girl gets in by a landslide.
This is why Cynthia won't appear on the Pokémon poll, and Diantha and the female elite four members won't appear as well as they didn't impact the canon much.
Also, Misty, Leaf, Siri, Daisy Oak, Sabrina, and Janine are not officially in the harem in the story. Right now Misty, Daisy, Leaf, and Siri are going to flirt with Naruto, while Sabrina and Janine are close friends, but that can change in the polls.
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Next I keep forgetting to mention Siri is Yellow's name I decided to give the character.
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