A/N: heya peoples... hows it been?
well, this is the newly updated version, if you like the first better than just write me at " c0l0r.b1nd.n355 " and type 'hell Yeah' if you like this version or 'fuck no' if you want me to reupload the original.
Here comes "Broken Yet Whole" version 2.0
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Chapter 1: What Shall [Not] Be
They came one by one at first and later by the dozens. The not-children held them back while they could. As the years past, the boy saw less and less of his friends and partners as they were killed off one by one during the waves of Angels.
The first to die was Touji. Shinji was forced to kill him by his father... no, not his father, father was a name he had not earned yet... the Commander. The Commander forced Shinji to kill Touji when his Evangelion was taken over by one of the Angels.
The second to die was Misato. She was killed by the last Angel, mankind. Nerv was prepared and could defend itself from the Angels, but it was not prepered for attacks from itself. In the end, mankind's only true enemy was itself. That's why mankind was dubbed the last true Angel. Misato ended up being shot by an invading force of humans.
The third to die was Asuka; she was killed by the Mass Production Evangelions when she trying to protect Shinji and Rei.
Mari died shortly after when Nerv was attacked by The Angel Of The Morning. Rei died for the second time by blowing up the Angel with a N3 missle.
The last of Shinji's friends to die was the second to last Angel, Tabris, formerly known as Kaworu. He had Shinji end his life after he found out that The Angel In Central Dogma was in fact, Lilith, not Adam as SEELE thought.
Shinji held out with Rei III by his side for four more years, fighting off the Angels which came back endlessly. The two young adults knew nothing of life outside of fighting Angels.
In turn, it was person on the inside which cause the Third Impact to start. The Commander ejected Rei III out of Unit 00, and she was crushed by the Angel.
Rei the fourth was born, and she was brought to Lilith before her memories had surfaced.
The Third Impact commenced.
Setting: The Sands of Time of The LCL Sea
Shinji woke up to the sound of silence. He sat up, brushing the sand off of the side of his face. He looked around at his surroundings. From what he could tell, he was standing on a black sand beach facing a sea that looked like the liquid that was inside of the entry plug of the Eva units.
What do you seek, Lilin? A Voice echoed around him, seeming to come from everywhere and yet nowhere.
I remember that word, Lilin, Kaworu once called me a 'Lilin'. Shinji thought.
"What do you mean, 'What do I seek?'" Shinji replied.
You are The Chosen, you are The Medium, The Voice said back, amusingly. I am allowed to give you anything, but only ONCE, Godchild.
"Can you at least show yourself, because I really don't feel comfortable talking without looking at something." Shinji asked nervously.
The Voice seemed to pause, Is that what you want?
"Can you at least just show yourself as a favor?" the boy pleaded.
Fine... with that, the Voice showed itself. It became first an outline and then the figure of a person.
Shinji recognized the figure in which the Voice had chosen to show itself as.
"Rei?" Shinji asked softyle. "No, it can't be..." he shook his head, then talking to himself. "She merged with The Gaint." The boy looked up at Rei look-alike. "Lilith?" He asked.
Very well, Godchild. I am Lilith.
"Why do you keep calling me Godchild?" he asked.
You did hold off waves and hordes of Angels for four years, even after your friends died off. You defied the Gods for four years. In the end, it was your own kind that betrayed you. So, it is fitting to call yourself Godchild.
Shinji sat down in the sand. "So, you said that you are able to give me anything I want, but only once, right?" he queistoned The Woman.
Yes
"So, can you bring Rei, Asuka, and me back in time so that we can have another chance to make peace?"
Yes and no, The woman sighed, I can bring all three of you back, but I would have to relocate all of you to another timeline in which it would not interfere.
Shinji jumped up, "Then can you do it?"
I will bring all of you back, but first you all need to train and you need to learn the Angelical language if you want to try to make peace with the Angelkind.
And the training commenced.
A/N: So, how was it? Better? Worse? Please let me know!
Until next time, stay healthy, fit, and depressed!