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Author's Note: I am Handicapped so please bare that in mind if my spelling is off. I use spell checker. I also have a slight mental disability so please excuse any mistakes. I do the best I can with writing these stories and trying to post chapters.


Introduction

Susan dies on Earth and Aslan gives her a chose either go to his Country or stay with her love Caspian. She chooses Caspian and starts a New Life. Now 13 years later in Narnia Caspian goes on the journey on the Dawn Treader leaving his wife and children behind. He picks up not just Lucy, Edmund and Eustace but also Peter, Diggory and Polly. They are given the choose to stay in Narnia and they find Susan is alive what will their chose be? And what will Susan say?...


Prologue


Susan had been with her parents in America. He heart was bleeding for Caspian. She knew she would not find love like that here. Oh she wished she had stayed in Narnia. Her parents had taken her to a party and she decided to leave the party early as she was not in the mood to party. Her thoughts were consumed by thoughts of her fight with Peter, Edmund and Lucy because she decided to go to America with their parents. They didn't understand that her heart was broken.

She was walking across the road thinking about her family and most of all Caspian when she felt pain unlike any other. She sees a car had run over here. She heard people shouting. He her world was going black.

"It is time Queen Susan the Gentle", a voice says and roars

The last thing she heard was a roar before she knew no more…


Susan woke up expecting to be in her miserable life but found herself with sand beneath her feet.

"Where am I?" Susan asks and looks around, "It is not possible"

She saw she was in Narnia. But that was not possible as she was barred from returning. She looks down at herself and she was wearing her grey/purple Narnian dress that was one of her favourites and she felt her familiar crown on top of her head.

"Susan", a voice she knew so well

Susan turns and sees Aslan.

"Aslan!" Susan scrambles and kneels before him

"Rise Queen Susan", Aslan says

Susan throws her arms around Aslan and he chuckles.

"What happened? How am I here?" Susan asks

"Do you remember what happened dear heart?" Aslan asks

Susan thinks hard and then it hits her she remembers.

"I remember leaving a party and crossing the road. I was thinking of Caspian and my family. Then I knew blinding pain and your voice before I woke up here", Susan replies, "I was in an accident wasn't I?"

"Yes dear heart. And I am afraid you didn't survive it", Aslan says sadly to the Gentle Queen

"Am I in your country? And what of my siblings and parents?" Susan asks

"Everyone believes you to be dead. Including your siblings. Your not in my country yet. You have a chose to make. You can either come with me too my country or stay here in Narnia with Caspian. Your last trip here you formed a bond with Caspian that I didn't foresee. Both off your hearts ache for the other. So your chose is to stay here in Narnia for the rest of your life then travel to my Country with Caspian or come to my country now", Aslan explains

"How long do I have too decide?" Susan asks

"One week. I know you want to think this though. I will know if you have decided. But if your heart doesn't what to be here I will take you too my country", Aslan says

"Thank you", Susan says

"It has been three years since you last left here and Caspian has built Cair Paravel as a memorial to you. As a pledge of his love for you", Aslan says

Susan looks at Cair Paravel and she couldn't believe it.

"He did this all for me?" Susan asks

"Yes", Aslan says, "Go now for he is like everyday hoping for your return"

"Thank you Aslan", Susan says hugging the lion before rushing off to Cair Paravel with Aslan's laugh behind her


Caspian was look at the throne room which he had built but instead of four thrones there was five he was hoping that the Pevensie's would come back and would share the duties with him. Suddenly he feels a presence behind him.

"Who dares enter here? This is scared place that none should enter", Caspian asks looking around

"Your Majesty, my King I being news from the Pevensie's world", a woman's voice says from the shadows

"Are their Majesty's ok?" Caspian asks

"High King Peter the Magnificent is studying with an old friend of Narnia's Diggory Kirke, King Edmund the Just and Queen Lucy the Valiant are with relatives waiting on returning to Narnia…", the woman says

"What Queen Susan?" Caspian asks

"That is where the news gets grave your Majesty. Queen Susan the Gentle didn't handle your separation well and her parents took her to another place in her land called America. She was returning from a social event when there was an accident. She was killed instantly", the voice says

Caspian gasps and falls to his knees in pain at losing his wonderful Queen.

"No, No, No anyone but her. She can't be is Aslan's Country yet", Caspian says tears flowing

Susan's heart ached for him but she needed to know somethings.

"All is not lost, and all is not without hope, my King for Queen Susan has spoken with the Great Aslan. And he has given her a chose", Susan says

"What chose?" Caspian asks

"She can live out her days here in Narnia or she can go with the Great Aslan to his country. But she can never return to the Country of her birth. She has one week to make the decision", Susan says

"Where is she?" Caspian asks

"First do you love her my King?" Susan asks

"More then anything in the world", Caspian says with passion

"Then see me my King", Susan says stepping out of the shadows

"Susan!" Caspian says and he rushes to her and she to him

Caspian twirls her around.

"My Queen", Caspian says

"My King", Susan says

They both kiss and they feel warm inside.

"Do you know what you will tell Aslan when he comes back?" Caspian asks

"Yes I do. I think you do as well", Susan says kissing him again

"Queen Susan the Gentle of Narnia will you do the honour of marrying me and becoming my Queen?" Caspian asks

"I will", Susan says and kisses Caspian again


Earth…


Peter had gotten the news his sister had been killed in a hit and run accident in America he felt numb. His sister was gone but he hoped she was in Aslan's Country. Now he was going to tell Lucy and Edmund. His mother and father were bring Susan's body home to be buried in Finchley. He couldn't believe the last words to his sister were ones of anger.

He knocked on his Aunt Alberta and Uncle Harold's door. Alberta opens up.

"What are you doing here?" Alberta asks

"I need to speak with my siblings", Peter says

"They are up the stairs", Alberta says

Peter goes up the stairs with a heavy heart.

"Peter!" Lucy says seeing him and hugs him tightly

Edmund sees the look on his brothers face.
"Peter what is it?" Edmund asks

Lucy pulls back and see Peter's sad eyes.

"Peter?" Lucy asks dreading what he was about to say

"I am afraid I have to tell you that Susan…that Susan", Peter struggles to get it out

"What about Susan?" Edmund asks

"Susan left a party that Mum and Dad were at and she was involved in a hit and run. She didn't survive", Peter chokes out

Lucy starts sobbing and Edmund hugs her tight with tears falling.

"No, no, no", Lucy says

"I am sorry Lu. Mum and Dad are bring her body home for burial", Peter says

"She would be in Aslan's Country wouldn't she be?" Lucy asks

"I am sure she is", Edmund says

"We never got to make up with her", Lucy cries

They all get into a group hug comforting each other…


One Week Earth Time Later…


As Susan's coffin was lowered into the earth her siblings cried but knew she would be with Aslan and they prayed that Aslan would look after her. They had argued with their mother and father what to put on the Head Stone but finally there parents agreed so the grave stone read…

Susan Helen Pevensie

Beloved Daughter, Beloved Sister

The Gentle Queen

1928 – 1945


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