I've decided to revise this entire story. I would read back on it after gaining some new ideas and I had come to realize that I can't make it all fit without it becoming wonky. And sadly, my own interest in it is waning because of this. As such, I will be redoing the entire thing. The main points will still be there but how I portrayed the events will more than likely be different. I didn't even get to the good parts yet... ._.
I do hope that you guys forgive me for this. I'll admit, I did more or less rush into this crossover without a second thought. Heh... I might have to reedit some chapters to Tainted Innocence as well because some parts of it do seem rather rushed after a while.
I also apologize for getting to you all rather late. I had some... family issues that left me in a long moment of depression where I was unmotivated to do much of anything really. I'll be working on a revision right after this, so hopefully I'll have it posted soon. I haven't yet decided whether to take the chapters down or not until then. I can reveal a few simple changes or points that I had planned.
- Allen is going to immediately be appointed as a teacher instead of later. (It was a idea I had later on and I feel like my way of writing highlighted that fact like a beacon)
- Yes, he is going to have a full Noah form showing in the story. As for if his classmates see...well...
- Timcanpy would be in it. (._. I liked the golem too much. Sometimes I forget that he isn't in the story and almost write him in.)
- More dialogue with Neah. (The h really does seem like it belongs in the name because Nea is just too odd for me... Also, I tend to forget that he does exist in my story.)
- Longer chapters (6,000 words minimum instead of the usual 3,000...Hopefully.)
- Chapters will be titled with my favorite Roman Numerals, since I tend to run out of words (like "Mephisto's a pain" for them.
I think my problem when I write stories is that later on, it stops become something I want to do and more like something I need to do. That mindset of mine leads to rushed plots, crappier chapters, and an altogether frustrated me. I'm not pleased with it and even though you enjoy it, I know that I can do better. I'm sorry with the suddenly rapid change but I do hope you stick with me and continue to support me because it actually does help
Thank you all very much.
-Edge