Hi all,

Just an update. I've decided to keep the fic up for a couple days but after that I'm just going to delete it. Usually I don't let negative comments get to me but this time around most of the comments seem to be negative, which means I must be doing something wrong.

I did say in the beginning that my characters would be OOC for this and that it was basically going to be a petty drama fic, so that is what I intended it to be, just like I said. Still, people seem to be reading it anyway despite that disclaimer then complaining about it.

A valid point I see people making is that Ash is too OOC in this and sort of like a villain. I didn't mean for that to happen but my attempts to fix it made it worse, so sorry for that.

To the person writing "try writing a fic with Pokemon in it", I am allowed to write a fic with just the characters in, they are as much a part of the Pokemon universe as the actual Pokemon and for this particular story I didn't see any point in writing the Pokemon in. Sorry.

My other story (Uprising) is much better, contains Pokemon and Ash is not the villain if anyone feels like checking that out anyway.

Until next time.