Hello sorry everyone but I've read over my work and I'm very pleased with it. I've noticed that it's just a bunch of very short parts that could have been much much better and longer. Most over the chapter if you can call it that we're just over 1,000 words and it's not much to read. I've been thinking of redoing this FanFiction because of the reasons above and I will have a redo of this in a latter date