I apologize if the characters are a little OOC, but I noticed no one has covered this area of stories, so that needs to be fixed. PLEASE let me know if I should just trash this and let it rot for the rest of forever or if it is great and I should update TWO times in one day.

Some weird POV that isn't from a person in the story

It was a beautiful day at Camp Half-Blood. The sun was shining, birds were singing, kids were laughing and having fun, except Nico di Angelo.

Nico was laying down on his bed in the Hades cabin sulking that not anything was needed anywhere.

There wasn't a ghost that needed convincing to come down to his Father's realm, there wasn't the possibility of a new pantheon of gods being discovered, there was nothing exciting happening.

Nico. rolled over when the door to the cabin started to open. He was now facing the wall Instead of the door. He had no interest in getting a face full of sun.

Once the door finished opening and letting all that REALLY bright sunlight inside the cabin Nico heard a familiar voice. It was Will Solstice, his boyfriend.

"Hey, Nico it's a great day and you should be out enjoying it not cooped up in a dark room. We don't want the new campers to think you are a vampire, do we?".

Nico sighed, "Will, I still refuse to go outside and for your information today is horrible." He rolled over, so he could see Will while he talked to him.

Will lunged toward Nico claiming, "You can't stay in here all day. You have to spend time outside today doctor's orders!"

Nico yelped and rolled off his all black bed that was still, sadly, shaped like a coffin. Nico smirked, "Fine, you win Will I'll go outside", he chuckled, "on the way to my cabin at Camp Jupiter."

Nico faded into the shadows just in time to see Will look at him with an expression of fake horror at Nico twisting his words.

Unfortunately, Nico never made it to Camp Jupiter because apparently Nico really did need that nap he was trying to take in the Hades cabin.

Instead, Nico looked around to see a small town in . . . . . China. The town Nico was in was very small. It was about 10 houses and 3 other large buildings that were probably where the people shopped and worked.

There were also 6-8 people who noticed this strange boy wearing all black that appeared in the middle of their town and were now staring at him.

Nico groaned he hated this town. This was the town that he shadow-traveled to every time he goofed up.

The people of the town had already had an encounter with some other child of Hades hundreds of years ago and were convinced that Nico was that same person and that he was a spirit of some kind or something similar to that that they need to treat kindly and with respect.

Which wasn't that bad. At least they weren't trying to kill him, but it did get annoying.

Nico groaned again and then proceeded to faint.

How was that for a first chapter? Too short? Too long? Do you need more detail? If so what kind of details? Please help me write!