To all those who were hoping for the next chapter of this story, I regret to say that this isn't it. I've been pondering and questioning this story as there are many things that should have been cleared up long ago. Hence why I want to ask you this question.

Should I rewrite The Daughter of The Demon?

The reasons for this question are quite simple, I've come to realize, when I should have before, that there are major gaps in the story itself, things that I would like to clear up and make it more easy to understand. I will give you a list of reasons as to why I'm asking you this.

Reason 1: Plot holes. As mentioned before, there are major gaps in the story that I would like the chance to clear up, like for example; how Lily, Flare, and Alex were able to travel to Feudal Japan; why exactly James was killed by Lily; and there was a review asking how Lily was able to get away with murder, that is something I would like to change.

Reason 2: Somewhat better quality. I personally feel that I have somewhat begun to grasp the means of writing, like proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Though there are mistakes, I am still young and have a lot to learn; which is why I feel that a rewrite might be somewhat better quality than the original.

Reason 3: Fandom. I paused this story because I tend to fall out of fandoms and slowly work my way back to them, I do visit these fandoms from time to time to see if there is anything new but that's about it. Even so, if you guys agree to a rewrite, the updates will be slow as I am currently not in this fandom for now.

If I were to rewrite this, I would keep the original up so if you please, you can go back and compare them.

One more thing; the OC pairings will still be there. So either way, Flare and Katsuo would eventually end up together. As would Alex and Noriko when they get older.

So let me know your thoughts, should I rewrite the story or not?