Author's Message

Hello! Thank you for choosing to read my first ever fanfic! I am personally proud of it, despite it being so poorly written and really cringy. I have come so far in terms of writing skill and showing rather than telling haha. I want to humbly apologize for any and all grammatical errors as well as characters constantly explaining their powers, who they are, etc. This happens again in my second book, The Prince Who Stayed Determined. I've also been told I have a tendency to "tell instead of show" in my Avatar fanfic. Due to have been a fairly new writer at the time still, I had asked how to do such things. Thanks to constructive criticism and friendly advice, I have honed my skills and became a little better in my current fics. I am currently working on the third book to this Undertale series called The Great Monster King. The first two are not needed to understand the third book as it will just be about Sans and Frisks' grandchildren. However, you can still choose to read the first two to understand Frisk, Sans, and Franley's past, their struggles, and their triumphs. The 3rd book is going to be what I had meant for the first one to be, and because I have so many friends who are talented writers, I will have some help in making sure everything is being told the way I want it to be. Another thing! There are blanks in HWSU and PWSD where names should be. The site had deleted them because they were names like Doctor Alphys, but with doctor being abbreviated with a period after. So most of the blanks were meant to be doctor Alphys where as some were a random teacher name or some other authoritative figure. Look at this book and not judge me with it. It is my first fanfic after all. I have looked back, learned, and grew from this monstrosity. Happy reading and stay determined!