This is my first fan fiction so I'm really excited about this. PLEASE review and give me constructed criticism. No flames please.
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"If you want to go out there and freeze to death, you be my guest. Because you're on your own." With that I turned my back on my best friend. I was sure that after I said that he would wake-up and apologize. I waited, but the only change in the cave was the light growing dimmer and then vanishing. He couldn't have left me...could he? I slowly turned around and found that the cave was empty. He had left me, his longtime friend, for some kid he had just met last night?
"Fine Sully! If that's how you want it, fine!" I shouted to the roaring wind. Why did he do it? Why?
*Flashback*
"We were about to break the record Sully!"
"None of that matters now"
"Wait, none of it matters? What about everything we've worked for? Doesn't that matter? And what about Celia? I'm never going to see her again, doesn't that matter? He just silently pushed his sled forward. Hurt shot through me hard at his actions. "And what about me? I'm your pal, don't I matter?"
*End of flashback*
He hadn't answered me. He had left me. So did I not matter to him?
I was abruptly pulled from my musings by the returning Abominable. "I've got more snow cones!" He boomed, "Seeing as how your target is flying over the hills in a blizzard, would you care to actually eat one this time?"
I was in no mood to eat anything but I politely declined and vainly attempted to return to my thoughts.
"Well seeing how you don't want one, you don't care if I help myself do you?" Without waiting for an answer he began his raid on the snow cones. "Is your friend..er.. I mean is that big fellow always so crazy? 'Cause zooming up valleys and down hills in a blizzard isn't exactly what I'd call sound thinking you know? He's either gonna get himself lost and die of frost bite, or crash into a rock and kill himself, or at least knock himself out and no one will ever find him before it's too late or he could..."
"That's enough do you hear me?! I don't need to know all the ways my friend can kill himself!" I shouted. Fear and guilt was starting to creep up on me.
"Hey! Sorry, sorry but I thought he wasn't your friend."
"Of course he's my friend! You honestly think what I say when I mad at him counts!?"
"Well...I..."
I charged over the Abominable's pile of odds and ends. Sully needed me and I wasn't there to help him. 'Serves him right for leaving' said a voice inside me. 'No he shouldn't have left but he's my friend!' I shot back.
"Whoa! What are you doing?" the Abominable asked coming over to stand behind me.
"I'm going after Sully."
"You can't go out in that! Didn't you hear what I was saying!?"
"Sully's out there and he needs me!" I retorted as I pushed my hastily constructed sled into the raging storm.
Tbc...
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"If you want to go out there and freeze to death, you be my guest. Because you're on your own." With that I turned my back on my best friend. I was sure that after I said that he would wake-up and apologize. I waited, but the only change in the cave was the light growing dimmer and then vanishing. He couldn't have left me...could he? I slowly turned around and found that the cave was empty. He had left me, his longtime friend, for some kid he had just met last night?
"Fine Sully! If that's how you want it, fine!" I shouted to the roaring wind. Why did he do it? Why?
*Flashback*
"We were about to break the record Sully!"
"None of that matters now"
"Wait, none of it matters? What about everything we've worked for? Doesn't that matter? And what about Celia? I'm never going to see her again, doesn't that matter? He just silently pushed his sled forward. Hurt shot through me hard at his actions. "And what about me? I'm your pal, don't I matter?"
*End of flashback*
He hadn't answered me. He had left me. So did I not matter to him?
I was abruptly pulled from my musings by the returning Abominable. "I've got more snow cones!" He boomed, "Seeing as how your target is flying over the hills in a blizzard, would you care to actually eat one this time?"
I was in no mood to eat anything but I politely declined and vainly attempted to return to my thoughts.
"Well seeing how you don't want one, you don't care if I help myself do you?" Without waiting for an answer he began his raid on the snow cones. "Is your friend..er.. I mean is that big fellow always so crazy? 'Cause zooming up valleys and down hills in a blizzard isn't exactly what I'd call sound thinking you know? He's either gonna get himself lost and die of frost bite, or crash into a rock and kill himself, or at least knock himself out and no one will ever find him before it's too late or he could..."
"That's enough do you hear me?! I don't need to know all the ways my friend can kill himself!" I shouted. Fear and guilt was starting to creep up on me.
"Hey! Sorry, sorry but I thought he wasn't your friend."
"Of course he's my friend! You honestly think what I say when I mad at him counts!?"
"Well...I..."
I charged over the Abominable's pile of odds and ends. Sully needed me and I wasn't there to help him. 'Serves him right for leaving' said a voice inside me. 'No he shouldn't have left but he's my friend!' I shot back.
"Whoa! What are you doing?" the Abominable asked coming over to stand behind me.
"I'm going after Sully."
"You can't go out in that! Didn't you hear what I was saying!?"
"Sully's out there and he needs me!" I retorted as I pushed my hastily constructed sled into the raging storm.
Tbc...