Ok as stated I'm restarting this so I'm going to redo this like rebirth, I love rebirth so much, I maybe following some of the rebirth story but I'm going to try my best to keep this on plot.
Also you know all the stuff going on with the watchmen… just calling it, Batman Vs. either Nite owl or Rorschach, that would be awesome.
Also I'm going to make Ruby one very (I feel) underrated villain, if you can guess who then I will mention your name in the next chapter I do, one hint, she looks like Ruby (or at least I think)
Also I'm just going to start this from when he gets back to Remnant.
Chapter 1
Jaune stumbled out of the portal Batmite had made (yes in this fanfic its going to be Batmite who took Jaune to be trained by Bruce) Jaune looked around, he was in Vale.
He was glad that he remembered most of Remnant, though he would have to do some serious research, to catch up after all his time away, to the looks of things he'd probably have to push his family away as he took up his duties as Batman.
Jaune had a checklist of objectives:
- form a company – this would allow him many resources and money to use, just like how Bruce did.
- find a base of operation.
- develop necessarily needed equipment.
- get into a huntsman school only to fail in it – this way nobody would suspect it was him, he planned to do embarrassingly bad and get expelled.
Jaune had an idea how to get papers to get into a huntsman school, he'd probably
Luckily he already had a batsuit and several gadgets provided to him by Bruce, he also had a sword his grandfather had given to him before passing away, Batmite had also probided him with 10,000 lien so that should hold him up for a while.
He needed to make his debuted as Batman quickly, he knew just how bad Vale was, he'd seen it when his sister was murdered, originally he had eight sisters but then the eldest Margret had been killed, in an alleyway.
When he told Bruce this, Bruce told him the same had happened to him, only his parents, Bruce told him that they were alike, they both looked into the abyss, the ugliness of the world that it never wanted to show, it was the choice now, to look into it or look away from it.
Jaune had swore to look straight into it like Bruce and he had seen a lot more clearly, he had seen just how filthy and corrupt Vale was, true it was beautiful during the day, but at night the city showed its true face.
The huntsmen allowed themsevle to think they were in a time of peace so they had an excuse not to protect the people, originally Jaune did want to be a huntsman to protect the people originally but then he saw how the huntsmen and huntresses just turned a blind eye he needed to be more, he needed to find a symbol, Batmite had taken him to Batman to show him how to become that symbol.
Hiring a room in a hotel, Jaune would stay there for now, he quickly settled in and took out his batsuit, he'd have to wait and he'd really need to make a great debut to show who he is.
He took out his laptop and quickly linked in to the vast amount of networks, searching everything he found a vast number of problems.
''guess I'm pulling an all nighter'' he grumbled.
The police were obviously on the mobs payroll, there was no other explanation for the vast amount of human and fanus trafficking along with child slavery, there were also many women kidnapped and several robberies, Jaune looked out of his window to see that the sun had went down, looking over to his batsuit he grinned he had work tonight.
-LINE BREAK-
That night a gang hung inside a warehouse, this was there hangout, it still had shipping crates, but they were all empty, in a large cage that was originally used to transport animals was a group of kids, the kids were crying and huddling together, one little girl with blond hair was hugging her older brother, as he glared at them.
''Well boy's deals in we sell these little bastards and get rich'' announced the boss, the thugs chuckled and patted one another on the back, but then the lights went out.
''what's that?'' asked one of them.
''how am I suppose to know?'' replied another of the thugs.
''police?'' asked one of them.
''nah can't be'' said another.
''eh go check it out'' said the boss
a group of five went to check it out, armed with handguns and flashlights, the group of five split into groups of two and one went by himself, the first group of two went to the left and the second went to the right the one on his own went to the center.
The first group then heard something a cracking sound, they quickly ran towards the sound, they found nothing, but something was sticking out of the floor, they pointed there flashlights on the thing, they walked towards it, one of the, put down there handgun to pick it up.
It looked like some kind of metal Bat that was sculpted into some kind of throwing knife.
''What the heck is this?'' asked one of the thugs steering at the metal, his partner dropped his gun and steered up ''what's wrong?'' he looked up too and dropped his gun, a dark shadow with red wings, hung from the ceiling.
The shadow descended and attacked, the two thugs screamed, there screams echoing around the warehouse, the other thugs gulped, they had started to sweat, hearing those screams had given them the shivers.
One of the thugs saw a passing shadow and shot at it, gulping as he missed and the others followed through with the shots, some of them just deciding 'screw this' and running away, he shadow swooped in picking them off, one by one.
One of the last who had spread out was sweating so much now, he gulped as he just fired his gun all around him, until he was out of bullets ''w-w- WHERE ARE YOU!'' he screamed.
''I'm hear'' whispered a voice behind him.
The Thug jumped in fear as the shadow quickly incompasiated him, the group who had stayed behind ran in on the boss's orders and the dark figure jumped down and started to fight all of them and he was actually winning very quickly, he quickly beat all of them and then grappled back up to the darkness, the boss who was still at the top of the steers, loading up his shotgun, the kids were scared too hearing the screams, was what was coming for those men coming from them too?
The boss gulped hastily loading his gun ''oh god w-what are you? What are you?'' the boss panicked.
The shadow dropped down on top of the boss tackling him to the ground, the shadow then turned the man over and grabbed his collar causing the boss to gasp and look in horror at his attacker.
This wasn't any kind of man it was some kind of- of- OF DEMON- the figure was about 6'1ft, this figure was covered completely in black, the black parts of his body was covered in gunmetal grey armor, as well as gunmetal grey armored boots, his eyes were completely red, he was wearing a gunmetal grey belt that looked to be some kind of utility belt, his head was covered by some kind of black armored material, with two pointy ears, was this some kind of Faunus?, the most prominent thing about this figure was that he had a bat symbol in the center of his chest (basically Batman Beyond)
''I'M BATMAN!''
Jaune took a moment to look at the absolute terror on the mans face before knocking him out with a single punch and cuffing him to a light post, he then went over to the cages that the children were in, the kids were quivering in fear.
''hey its ok'' he said getting on his knees ''look I just needed to scare all of them, I won't hurt any of you, your all scared I know that, I was scared too, but always remember this, it's ok to be scared everyone gets scared, but everyone can fight that fear, everyone gets the chance to be brave''
he heard a siren obviously from the police, he had given an anonymous tip an hour ago before going in, god the cops were sloppy, he knew most of them were on the mobs payroll but really, they were this sloppy.
He sighed ''I have to go now, the police will take care of you once they're hear'' he said before turning to grapple off into the night.
''wait!'' cried a boy ''who are you?''
''I'm Batman'' said Jaune, firing his grappling hook he soared off into the night, ready to preform his next stunt that he had managed to pull of by making a metal bat symbol and finding a working but abandoned skyling, he shone the bat symbol into the night sky, before running off to fight more crime.
So there done that's the first chapter, I hoped you liked it, I'm going to try and focus more on the story and more on the characters now rather than just do a guide line which is basically what I did.
Also I hope you don't mind the Batman Beyond suit, I really enjoy that suit but I may change it later, but I really love Batman Beyond, though I like to think of it as it's own separate timeline.
Also just a question you know in the cartoon it debuted in how the heck does the mask also cover like his mouth and that? How does it am I the only one who wonders this.