Chapter 1

Finally! Initiation is over! I am so relieved, I didn't think I could last another minute going through my fear simulation. It reminded me of my aptitude test, where I

learned I had an aptitude for Dauntless. I was really surprised, almost as surprised as finding out my brother would be leaving our parents for Erudite. My average

time in the sims was 10 minutes, though my slowest time was 15. I did pretty good in my final evaluation, so i'm pretty confident i'm gonna get the top 5.

"Good job Tris! You did so well!" I hug Christina back as she yells in my ear over the sound of the pit. Finally, the scores are shown.

Peter

Uriah

Tris

Marlene

Lynn

Will

Christina

Drew

Molly

There were some more, but I was to shocked to read the rest. I got third! I'm so proud of myself!

"Good job Tris." I jerk at the sound of a deep voice, one i'm not used to.

"Oh, thanks Four." It's just Four, my instructor. He is really cute, but he seems to… unapproachable to date, and I was too busy with my initiation to pay attention to him.

"Initiates! Please line up to get a tracker in you, just in case you get lost at any time." Eric calls out. I'm to happy to care at this point. So, I give my neck to the

nearest person, and am injected, ready to get my apartment and future started!

A/N

Sooo did you like it? A few of you said I should make it, so this is just the beginning. I'm not sure what to call it, so give me some suggestions! More action will be in the future, I promise. Make sure to review favorite and follow this story for a new chapter possibly tomorrow. Ok, byee!

-Grace