A/N: I'm back.
Hinata shivered at both the implications of his words, and the tone of voice he used. And despite her orgasm making her limbs weak, she managed to summon up enough strength to roll onto her stomach With much of a struggle, she forced herself onto her hands and knees. A strong shiver ran up her spine. She absolutely loved the doggy position. It rendered her unable to see behind her, leaving her virtually blind to anything her Dom would do to her.
"Now, I'm thinking of a number between one and one hundred. Guess which number I'm thinking of." He ordered.
"Twenty-Five, sir." She answered immediately. She was impatient, and desperately wanted to feel the harsh sting of the whip as soon as possible. So why was he stalling?
"Perfect! That's how many times I'm going to whip you." He announced gleefully.
Hinata's core automatically throbbed in response. Finally she would get exactly what she had been craving.
"And when I hit you, I want you to count, and to thank me for each strike. Does my slut understand?" He asked. Despite how even and controlled he attempted to sound, Hinata could clearly detect the amount excitement that he had.
"Yes sir, thank you sir." She responded immediately. It was very comforting to know that he was just as excited as she was.
"Good. Are you ready?" He asked. Despite asking a question, he didn't give her time to respond verbally or otherwise.
The harsh burning sting of the whip made brutal contact with her skin. Her left asscheek was the receiver of the first mark. Hinata immediately gasped, and arched her back in response. The pain spread through the rest of her body, and her lower area jolted in an incredible amount of pleasure. The searing heat in her genitals was absolutely amazing.
But despite the intense amount of pain and pleasure, she still recalled her orders as a submissive.
"O-one, th-thank you master!" She keened out.
He grunted, before lashing out at her skin a second time. It struck like a bolt of lightning. Goosebumps covered her entire body, and every single one of of her hairs stood on edge. He had hit her close to the same spot as before. Her core seized with how good it hurt.
"Two, th-thank you m-master!" The pale eyed beauty gasped out.
The words barely had enough time to leave her lips before he allowed the whip to kiss her skin once again. Hinata almost screamed the next couple of words out.
"Th-Three! Thank you my mast-!" Another lash of the whip. This one biting into her other cheek. It helped fan the flames to the already searing fire burning through her entire body.
Her poor heart threatened to explode from the speed of its own beating. She attempted to keep count of every single lashing delivered to her body. But the feelings were so overwhelming, and the strikes came far too quickly. After the 9th strike, she simply stopped trying to count. It was quite clear that he didn't care at that point. He just wanted to bask in the fact that he was causing her so much pain. He would release a small grunt after each and every strike he delivered unto her body. It was almost as if he was the one being whipped.
Her counting was replaced by her sharp gasps, and tiny shrieks of pleasure. Her body jerked and twitched before and after each strike against her soft, pale skin. She rubbed her thighs together in a desperate attempt to somehow find relief. Hinata could feel some liquid dripping down her thighs.
The whipping continued, on and on, over and over again. Hinata was almost positive that he had long since passed the number 25. That was as amazing as it was horrifying. She had no idea when he would finally stop. The feelings were so electrifying, such a euphoric combination of pain and pleasure that it was constantly on the edge of it being unbearable. The poor Hyuuga was barely holding on.
Finally, a single blow, one very close to her aching lips, did the job.
"Ma-master!" Hinata yelped. Her entire body seized, and her muscles became locked in position. Her entire being shook, and spasmed as she was sent into a nearly mind numbing orgasm. It was powerful enough to bring her to tears. She still managed to continuously cry out to the Dom.
"Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you." She cried over and over again, like a broken record.
Her poor arms gave out, and she collapsed onto the bed. She panted into the pillow, and tried to cool down. She could hear her new Dominant also panting heavily behind her. Hinata's cheeks turned a humiliated red, while more tears slipped out of her eyes.
How could she?
How could she come without asking him for permission first?
He was probably furious at her. He was probably going to leave her to find an even better sub. He had given her so many chances, and he'd already caused her to orgasm! And yet, she still managed to be disobedient. He had even stopped whipping her, probably as a result of her horrible behavior.
Hinata clutched at the sheets, and desperately tried to calm her beating heart and frantic mind.
But her new Dom wasn't finished with her just yet.
Hinata tensed when she felt him climb up onto the bed. He crawled up behind her. The blue haired beauty, gasped when he pressed his hot, throbbing cock up against her entrance. He ground up against her, causing her to wither and moan.
He leant over her body, pressing against her marked back.
"Mmmmm, did you like that, you filthy little slut?" He whispered into her ear. He grasped onto her hips, groping harshly at her soft flesh. She whimpered in pleasure and pain.
"Mm, I bet you did, you fucking whore. You even came, how wonderful." He continued to mumble dirty things into her ear while he harshly molded her flesh.
"Yes sir, thank you sir." She yelped out as an automatic response. Her poor confused body attempted to move away from him, and burck towards him at the same time.
He decided to press the very tip of his cock inside of her entrance.
"It made me so horny, whipping you. And God, watching you cum almost made me spill my seed. So now, I'm going to fuck this tight little pussy of yours." He growled, while lightly thrusting his tip in and out of her. She bucked against him, trying to force him deeper inside of her.
"Yes sir, please fuck me! Please f-fuck your filthy cum slut." She pleaded. Feeling his large, hot length pressing up against her hole made her feel even hotter. But her heart froze when he suddenly stopped his movements.
"Ohh, so you're my slut now?" He asked in a dark voice.
"U-Um, w-wel sir, if y-you would please t-take me, I would l-love to be your slut." She admitted. Hinata was basically asking him to cuff her, which was a huge request. Especially since this was the first night the two of them had any contact. And they were currently not even finished with their very first session together. For her to already be asking such a renowned Dom to cuff was quite the ballsy move. Hinata had never felt so bold before.
He released a strained chuckle.
"I'm so flattered. I've never been asked by a sub to collar them in the middle of one of our sessions. You must really love my cock." He released another strained chuckle. This one had a darker tone to it.
"Yes I do! Your cock is amazing. Please use my body however you wish. I wanna make your cock happy." She pointed out to him.
"You sure about that, cum dumpster?" He planted a kiss behind her ear. "You think you can fully handle me?"
"Y-yes! Please, please! Let me prove it to you!" She begged him. She wiggled her plump rump, in an attempt to tempt him into putting it back inside of her.
"If that's what you want." He lined himself up with her entrance. In one firm stroke, he decided to thrust back into her.
Hinata threw her head back, and released a loud moan. It had been so long, far too long since she had a man inside of her. He was warm, hard, and hot. He stretched her in the most delicious ways. She clenched tightly around him. She wanted him to never stop filling her.
Naruto released a large, guttural; groan into her ear.
"Fuck, you're so tight, it's incredible." He grunted out. He placed a gentle kiss on her cheek.
"Are you ready for me, slut?" He asked her.
Hinata flushed at this amazing amount of consideration. Constantly asking her if she was prepared for his brutal treatment of her. Even though she'd already agreed to start a session with him, he wanted to truly make sure that she was still giving him her complete consent. It was such a sweet thing for a sadistic Dom like him to do.
"Yes, please sir! Use my body in any way that you wish." She pleaded with him, in her most sincerest voice.
"Alright then." He said.
Naruto lifted his upper body away from hers. She felt him place one hand on the top of her back. He then gathered up her hair. Hinata whimpered out of disappointment when he pulled out of her.
However, she was quickly satisfied when he plunged deep inside of her while also giving her hair a sharp tug. Her head was jerked back, while her hips moved backwards. Naruto viciously began ramming into her with gusto. His thrusts were fast, and deep. He would pull and twist her hair in time with his thrusts. This constantly gave her the delicious feeling of pleasure. She did try her best to remain silent. Even though he was pretty relaxed with the rules during this session, she still wanted to try her best to be obedient.
But Naruto threw her plans out the window when he used his free hands to scrape his nails down her left ass cheek. The same cheek that was covered in the markings from the whip.
This caused Hinata to almost orgasm right then and there.
"Aaah, Naruto!" She cried out his name for the first time that night.
Naruto halted for a brief moment, and then continued his harsh movements with even more brutality.
"That's right baby, scream my fucking name. I want everyone to know who you belong to, you fucking slut." He growled out from above her. To punctuate his request, he gave her ass a nice, firm, smack.
"N-Naruto!" Hinata moaned out again, as the flash of pain overwhelmed her once again.
"Mmm, that's right, you dirty whore."
The room was filled with the obscene noises of her coupling. His grunting and groaning mixed well with her moaning and yelping. The sound of flesh hitting each other rang through the air. His hand, hitting her cheek, and his hips smacking into her hips, it was amazing. And the creaking of the bed was the cherry on the top.
A light sheen of sweat covered both of their bodies as they raced towards a mutual orgasm. Tears had pooled in her eyes, and began spilling down her cheeks from the intense feelings. Hinata could feel herself getting closer and closer to orgasm. Her body tingled all over with electricity. It was such a mind blowing experience, and she knew that this upcoming orgasm would be the best one she's ever had. The closer and closer she got, the louder she became. Of course, she wasn't a screamer, but she was far louder than unusual.
"That's right, you little slut, cum for me, go ahead." Naruto growled, also coming close to his end.
Then, the coil in her stomach finally broke. She sobbed like a maniac as she felt her release over come her. Her arms gave out again, but this time, she remained upright. Naruto's grip on her hair never loosened. He managed to keep the upper half of her body off of the bed. She could feel him pulling out some strands of her hair. He continued to fuck her, through her release. But when he went over the edge of his orgasm, he snapped forward, and sunk his teeth deep into her shoulder.
HInata proceeded to release a silent scream. Powerful feelings overwhelmed her. The feeling of pain, the feeling of him stretching her, and the feeling of his hot seed spilling inside of her left her breathless.
'This man is amazing,' Was the last thought she had, before passing out.
xXTheDealXx
Hinata felt incredibly sore. Her lower body was killing her. Her throat felt like sandpaper was rubbing against it. Her head was pounding and even her shoulders were killing her. It took her a moment or two before she finally recalled everything that happened last night.
She had been left behind by her boyfriend, and Dominant, Toneri, and went off with a man she barely knew. An amazing man in bed, sure, but a stranger nonetheless.
At this sudden realization, Hinata's eyes snapped open, and she sat straight up. She instantaneously regretted her actions. Immense pain shot through her entire body, and she whimpered. She never recalled aching so horribly in her entire life. A part of her heart felt so happy that her body had been used and abused in this manner. But another part of her, well, it was just aching.
Hinata whimpered out in discomfort. She managed to scan the room, finding herself entirely alone. This new Dom, of course, had left her. It would make sense. She was very disobedient the previous night, and she figured that he could find someone much better than her. And he was so renowned. If Toneri didn't want her, what made her think that a Dom like Naruto would? She was only a one night stand, that much was perfectly clear.
Tears gathered in her eyes. Still, it hurt, it hurt so much. She had been ready, fully prepared to dedicate herself to him after last night. The way he treated her with such sadism, yet, the way he demonstrated that he cared for her was incredible. For a few brief moment, she had tricked herself into thinking that he actually cared for her. But that was a stupid thought, from a very stupid girl.
Hinata couldn't help it. Tears started streaming down her face. A small sob escaped her lips. It hurt so much to be abandoned again by another man in her life. She didn't understand why this kept happening to her. She couldn't even use her hands to wipe away her tears, she was aching far too much.
Much to her surprise, the bedroom door swung open. She turned to face the intruder.
It was Naruto, the same blonde Dominant who had blown her mind the night before. He carried multiple different supplies in his hands. Like lotions, bandages, and other things. Unfortunately, he was not sporting a pair of black boxers.
"Oh my Kami!" He rushed towards her side, placing the items on the bed as quickly as possible, and focused all of his attention on her. He knelt besides the bed, and cupped her cheeks. His blue eyes danced with worry as he studied her face.
"What's wrong? Are you okay? Oh Kami, I took it way too far last night, didn't I? I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to! What can I do? I understand if you don't want to talk to me ever again. Jesus, Hinata, I really didn't mean to make me cry!" He continued to blabber out a series of apologies to her. This blonde was much different than the man who she slept with last night. It was such a drastic shift in behavior.
"Hello? Hello? Hinata, are you okay?" Naruto asked her, snapping her back to reality. Her face heat up once she realized that she had completely zoned out at him. But once a little bit of red colored her cheeks, he became slightly mesmerized. He carefully stroked at her cheeks, making sure to also wipe away her tears.
"Y-yes, I'm fine." She winced at the last word. It really hurt her to speak.
"Are you sure? Why are you crying?" He asked in a soft tone. He never stopped stroking her cheeks.
"I, um, I was just being silly." She responded, breaking eye contact in embarrassment.
"No, c'mon, you can tell me. What's wrong? If I did anything wrong, then please tell me. I don't wanna make you cry." Naruto tried to convince her to speak.
"Well, um, I just, I just thought that you left m-me here a-alone." Her throat closed up at the end, as more tears threatened to spill out of her eyes. She still avoided eye contact with him.
"Hey now," he gently prodded her, until she looked back into his eyes. "I'm not like that other guy, okay? I can't just leave you here by yourself. And even if I didn't want you as a sub, which I do, I couldn't leave until I finished taking care of you."
Hinata's cheeks turned an even darker shade of red at his admission. Her heart danced with joy at the idea that this amazing male specimen actually wanted to take her as a sub. She'd never felt more wanted in her entire life. And to know that he would stay, and take care of her after their session was wonderful. He was giving her the type of Dom/sub relationship that she's been looking for. Her love life had never been this good before.
"Y-you mean that?" She asked him.
"I'm positive. Now, just sit back and relax, and let me take good care of you, okay? You did amazin-no, fucking incredible last night. I don't think anyone has blow my mind as much." He confessed to her.
"You really mean that? You thought that I was a good sub?" Hinata realized she was pushing her luck by fishing for compliments, but she couldn't help it. Having such a famous Dominant shower her with compliments was doing amazing for her ego.
He snorted.
"Good? I thought you were probably the best sub that I've ever had." He admitted.
"Really?!" She exclaimed in almost total shock. After all the subs that he's had, there's no possible way that she was his best sub. Perhaps he was only saying all that stuff to make her feel better.
"Hell yeah! Kami, I've never cum so hard! The way you took my cock down your throat was beautiful. And when you came from the whipping, I lost my fucking mind. " Chills went up her spine when he growled out the last couple of words. The way he looked at her was also quite heated. But Hinata hadn't forgotten her manners.
"Th-thank you!" And your were also the best Dominant I've ever had!" Naruto rubbed the back of her head at her compliments.
"Really? You didn't think that I was too rough or anything?"
Hinata shook his head at her.
"No , you were incredible! I don't think I've ever came that hard in my entire life! And the way you used and abused me..." She trailed off, blushing at her dirt train of thought.
"That's great! I'm glad you thought so!" Naruto chuckled " Now, shhh, lemme, finish taking care of my lady, okay?"
"O-okay." Hinata blushed at his claim. It truly warmed her heart.
"Great!" He grinned at her He gave her a peck on the lips before getting back task.
He stood up, but leant down to her. He slipped one arm underneath her legs, and another arm around her waist. Trying hard not to jostle her, he lifted her up out of the bed. She still winced. Her body was aching too much for any amount of movement. But she dared not to complain. Hinata was sure wherever he was taking her would be to soothe her sore body.
Naruto took her to the bathroom. It wasn't too large, but it was cozy and comfortable. The bath tub was large enough to hold two people. Perfect for cuddling together after sessions. What caught her attention was the fact that it was already filled with water and bubbles. So that's what he had been doing while she was unconscious.
She tensed as he carefully placed her inside of the tub. The blue haired submissive expected it to hurt like nothing else. She was surprised to find that she only felt an initial sting, before being enveloped in a cocoon of warmth and comfort. Like her entire body was being massaged at once. She released a relaxed sigh, and allowed her head to lay back against the bathtub.
"This is amazing." She mumbled.
"Good! It's supposed to relax, and start healing your wounds. My surrogate grandmother is a master at healing. She taught me how to use herbs in water for my subs. It works like a charm." He informed her He got on his knees, besides the tub. He took a container of liquid soap, and squeezed a bit of it on to his hands. The blonde lifted her hand out of the tub, and began washing her. Despite his hands being rough, his massage was smooth, and comforting. It helped her unwind further.
Hinata closed her eyes as he began humming. As she allowed him to to care of her, she drifted off to sleep.
The next time the young Hyuuga woke up, she snuggled up to the warm body besides her. Her head was laying on his chest, while his arm was wrapped around her. And this time, she felt not pain. As a matter of fact, all the tension had completely disappeared. She could also feel some bandages wrapped around her body. Mostly around her lower body. Naruto had really done wonders for her.
"Good morning, again" He greeted her.
"Good morning, Naruto" She replied. Hell, even her throat felt better.
"You've been out for a few hours since the last time that you woke up. I guess I really wore you out." He joked.
"Mhm." Hinata hummed out in agreement. She snuggled up closer to his body. She was about to close her eyes, in order to possibly drift off. But then, they snapped open. Hinata shot up from the bed, with a horrified gasp. She immediately tried scrambling out of bed. But her jelly like limbs refused to properly function.
"What? What is it?" Naruto asked in concern at her radical shift in behavior.
"I need to call people to tell them I'm alright. They're going to worry about me if I don't." She informed him, still trying to move.
"Hey, woah, calm down!" No need to panic! You can just use my phone to call your friends and family." Naruto placated her. "Here, lemme just get it for you."
Hinata calmed down as he got out of bed, and picked his pants up from the previous night. He ruffled through his pockets for a bit, before finally finding her phone. He went back to bed, and handed it to her.
"Thank you so much." She said. "But, um, I'm going to need to call Toneri in order to um, explain the change in our situation."
"Oh, well, that's fine." He stated nonchalantly, climbing back into bed. He placed his hands behind his head, as he laid back against the headboard.
"O-okay." He did her best to steel her nerves as she began dialing Toneri's number.
"Just as long as he knows and understands that you belong to me now." He told her. Hinata shivered in pleasure at his claim.
'I'm his now, I'm his now. I belong to him, I am his new submissive.' She chanted to herself. All of this would give her strength into finally ending her broken relationship.
Her heart began to thud in trepidation as she waited for him to pick up the phone
"Hello?" She almost jumped out of her skin when his voice rang out from the other end. She could tell that he was incredibly frustrated.
"Um, h-h-hi Toneri. It's H-hinata." She stumbled out, struggling to find the proper words. Hinata calmed down when Naruto placed a hand on her thigh, to help give her some extra strength. She gave him a thankful smile.
"Hinata!? Where the hell are you? Where have you been? I went back to the club, and they told me you went off with some other guy!" He ranted at her.
"Well-"
"And not only that, but they told me you went off with Naruto Uzumaki! Do you have any explanation for yourself?" He cut her off with more ranting.
"Yes, I d-do. I'm s-sorry T-toneri, but I can't b-be with y-you anymore. I'm n-not happy, and I h-haven't been happy with you in a v-very long time." She finally admitted.
"And what is that supposed to mean?" He spat out.
"It m-means that I'm b-breaking up with you. And th-that I found a n-new Dominant." She informed him, glad that she got most of that out without stuttering.
He scoffed at her statement.
"Oh please Hinata. Do you really think that a Dominant like that, would really want a submissive like you? You're fooling yourself! How about you come back home, and I punish you for your disobedience, and we can go back to how things were like before?" He essentially spat at her, with that condescending tone of voice that she hated so much.
"N-no! I will not. I'm n-not going back to y-you. I was unhappy. You were an awful b-boyfriend, and an awful D-dominant. You n-never listened to me, and you d-disregarded what I wanted. You d-didn't take care of me as my D-dom, or as my b-boyfriend. And I r-realized that I can d-do better." She threw her own rant at him.
"How dare you! Hinata Hyuuga, as your Dominant, I order you to apologize, and come back home, immediately. " He commanded.
"Toneri, you're not my Dominant anymore." At least that sentence was stated with an incredible amount of confidence. If there was one thing she was sure of at that moment, it was the fact that he had no claim on her anymore.
"THE HELL I'M NOT!" He was shouting now, completely losing his composure. "YOU BELONG TO ME, AND YOU NEED TO GET YOUR ASS HOME, AND-"
The rest of tirade was cut off from her when Naruto snatched the phone away from her ear.
"Hey, buddy! This is Naruto Uzumaki, the new Dominant. I would just like to inform you that Hinata is my submissive now. And I don't like when third rate Dominants try to claim my sluts as their own. So please, fuck off. I will eventually be going with Hinata to pick up her things from your place. That is all, and please, don't call back." Hinata could clearly hear the next few words that were shouted from the other end
"WHO THE FUCK DO YOU THINK YOU ARE!? I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW THAT MY FAMILY COULD-"
"Yada yada yada, I've heard this spiel before. You guys with influential families come into these clubs, and expect everyone to just bend to your whims because you're rich. Well guess what, you have no influence inside of this club, no matter how much money you make. And I doubt you have enough reach to touch me and my business. Hinata's mine now, you're just gonna have to accept that." Naruto spat back.
There was a pause from the other end. But when Toneri spoke next, it was in his usual soft tone, but she couldn't hear him. But she figured that he hadn't given up so easily. Whatever he was saying to Naruto was mostly likely a threat.
"Yeah, yeah, do whatever you want. I'm not scared." Naruto shot back. And he hung up the phone without waiting for a response. "Tch, asshole."
Hinata could understand his anger. From the day he was born, Toneri was treated as a spoiled prince. Always getting everything that he wanted, without question. The fact that she denying him what he wanted was enough to enrage him. But then there was the added fact that she was leaving him, for another man. It most likely left I'm feeling insecure, and inadequate. And Naruto directly telling him that he was now Hinata's Dominant helped fuel his fire. Hinata knew that he would still continue to pursue her.
"Thank you." She mumbled, so elated that he so boldly proclaimed his claim on her.
"It's no problem, here." He handed her back his cell phone, but she denied it.
"Huh? Don't you need this to call your family and stuff?"
"No, I should be fine. As of right now, they should think that I'm still with Toneri. He would never admit to them that he left me alone, and then I went off with another guy." She told him, snuggling back up to his chest.
"Okay, good. Now we need to talk about us. Now, I know I want you as my new sub, but I can't collar you right now." He informed her, wrapping an arm around her.
Hinata's heart dropped. Really? Had she really just entered a relationship with a man just as flaky as Toneri?
"You see, I don't know enough about you to be able to properly take care of you, and please you. I don't know your hard limits, I don't know what you're okay with, I don't know what your favorite food is to give you after our sessions. How am I supposed to be a good Dom if I don't know all of this important information?" He asked her seriously.
"W-well, I didn't have any plans today, n-not that I can really move. I d-don't mind going over them with you." She said shyly. She was so relieved that he just wanted to be thorough when he was officially her Dominant.
"Great! And I can tell you all about what I like in the bedroom!" His tone was generally light, but the undertone was so dark, she had to bite her lip, and rub her thighs together in anticipation.
"Well first question, what are your hard limits? I never wanna hurt you, or do anything that would make you feel uncomfortable." He asked her.
"Well, I really don't like..." And Hinata went on to explain what she found to be a bit disturbing, or disgusting.
Neither of them really knew what the future would have in store for them, but they were excited. Naruto had a brand new sub, and Hinata, with her brand new Dominant.