Hey so this is the rewrite, All this will really be is the previous chapters edited to how I want them to be but I say that when in reality I will change more so I recommend just read it for purposes anyways.

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Tatsumi-

It was a hot summer day for most people even though a long time ago I stopped feeling temperature as much as I should. I had decided to take a walk and clear my mind seeing as though nothing can really touch me. Yeah i'm kinda confident but only because I know I can be. I've always been labeled as a prodigy even though my teacher says i'm crap at everything. I just have to keep training until i'm the best, probably a reference in there somewhere. My teacher(Kimiko) said we need to talk about something, I wonder if it's a new training regiment? Punching steel for days on end just isn't cutting it anymore. I went over to where my teacher was and waited for his response."Tatsumi...our village is in financial trouble and we need you to go to the capital to make money for us. The capital is responsible for this so we will make them pay for it, find a job even you could do and when we have enough come right back."

I was...surprised to say the least, after all I was never allowed to leave the village alone. I was never really sure why but i never questioned it since my teacher said in the first place i'm not allowed to leave the village without him. Even then it's only to hunt and occasionally we'll go to the river and bring some water back. I shoved all those thoughts away as he continued to speak. "I have decided that you will be allowed to you your weapon...I'm sure you know this but...you will need it for what you will be doing because I know for a fact you'll be in some type of fighting, dang kids." He said but mumbling the last bit.

After hearing all this I was even more bewildered than the first time. I was always under no circumstances allowed to use it when anything other than training is involved. I could feel a smile creeping up on my face, the thought of fighting for real with it exhilarated me. I knew I should be concerned about it but the thought of just fighting someone else other than my teacher was a nice thought. "We also will have you travel alone for this adventure."

1 Hour later

3rd person view-

Humph, what a way to go. Was all Kimiko thought before he died, you see the reason he gave for Tatsumi to leave was in reality...complete Bullshit. They had enough money for about 10 villages and had no reason to send him off. Well he had one reason and that was the only one he needed. Tatsumi had attracted attention he didn't even know about himself so the village had to pay certain people a large certain amount of money to get these people off of his back. Problem is some of them were just fight junkies and no amount of money would get rid of them.

So they usually let Tatsumi fight because but they knew his limits or at least the liked to think they knew them in some way. Because of this Tatsumi never lost but they knew this next would have died... is what they think would have happened but in reality he could have crushed this person under his boot like the rest so in reality, they all died for nothing. Is what you all currently think.

In reality this stopped him from starting a crusade against the forces of good with the single most deadly woman at the time on his arm. Sending the world in a endless war until his own son murdered him and his wife restoring peace before putting himself up for execution to get rid of the bloodline forever. Going as far as to kill all the woman he had been with personally and ending numerous powerful bloodlines.

After the danger beast king would have started another war against humanity but without their most powerful warrior they would all die or become slaves until he the king himself died of age. Since he had no successor all danger beast would murder all of humanity out of desire before finally killing each other for food, Hundreds of years would pass and the only remnants of life would be scarce plants which would die due to the asteroid heading toward the planet.

This history would never be seen because of the decision of the chief and the dedication of his villagers. The outcome of them sending Tatsumi of was arguably worse though, How stopping the world from ending was better that this can be answered in two ways, the simple facts or a story. But forget the story nobody has time for tha-what do you mean? Wait really? Alright nevermind we do have time...apparently. Now, how about we get on with it.

4 Days later

Akame-

It was supposed to be a simple job, find the danger beast and kill it. What they failed to mention to tell was that it was an invisible Ultra-class that had the speed that was almost on par with herself. I finally was able to take it down before I realized it got a sizeable cut on my stomach with it claws.

Tatsumi-

Huh? I swear I heard a thud or something like that a little ways away.I looked at the direction of the thud and decided to find out. Time to find out I guess...I kinda just thought that. I sprinted and it took me a couple seconds until i found a girl on the ground with a sheathed weapon next to her and proceeded to get distracted by her beauty and crash into a tree...then the next, and the next, and so on until I had cut down about 10 trees before realising what was happening. As I walked back to the girl I thought about why someone like her would be out here for. As I picked up the girl and the weapon I looked to the left of me and saw a cave. It'll have to do I guess. I walked over and set the girl down on some danger beasts pelts I…"found" earlier. I looked at her and saw she had a couple of cuts and bruises and then I realized she had a gash on her stomach. Well i'm gonna get slapped or something after this...or kissed one of the two. I lifted up her shirt and blushed a little, I then proceeded to clean her cuts and put some bandages and ointments on her bruises.

1 hour later

Akame-

I woke up on something soft and I felt much better compared to when I fainted. I suddenly realized there was someone in the corner of the cave sleeping mumbling in his sleep. "no….don't take my pancakes...I put too much syrup on them...please noooo….". I stared at him for a few second before I realized I wasn't wearing a shirt. He didn't touch me...he must have healed me. I noticed a few bandages on me and an especially large one on my stomach. I know this guy saved me but I think I have to kill him since we're too close to the base. I quickly put on my shirt and grabbed my sword pulling it out of it's sheath. I quickly slashed at him only to see his eyes quickly shot open and dodge where he ended up behind me. "Well don't you just have a fancy way of treating people who saved your life." All of a sudden i felt a hand on my neck and I couldn't move causing my body to fall to the floor. "W-why can't I move?"I asked. "I hit one of your pressure points causing you to go limp. Now that you're awake the torture can begin and i'm gonna get your friends next." He pulled out a knife and all I could think was how to get out of this or at least prevent my adopted family from being hurt. "No surprise it worked again but i'll give you props you were a little harder to read." I wondered what he meant by that. He put away the knife and picked me up bridal style along with my sword and started walking towards the base. "You're probably wondering how I know where you're friends are, It's simple really if you threaten someone a certain way they almost always look toward the direction of a loved one or friend." I widened my eyes realizing I vastly underestimated him. "What do you plan to do?" I asked. "I'm bringing you to your friends duh. What did you think I was gonna do kill them?" he asked. "..." was the only response I gave him for a few seconds. "You will most likely die so I advise you let me go and I will go alone." I said hoping he would leave. "Ah they can't be that bad after all...it's been awhile since i've gotten a good fight." As he said this I swore I could see him smirking.

10 minutes later

Akame-

"Man those wires are a crappy defense system if I was trying to not get caught those would have been so easy to get around it's just sad. You know i'm helping you guys so you can improv-. Oh, looks like were here." I slightly turned my head to see our base but just as I was becoming relieved I saw a shiny glimpse on the top of the base. TFFFFFT. Was all I heard as a laser bullet passed us. "Snap you guys got a sniper that's cool, I'm gonna have to see her after this but she's wearing so much pink how does she expect not to be seen?" How can see her? I myself can barely see her, just who is this guy. As he looked at the sniper I wondered how this is gonna go. He set me down and walked over a few yards. "HEY! I'M TRYING TO GIVE SOMETHING YOU GUYS LOST BACK!" I looked over and saw Bulat along with Shelee and Leone rush towards him with killer intent while at the same time having Mine fire shots from the top of the base.

Tatsumi-

4v1...well 5 including that guy rushing around me probably going to go pick up that chick. Let's have some fun...crap I can't kill them. Meh i'll settle for wounding them but only have it temporary. A guy in armor came at me trying to pierce me with a large spear which I grabbed and used to pull him closer using the momentum to bring him closer and kneeing him in the face effectively knocking him out and shattering his helmet in the process.

While the yellow haired chick stared in awe was a little more ballsy and immediately went in. While she lunged at me I slid under her and grabbed her ankle and lifting her into the air before throwing her into the ground creating a small crater and breaking a few bones and knocking her out rendering her immobile.

Just as I finished up I dodged a punch from behind and grabbed the fist effectively throwing the user in front of me several feet. Then lunging at her but immediately backing up nearly dodging a bullet from candy. I then sped in zigzag patterns at high speeds getting close to the yellow haired chick uppercutting her breaking her jaw in the process. I then threw a punch but realized she was more resistance to pain than I thought and met my punch...effectively shattering her hand and arm all the way up to her shoulder. Not being able to defend herself for a second I grabbed her and flipped her around a little before bringing her back onto my knee shattering her spine. The only reason I realized I could get away with doing this is because I realized she has a healing factor. Realizing there was still that guy trying to go get the chick I picked up the spear the feeling it's weight then immediately chucking it into the forest getting a scream and a thud from the guy. Well I didn't kill him that's a plus, must've hit him somewhere that apprehended his movements.

Dodging another bullet I remembered there was still the sniper and touched the armor making it a liquid type material running up my arm and then hardening to form a sniper rifle. Taking aim and shooting the sniper out of her hands and shooting her legs in the right spot so she couldn't use her legs but still make it possible for her to walk again with just removing the bullet and rest. Well that was easy. I looked around kinda sad as I had hoped for more. I looked back at the girl and realized she had slightly widened her eyes. "Did I go overboard?"

So yeah didn't change much except some scenes here and there, adding a couple scenes, some conversations but keep in mind everything I write has a purpose so do read carefully.