The Exiled God Rewrite

Author Notes: Hello, it has been sometimes since…well for me to make a rewrite for this story. But here I am with the revised version, I hope it is not that bad compared to the original one. Anyway I was hoping for someone to be a beta reader for this story…but without further ado let's get on with the chapter!

Summary: He gave life, and he brought upon death. He was the primordial that brought destruction and yet life around him. Yet he was betrayed, as the darkness consumed him; he left everything behind him. The savior of the world was brought into Tartarus by Kronos as the forgotten past returned. A new purpose was given; to either end or start anew Olympus.


Chapter 1:

The Light Pierced the Darkness

Disclaimer:

I do not own Naruto or Percy Jackson and Olympians. All rights belong to the respective owners of both shows.


Silence reigned the land.

The weather was hot above its normal degree, as the wind whistled through the barren land. There was no life except death itself with skeletons of sorts of living being scattering across the ground. The blond noted, the ground around him has cracks, the cracks led towards craters, ten meters wide and hundred meters deep from the surface, scattering across the ground like a fallen leaf as the sun blazing its radiating warmth light upon him.

A lone figure stood there. He has an appearance of a tall young man, and was covered in a long, tattered, black colored cloak clinging to his figure. Beneath it, he was wearing a battle armor, gold in term of color with silver plate protecting his chest, it has a symbol of the moon and the sun and beneath it was a white. Below the armory chest plate, he was wearing a battle pants with a little bit of armory protection and battle shoes and on the side of his hip was his black sheathed blade with a nine long swished of white symbol engraves on the handle.

Blue sapphire eyes, roamed around the area for a moment. Then he blinked, as he realized that it has been sometimes since he came out from his hiding. The world, back then was peaceful and everything was living in harmony.

But now he couldn't say the same.

A soft, weary sighed escaped from his lips. The tattered cloak he worn flapped harshly in the air, alongside the hood covering his head as the wind brushed through him. The man then started walking, ignoring the presence of something approaching him. The step he took, each of them causing the land to trembles, then just like a miracle, the barren waste land returned to life.

The craters around him, beneath below cracked as water broke through the dried land, filling them until the water reached the surface. The hot temperature dropped instantaneously as a cool wind breeze kissing his skin with a few droplets of water. The bright, clear and sunny day was darkened as the blackened clouds gathers around him, and then a few droplets of water raining down upon him making contact upon the land as the barren land became damp with trees soon spurting out of the ground, filling the land in different sizes.

A small smile graced on his face, but still continued walking. However the man was forced to halt his step, just in time went a lightning spear buried beneath the ground right in front of him. A scowled appeared on his face, but it disappeared as soon as it appeared.

"I finally found you!" A loud thunderous voice boomed from behind him. "The primordial god, Naruto!"

'Naruto', quirked an eyebrow, his head slightly tilted to the side, as blue sapphire met electrical blue. The clouds above them was blocking the light from the sun, as it started producing lightning, the lights illuminating their shadowing figure.

"Zeus." Naruto curtly nod. "It amazes me, a thick headed and a stubborn bastard like you able to find me."

Zeus could feel his eyebrow twitched, and his right unconsciously curled into a fist. A smirk appeared on Naruto face that seems to have a reaction from the dramatic, and stupid god. "I have some help…but with their helped I finally able to find the stone tablet you left for guidance, the one you bestowed upon to the humans of the south."

"Ah that…" Naruto chuckled as he then studied the god of lightning.

Zeus is very tall, imposing and has very muscular body, with long black shoulder-length hair and black neatly trimmed beard. He has brilliant electrically-blue eyes gazing back at his own without showing a little bit of fear, no, Naruto could see them quite clearly but the god did managed to hide them pretty well.

Zeus was wearing his own variety of Greek battle armor with the colored of gold came mixing with the silver bronze. He has his aegis behind him and the Master bold, clipped to his belt. The man itself was surrounded by a torrent, massive column of twisting lightning and fire.

The god of lightning stopped, inhaling and exhaling the air around him. The man could feel his heart throbbing, as the air and the presence radiating from Naruto suffocating him. Zeus opened his mouth, but no words comes out. Feeling embarrassed, instead of giving up he used his own lightning to strike him as his will returned to him.

Naruto stare, amusement filled his eyes as he watched the man struggling under his presence. "So…" He began, shifting his position to look at the man, faced to face as the wind gently brushing upon them causing the cloak to flapped, alongside the hood showing some more of his face to the god.

"What is it do you want?" Naruto finished with a small smile as Zeus did nothing but stared back.

Naruto was slightly shorter than him, but the size alone doesn't mean anything as he could feel the power resides within the primordial being. A lone sweat dropped, trailing down the side of his cheek as he took that few seconds to study the face of the primordial being standing across him. Aside from Naruto's blue eyes, he has tanned skin covered underneath his cloak and blond, spiky haired.

"I'm begging to help us, we're losing our ground, sooner than later I, no…we're going to…" Zeus trailed off as he froze, fear soon engraved his heart when he saw the glare the blond primordial being was giving him.

"Don't bring me into this mess. I never played a part with the war between the gods and the titans. Beside what makes you think I would accept you, even if you bowed down to me, I won't helped. The titans tried, and I would like to see you tried as well" Naruto snorted, without sparing another glance the blond resuming his walk.

Zeus in the background cried out to him, pleading for his helped. However the god's voice became deafened in his ears.

"Please…I'll give you anything, in request of your service!" Zeus exclaimed but that wasn't enough, not for Naruto. There's no reason for him to participate the war, he doesn't have a family here in Earth, and the only connection he has with is Gaia herself.

Beside after hearing the words left Zeus's mouth an old memories resurfaced of how the titans offered him a position in their stead.

He would've been their general, their second in command but instead of accepting their offered he turned them down and that enraged the two messenger. The battle happened in an instant and it ended just in five minutes; the two titans were defeated, their bodies turned into ashes as he stood there watching them scattering across the wind.

"I'm not a mercenary." The blond scoffed in the distanced as he send a gust of torrent whirlwind. "Get lost."

Zeus ignoring the cuts on his flesh and the blood dripping down from the open wound, before steams coming out of his skin as the wounds started healing itself. The god of lightning was staring back at the primordial in horror; to be precise of how quickly he was being turned down. The god knows he was running out of ideas and he knew that sooner than later he is going to lose this chance to have an ace card amongst them. And, Poseidon or Hades will be enraged of him for his failure and his stupid, damned pride and without doubted will make fun of his failure.

Which is something he is not looking forward.

The god of lightning could feel his frustration getting up to him, as the surge of anger rises within him. He was thinking really hard, the sweats heavily trailing down his cheeks indicates that he wanted the blond to aide them. Naruto is going to play a huge role here, he is the ace underneath their sleeve to help them in defeating the titans.

The war has been brewing so long as he could remember and the longer it takes, the more he realizes that they're losing this battle and if this keeps up he is afraid the earth will fall into shambles.

Only time will tell the aftermath of the war and Kronos is a very patient titan after all.

The god of lightning gulped, in this kind of situation he cannot resort to strength and power or give in with his emotion; that would bring an utter destruction for himself and beside he doesn't want to enrage a primordial being. In term of power, Naruto can easily annihilate him.

The god shook his head, as he quickly banishing the thought from his mind. He was confused to come up with a decision, until he did but that caused him to be embarrassed, as the man could his cheeks burned red. But then without a second thought, Zeus muster all the courage within him as the god of lightning dropped down to his knees before his forehead planted down the ground damp ground.

The lightning above them boomed, gaining the attention of Naruto as he brought his arm up to catch the lightning in between his fingertips before he released down to the ground creating a large hole beneath him.

The blond was of course not ignorance of what currently happening behind as he could see Zeus was on his knees, bowing down to him.

"I'm begging you to help us, no, rather the humanity! You're the creator of life, the father of all creations!"

The mentioned of humanity halted his step, a frowned soon appeared on his face as he looked back at the kneeling Zeus. The man was trembling as tears could be seen streaming down his eyes.

The blond mentally chuckled at the scene transpired in front of him. "You're so dramatic." Naruto laughed, as he rolled his eyes.

Zeus could feel the tick marks appearing at the back of his head. But instead of retorting, the black haired man ignored the blond.

That is until he heard the footsteps, closer, and closer as the blond primordial being approached him.

"Rise." Naruto ordered as Zeus nodded and rise from his kneeling position. The blond was now standing right in front of him, their eyes staring back at each other. The former softened as he gave a nod.

"Fine, I will participate the war. But I wanted something in returned…after all this is not my war; I need another reason; other than to save humanity. After all, I created the humankind"

Zeus pondered over it, he gave another hard thought with his brain for a moment since what Naruto said was accurate. He could after all just went over with this shit and destroyed the very core of Gaia herself. But from the stone he found, and how accurate the tablet was to the local people that was following him, knew the blond isn't that kind of person; he was the primordial that birth life after all.

It took Zeus for a while, and Naruto could see that he really did think his best; for the first time in life, Naruto admitted that Zeus could think with his brain instead of his dick as he saw the big smile adoring on the god's face.

"In returned, I'll give you my most treasure possession."

"That is?"

"My daughter Artemis."

Naruto blinked, he didn't expected that. He honestly would accept anything from Zeus in return since humanity is at stake here. But even so, he didn't expected to hear that coming out of his mouth. The man was after all too proud of himself and his family which includes his sons and daughters.

The blond thought over it for a while, he would most likely would love to get to know this Artemis. She was after all someone's very valuable to Zeus and knowing her origin perhaps it will also give him a reason to fight for them, to protect her from danger alike. But still in his eyes this could be seen as nothing but an act of kindness and caring towards the so called family; after all, the gods and titans are his child or rather his creation.

He was their creator; the origin of life here in earth herself.

But still, that doesn't mean he would turned down the offer.

"Very well. I'll accept you're offered."

Zeus nodded in happiness, he was glad to hear that.

The both of them stood alongside each other, head gazing up at the sky as the ground beneath them shaken violently for a couple of minutes. "So it has begun…" Zeus whispered underneath his breath with Naruto able to hear him. The primordial watched as the battle taking place at the distance land. Water colliding with flames and a torrent of winds surrounding it. Zeus smirked in returned, as he could feel the excitement in his vein; the titans won't know what will come after them.

As the rain stopped, the sun light made its way through the clouds, piercing right through them as its light bestowed upon the two standing on the ground.

It seems, the storm is finally going to passed them, caused starting from this day, it could be seen as a changing point; the tides is finally being turned.

"Let's go then."

"Yeah."


Author Note: This sums up the first chapter! I hope everyone liked the rewritten version. If the grammar displeased you, I was hoping instead of flaming you would give me some helps and if someone out there wanted to helped me and be my beta-reader I would gladly accepted you! Once again thank you for your support; this chapter is out sooner than I thought. It was supposed to be two weeks from now. Lol, but I decided to go against it since I'm afraid, I'll probably have the final exams.

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