I repeat, I am Not good at describing places or environments, so can I get some tips on that?

I also placed some OC's in this Chapter, because it was kind of strange to write down "And girl1 heavily protested" while you can just put down a simple name... I dont know if it'll be lasting OC's, but I don't think they'll meet Ruko-chan again later in the story... Besides Luna ofcourse (...)

I won't use '- no Jutsu' or '- technique', I'll just write it with an '#-'.

The temporary OC's are here:

1. Andrea, was the bravest of the group. She was an really pretty, though slightly tomboyish, girl with an black bowl cut till just above her ears and pretty dark blue eyes, which would be a similar color as the night sky she sometimes liked to watch. (6 years old)

2. Then there was Daiki, the largest of the group. An boy withsilver-grey eyes and short, messy brown hair with a few green highlights on the tips from the 'girls want highlights in their hair, but aren't sure it will look good, so they tested it on Daiki'-incident. Though Daiki was a larger and older, he was the more silent type. The kind of person who is there when you need him, but doesn't talk unless he thinks it's needed. (6,5 years old)

3. Akira is the smartest of the group. She had shoulder long light blonde hair, most of the time in an ponytail, almost like the Yamanaka's and pink almost red eyes. She walks around like she owns the place, but is in reality extremely shy with new people and quickly afraid she has done something wrong. (4,5 years old)

4. Let's not forget Hibiki, she's mostly a girl who supported the person she admired the most, which in this case would be Andrea. She was like an faithful dog, following the most dominant one of the group, her 'boss'. With her sandy-blonde hair and moss-green eyeswith her ever present purple glasses. (4 years old)

5. Koji was a small boy, the youngest of the group. He probably only comes with the group to keep the mischief as less as possible. He is such a sweet boy. He had a long purple hair in a loose ponytail to his upper back and he had the most beautiful amber eyes, which seem to be golden sometimes when he is happy or is standing in the sunlight. (4 years old)

6. And Luna..Long hair white as the moon, violet eyes like the dawn. She is a really enthusiastic, innocent and at the same time mischievous kid with an happy-go-lucky attitude. She absolutely loves pranking her caretakers and 'taking revenge' on nasty people. She is heavily against any form of bullying or being mean. (4,5 years old)

He meets Luna later on

DISCLAIMER

I don't own Naruto (the anime and manga, including all canon characters) because that's all Masashi Kishimoto's work.

Completed 26 April 2017

Don't think of yourself as an ugly person, think of yourself as a beautiful monkey ~ Unknown

Chapter 2

Gandalf's horror & An Friend's value

~ Orphanage in Konohagakure no Sato ~

~ 4 years after the Kyuubi attack ~

'Gandalf the Grey', that was what he was called by the children. Oh he loved the children so much, yes, yes. He loved to play and take care of them, but sometimes. Sometimes he was reminded that children, how innocent they may seem, can also be the most cruel beings on this earth. Not any tailed beast, not a annoyed wife finding her husband late from work again, could match their cruelty. No, and this was just another example of that argument to sad fully support this statement.

Children always were straight forward and honest till they have come to a certain age, which meant when little Akira somehow changed from an nice sweet girl he knew, to an leader and brain of a small group whom bullied little Naruto-kun by calling him names.

He was upset.. and terribly disappointed in her, no them, when he saw it happen. It seemed like it wasn't the first time either by how confident Akira, Andrea and Hibiki looked while they talked about 'the loser' and what they did to him. The boys who they always played with weren't there either, which meant they either didn't know about the girls' activities or they gave up on trying to stop them and concluded they didn't want to be involved in any kind of way. He didn't like either option.

He took the little group apart and invited them to his study room for some privacy to talk. He saw from the corner of his eyes that the boys, Daiki and Koji, quietly joined the group for support.

After he closed the door behind them, he walked to his wooden desk and slightly leaned against it. Taking a deep breath to calm his inner turmoil of emotions he asked with an as calm and patient voice possible on the moment. "Akira-chan, why did you call Naruto-kun names? Don't you remember what I taught everyone? Your words can hurt really much and you said some awful things just now."

Akira slightly flinched at his disappointed and reprimanding tone, but looked determined to justify herself in front of her peers. She after all was considered the smartest of the group, even though she was blond. Besides, she had her friends with her, even the boys joined in for support. She wouldn't let their efforts be in vain, Believe it!

"But Gandalf-san, Giichi-san and some others said that he is a monster and we shouldn't as.. assi.. assasiotee.. " The little girl frowned slightly, the word was on the tip of her tongue, she just knew it!

While she was busy trying to find the right word, Gandalf's brain went in overdrive. 'Giichi said that?' He thought fully confused. It wasn't only inappropriate to talk badly about an specific child in front of other children, Gandalf had expected Giichi to be less narrow minded, being an retired shinobi after all. He was broken from his musings when Akira continued her excuse for badmouthing and bullying an fellow orphan.

"Associate with him, he would have a really bad effect on our behavior." A proud look was on her face, because she had put several really difficult words in an good sentence. She fully believed that Gandalf would understand why she had called Naruto names, like 'Demon', 'monster' and the sorts. After all, their caretakers were the ones who called the boy those words in the first place and their caretakers should be right! .. right? .. Though she still didn't really understand what an so called 'demon' was supposed to mean. She guessed it was something evil as the caretakers always said that with absolute 'lemon-faces'.

But Gandalf's face didn't look proud, oh no, he was absolutely terrifying with that angry expression on his face. Akira hid behind an head taller boy called Daiki and nudged her best friend, Andrea forward to do the rest of the talking. After all, she reasoned with herself, Andrea is the bravest of the group and she already had said her part of the story. She was absolutely not hiding behind Daiki, believe it! Daiki is just the strongest of them all.

"Who else called Naruto-kun something bad?" Gandalf said in an dangerously low voice. The temperature seemed to hit rock-bottom as Gandalf spoke the words. The lights flickered off and then on again, creating an awful scary mood in the room. Gandalf suddenly noticed the terrified expressions on the children's faces and realized he had unconsciously released some killer intent. He immediately dropped it, as his features softened in slight regret at scaring the group so much.

"I'm not angry at you," He spoke softly, sincerely. They let out sighs of relieve. To make sure his point across without letting them off the hook he continued. "but I'm disappointed you would actually accuse a fellow person of being an evil 'Monster', while you can clearly see he is just like us. He's got arms, legs, eyes, ears, and most important of all..." He let a small silence fall to make sure they would remember it. "He has emotions. Demons and monsters don't have any emotions, they are like evil and smarter beasts trying to destroy everything on their way."

Gandalf let another silence fall. The girls shifted guiltily and with great unease on their feet as he let his gaze fall on everyone in the group respectively. "Did anyone here see Naruto-kun trying to destroy everything in his path? Or did nobody ever see Naruto-kun cry or laugh? After all, monsters don't laugh or cry as they don't have any feelings, correct?" Their heads just lowered further in guilt.

"B-But why would.." Koji trailed off uncertainly, before his big, warm amber eyes steeled themselves for what he was going to ask. "But why would almost everyone call him an monster when you tell us he isn't?" Koji had spoken with crystal-clear voice, though you could hear his confusion and frustration on the matter. The rest of the group stayed silent, but send curious gazes as well.

Gandalf had a problem, that much was obvious.

First of all, he couldn't fire all the caretakers working here, he also didn't want to ask another favor of Hiruzen. 'What to do, what to do...' as he slowly tapped his fingers against the table. Secondly he also needed to tell these kids of the caretakers' reasoning, without breaking the law. 'Oh well.. First things first', wasn't one of his favorite motto's for nothing.

"The caretakers blame Naruto-kun for something completely out of his control." He began, as he stood in an very teacher-like stance. He pondered for an moment of how to slightly change his explanation for the children to understand.

"For example. If you were born a Princess of an far away country, or the oldest son of an important ruler like the Daimyo. You would have gotten all kinds of lessons on how to rule kingdom, correct?" The kids were all enthusiastic with the idea and nodded vigorously. "But if you were born in an civilian family and your parents would own an clothing shop..." Gandalf slightly trailed off to give the group an chance to think up an logical conclusion. "And how can that be connected to Naruto-kun's situation?

A look of dawning came on Akira's facial expression, while the others were still scrunching up their face in thought. "Well? What has this to do with the hate from the old hags?" Andrea finally asked, giving up the hard thinking. After all, why breaking her brain when you could just ask. "Akira, would you like to explain to your friends?" Gandalf directed Akira's leadership and intelligence from bullying, because the nuns do, to thinking on her own and react accordingly.

Akira was slightly startled at the question, she looked down in reaction and had to fight her habit to bite her lip. "Well.." She began, not really sure where to begin with explain. Especially when she wasn't sure she was right. When she shyly looked up again, she saw the expectant expressions on her friends' faces and she steeled herself. "In what position and where you get born is something out of our control. I think Gandalf-san wants to tell us it is the same with Naruto-kun's situation."

This time Gandalf looked proud of her. With a soft smile he spoke his approval, "If you didn't have that blonde hair and wasn't so determined, I would have mistaken you for an Nara." Akira blushed at the complement and ignored Andrea's jealous scowl. "I knew that, I just wanted to test you guys," Andrea spat out.

Gandalf ignored the jealousy for more important things, like making sure to know which nuns he should keep an eye on. "Who were the nuns who called Naruto-kun an demon?" He asked, while he walked around the desk to sit down and note down all the guilty people. Andrea answered quickly, hoping on a complement as well, "Almost everyone, they mostly call him names when you aren't there, I've also seen the nuns give him punishment when.. " She face had an horrified expression as she slowly trailed off. "Oh my Log! They never got him out, I haven't seen him since yesterday"

Gandalf had a really bad feeling when Andrea ran off with those words. He quickly jumped in action, shinobi instincts kicking in, following the direction she ran in. He idly noticed that the rest followed him as he ran through the halls, breaking his own rules. The kids almost bumped into him when he suddenly stopped in front of locker, with Andrea waiting.

"The nuns put him in here, Gandalf-san! He wasn't there with supper yesterday, neither was he there with breakfast. I thought he just ate earlier or later to do the chores in here.." Andrea confirmed his nightmare of being true, as he had left earlier yesterday and trusted the nuns to take care of the rest. And today he was supposed to be taking an day off, but he didn't have anything better to do, so eventually came anyway. It was an cruel kind of good luck that he had heard the group talking.

Gandalf pulled out a ring with keys and picked a small, blue one with practiced ease and opened the locker. He shooed the children a little bit back to give Naruto breathing room. "Naruto-kun?" The little boy was sitting in the fetal pose and his head down, red strands stood out in between his blonde hair. 'Definitely blood' Gandalf was shocked when Naruto slightly lifted his head. Though not a single physical wound could be seen, his eyes.. they were so extremely empty. Empty of all emotions, seemingly tuning everything and everyone out. Pushing back his anger at the nuns, he carefully took the boys feet and dragging him out a little till he could reach the shoulders.

As he gently set Naruto down on the ground, pushing him slightly so he leaned against the wall and nudged the little blonde. "Everything will be alright now, I'm here and I'll make sure such a terrible thing won't ever happen again, I promise. And I never break my promises!"

Gandalf the Grey, was going to make sure this would Never happen again. Not on his watch.

~5 years after the Kyuubi attack~

Uzumaki Naruto decided that he absolutely hated doing chores. Chores in itself weren't too bad. No it was the fact he had to do it every single 140 hours per week -with 4 hours per day to sleep and have 5 small breaks of 10 minutes to eat and rest. For the last twenty fiveweeks.

It's been about 5 to 6 months the old nice man Grey had been fired of the orphanage. Retr... Retire..ment.. Retirement was what they called it. Gandalf was indeed an old man and he definitely deserved his rest, Naruto decided. But why did he have to leave completely?

Gandalf had been the only person who actually gave the boy genuine smiles and he didn't call him names like "Demon spawn" and "Monster". His small group of friends gave him real smiles as well of course, but they were adopted one by one, till he was the only one left, together with Gandalf-san.

He really owns the man his life and happiness. After the locker incident, everything went uphill. Instead of his self-taught talking and reading, he finally learned how to do it properly. From etiquettes and making tea (He was forced to learn it because of the girls, "Incase one of us is some lost Royalty, we must know how to behave") to playing tag.

Yes, he owned his very being to the old man Grey, very unlike the nuns of course. They sent him looks full of hate, 'forgot' to feed him, or even set him apart for doing nothing wrong. Or they just ignored him. He couldn't decide what hurt him more, the hateful gazes or the cold shoulder many gave him. But it became bearable with his new friends and with the support from the head of the orphanage, not a single nun tried something funny.

That all changed when Gandalf retired. What he knew, maybe instinctively, was when Gandalf closed the door behind him for the very last time, he was screwed. Screwed multiplied by an hundre- no Thousand times! The predatory gaze from the new head of the orphanage was the first hint at that. He had met the new nun before and she seemed really nice actually, giving him candy and toys to play with. But as Naruto looked back at it all, it was just a play, to fool him and Gandalf.

The said retired man, settled down in a place, somewhere far into the Konoha forest. At least, that's the last thing he heard about his whereabouts. Afterwards he was dumped into the 'turn into a good boy' schedule, which he translated into 'turn into a slave' torture.

He sighed more heavily. And got back to work, after all. He wasn't one to give up and neither did he want to show what the working did to him. Though he absolutely hated cores and made everything ache when he turned to bed, it also made him stronger than an average boy. Gandalf was a ninja. A really strong one, as people always looked up at him. He had survived the 3th Shinobi war and had told many heroic story's to him and his friends, though he also did warn the children that life as a Shinobi (male ninja) was rough. Even more for a Kunoichi (female ninja) as she would have to use her body in the more 'diplomatic and information gathering' ways.

But Naruto was a really determined boy. He wanted to be strong so he could be a ninja, if he was a ninja those nuns would have to look up to him. He would be stronger and better after all. He let a small smile slip as he worked even harder and faster at his chores.

When he was strong enough he would leave this place, there was nothing of value left here after all. Everyone he cared for was gone and he could take the few things he valued with him. A grandiose idea if he said so himself.

~Half a year later~

~On the streets of Konoha and in its Sewers~

A brown haired teenaged boy was walking through the streets, he was nothing special. With civilian clothing and average posture, not particular handsome nor ugly. The perfect disguise for Uzumaki Naruto to go grocery shopping. Naruto already found out that the nuns didn't seem to be the only ones who held a grudge against him. He had gotten 6 marks on his face for that innocent thought. 3 marks for each cheek, a birthday present from an drunk. It had hurt like hell and somehow, the scars had stayed.

Which would be a logical thing for any other child, but at the same time a really strange thing for Uzumaki Naruto as he never 'scarred'. He had gotten a lot of beatings from the nuns, which more than once also included sharp and pointy things. He had never gotten an single scar. But back to the present.

The boy was currently strolling from the direction of the ninja academy, not that it had to say something as the street had enough turns for the boy to have come from another place. But Naruto actually had visited the ninja academy, just like every other day since he found out it was a huge source of information to get stronger. The Henge he wore was, was proof of it. He could use chakra and with that #Henge and #Kawarimi, two of the basic jutsu's you had to know as academy-graduate. Hell.. he even knew some Taijutsu kata's.

He couldn't get the #Bunshin right though. The #Transformation technique was pretty useful to shop safe around civilians and the #replacement technique was useful when a drunk tried to grab him.. or when he wanted to get somewhere practically undetected. Yes undetected, he had trained the techniques so much that he now could replace himself with air, his current maximum distance was up to about a mile or two. Too bad his minimum distance without overloading the technique was half a mile.

Wait.. maybe that was his problem! If he overloaded the #Kawarimi then he'd just get an awful lot of smoke, but if he overloaded the Bunshin... I have to try this out today. His stomach growled seemingly in protest. after I have eaten something. Where shall I go to eat. As he was planning the rest of his day, he shouldn't waste valuable time after all he continued walking with an almost lazy Nara-like slouch to the market for some food, a girl almost ran into him. Well.. She did run into him, but he could've dodged if he hadn't been so deep in his thoughts.

The girl and boy came on the ground at the same time with an "Oef!" Naruto quickly stood up and held out his hand for the girl to grab. "Sorry, I wasn't looking at where I was going." He apologized. "My name is Maki, and yours if I may ask?" He asked the white haired girl in serene curiosity. He used the name he had come up with weeks ago, because 'Naruto' gave too much away and so did the 'Uzu' part. So he simply cut it away and called himself Maki in public

"Luna is the name. Nice to meet'cha!" She said with a huge, bright smile on her face. "Where was a beautiful young lady like you going, in such a hurry? In the early morning none the less." 'Maki' asked the girl almost accusingly with a friendly, teasing expression on his face. She only giggled at his antics and outright laughed at the faux-scowl. "I was heading for ramen. It's the Log's food, I tell ya! Sent straight out of heaven!" She beamed at him so broad that her violet eyes were almost hidden.

"Would you care if I'd join you?" Seeing her questioning expression, he hastily added, "Today I normally meet up to eat with my friends, but they were busy so I was about to go take some quick food, before I would go home." A lie of course, but she didn't have to know that. She nodded with understanding.

"By the way, what is ramen?" It was absolutely wrong question to ask in front of her, Naruto saw it immediately as her face scrunched up in horror and a fierce glint fell over her eyes. Before the boy could blink he was dragged by his arm at almost ninja-speed to who-knows-where and when he realized that, a grin appeared on his face as he began to run beside her. After all, he'd preferred to not look like a ragdoll being dragged away.

"Ichiraku Ramen" He read out loud from the flaps. "One's comfort/relief noodles? You sure this is the right place and not some spa or something?" He got pushed inside, so he took that as a 'yes, this is the right place'. Inside there was a typical family restaurant, with a long, straight table in front of him with high barstools. The decoration was cozy with a few posters to add. Choosing a chair slightly out of sight he sat down and patted the seat next to him for Luna.

"Heya! Oji-san! Get me some Miso and Konkotsu ramen please." That Luna's greeting was boisterous and loud was actually quite an understatement. "Old man? Chicken and pork at the same time?" Naruto didn't follow her. 'Maybe it's her family and she ordered for me at the same time..' Luna sat down next to him, eyes sparkling in the thought of Ramen.

"Well..?" She looked up at him expectantly. "Well what?" Shot Naruto back. Her violet eyes shot up in a familiar 'what-you-don't-know-are-you-stupid' kind of way. Naruto didn't like that look. As she looked back at him she sighed. "Aren't you going to order something?" She asked flatly "I thought you were hungry?" He looked back at her with a strange look in his chocolate-brown eyes, "You mean when you ordered chicken and pork, you were only ordering for yourself..." It was more a statement than a question.

"Of course! Ramen is the best, why wouldn't I order at least two bowls?" Naruto only laughed and scratched the back of his head in slight embarrassment. "I'll take a Miso as well." He called over the counter to an old man with short grey hair and a white little hat on.

As they waited for the ramen to be ready they talked about a lot of things getting acquainted to each other. He learned that she was the only child in an small civilian family. Her mother was bedridden with an particular sickness and father was always gone traveling to keep their little clothing shop up-to-date.. and to be able to pay the medicines for her mother. She had many hobby's... He didn't even remember half of it, but guessed it was only logical with her father always traveling around and buying little things to bring back home. Her family originally came from the Hidden in Sand village, but as said before they traveled.. A lot.

When food was served, "Lady's first", he was happy he had waited with offering to pay for her too. Gentleman or not, he was not going to give out all of his money, because a self-made-rule. The counter was filled with empty bowls, before Naruto could even break his chopsticks. Though he definitely liked that about her, she wasn't shy to eat because she was dieting -starving- herself.

But his conclusion of this all was. Luna gets enough payed to afford her stomach, ramen is indeed delicious and he liked to meet Luna again, only in his real form.

And so. After a month of meeting each other, he reveal himself to Luna and told her his real name, he even explained the reason of why he hid his identity in the first place -under Luna bribing him-. But the only thing he hadn't told her was where he lived, but after that was all settled and done. They were best friend afterwards. They met many times and after some convincing from Luna's side, he began openly meeting her in his own body.

~ Small time skip (few month's) ~

A small child comfortably strolled through Konoha's sewers. The kid couldn't be any older than 5, maybe 6, but he walked around like he owned the place. Maybe he did, but nobody was there to see him and to judge. The child had short, untamed, blonde hair and big, expressive cerulean eyes and an slightly tanned skin. Naruto and Luna had just separated and while Naruto had insisted to walk her home, she had just shrugged him off. ("I'm not a princess, you don't need to escort me home, Uzumaki-dono" She had said teasing him, before she waved and they both turned around to go home.)

Naruto had advanced in leaps and bounds with his shinobi-skills, he could now make more than 10 miles with his #Kawarimi and he had managed to get his #Henge solid. It had been an big pain in the ass to come up with it, but it was definitely worth it! This way he could even fool the retired ninja in the weapon shop, he could finally practice with real sharpened weapons to throw, instead of the old ones he had picked up in the Genin trainingfields. He smiled at the thought as he pushed a door to his home. He also managed to make Bunshin, though the smallest amount of healthy, good-lookingBunshin still was 15 Bunshin. A big improvement from the 90 from a few months ago.

Inside was a old room. On the right side stood a huge and broad cabinet filled to the brim with all kinds of scrolls. The left side was obviously the 'weapon department', filled with kunai, senbon, training dummies, even some flash-tags and explosive-tags from the survival grounds. In front of him was an self-made desk, also made from wood, -which he could use as an bed if he added some blankets- with an chair. He even had an small mirror on the wall next to the door.

It wasn't an particular big place, but that wasn't really needed for an 5 year old Naruto. The place was more than satisfying for the young blond. He still remembered how he one faithful was thrown into the sewers after another heavy beating. He had been unconscious and when he woke up, he didn't know where he was, so he had gone to discover this strange place.

When he had stumbled on an seemingly old maintenance room, he had decided that this would be his hide-out. After all, no one was going to look for an 'demon' in the dirty smelling sewers and the room didn't look like it was used in years. After dusting up the room and throwing out things that weren't useful anymore. He was left with an beautiful home. A week after he had found his home, he began spying on the academy and taking scrolls with him from the 'garish' to his hide-out. He met Luna a month after that.

To say the least Naruto was proud with himself. As he grabbed one scroll he'd found nearby the Hyuuga compound and began reading about the theory on chakra pathways and how to use it to paralyze an body. Which meant.. Muchtheory about anatomy.

Naruto woke up early in the morning, after studying late into the evening from several scrolls. He ran in his underwear to an river to quickly freshen himself up and clothed himself in his blue short-sleeved shirt and grey pants. Rushing towards the ninja academy to not miss any new information, he grapped an apple from the market and Henged into the brown-haired Maki.

The gates were in sight, but he went to an large tree instead, just like the other times. Jumping into the tree and climbing to the second floor with the academy graduates. He was just in time to see Iruka, the sensei from the last two years, walking into the room. Using the Big-head technique and an good placed shout get everyone in their seats and tightlipped, he placed down a few papers and began his lecture.

While Naruto may think he was well hidden, Iruka wasn't an Chuunin for nothing. He could sense the boy, though he didn't recognize him. Iruka knew that there was an extra teenager who attended the classes. The mysterious boy always was just in time for the lecture, but was gone when it was time for the Taijutsu portion. While Iruka was really curious about him and had already tried to catch him, his attempts were always in vain, as the boy left every time to Log-knows-where.

So Iruka decided to just help him in his work as he always had the windows open and lectured with an slightly louder voice than normal. The brown haired teacher was happy to know at least one person was listening to his lectures, as he looked around the class. He was an mystery indeed.

"And this way the First Hokage ended the Great Shinobi War" Iruka ended his lecture. Just in time too as the bell rang signaling a small break before the Taijutsu fights. The boy was gone the moment the bell rang.

After Iruka-sensei's lecture came to an end. He continued his daily routine, which meant going to unoccupied training grounds to collect new shuriken, kunai and if he was lucky, some senbon and tags. And then meeting up with Luna by the fountain eating together -probably ramen- and sparring afterwards.

He is currently waiting for Luna to show up. He is growing concerned as she was already half an hour late and normally she is never that late. He will wait just another 15 minutes to be sure, before going to her home to search. 'Maybe she forgot the time' he mused. After waiting the longest 15 minutes in his life, he was almost flying towards Luna's house. He'd been there before, sometimes to pick her up and other times to bring her home. Though hasn't met her parents yet.

Gently knocking on the door, he called out. "Luna are you there?" He was growing more worried with the minute, as the door slowly opened and revealed an empty and dark hallway. Getting an eerie feeling he hastily checked the house, nobody was in the kitchen, neither in the bedrooms or the living room. Everything was completely silent, empty and deserted. Luna, she is gone' He covered his face with his hands and slit down an wall. 'Luna, my only friend is gone' Naruto suddenly stood up and ran onto the streets. 'She can't be completely gone out of Konoha, there is no way she would just leave without an word. We are best friend after all!'

To be continued

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