Yeah I know I'm taking too long, I've been preoccupied with other things. And after finishing the chapters, I read through them, and I still find them a bit messy, and a couple of people have said that already. And also with the release of The Rise of Skywalker and the last season of Star Wars Resistance (I need to watch more of the latter, I'm way behind) I think it will give me a better idea on how write this. I'm just going to wait to see how Rise of Skywalker goes before I go back to this writing this.
In the meantime, I'm going to have to redo the chapters again. Hopefully by then I'll be satisfied with all of this.
Also fyi, when I first started writing this, I was basically making all of this up as I go, and I didn't have a plan whatsoever, just a basic idea. But now I have been thinking more on what to do, it's looking good.
Thank you all for the support and understanding.
Sincerely,
Thunderstrike16
P.S: If you want an interesting story about Rey, look up 'A Fateful Thread' by Shakespeare's Lemonade. I won't reveal the plot details, so you have to read to find out.