Alright SO this has been sitting in my brain for a while now. I'm sorry if it's not to your liking but I hope you will give it a chance.
Thanks!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or anything else that I make reference to in this story.
Because it sounds fun!
Ch1
"BOOOOORING!" a voice rang out over a vast white area. We zone in on a person sitting on the floor, more like they were floating in mid-air, with a T.V in front of them.
The person was in fact a little girl with snow white hair that hung down past her butt, if she stood up. The girl's attire was a white loose fitting yukata with flower designs printed on it.
The little girl was pouting at the T.V screen, which displayed a blond boy wearing orange running away from older men, who all wore the same outfit with some having a few differences.
"This is so boring!" she whined again, her gold eyes glaring at the screen as if she wanted to set it alight "It's all the same and nothing changes!"
"Every day I try to change one little thing and it ends up the same" the girl stood up and proceeded to stomp her foot on the ground repeatedly "seriously! What will it take for this story to get better!" she grabbed her white locks and pulled on it.
"He's just so adaptable to whatever I throw at him. I make his parents live, I take away his village, I give him bloodlines. I've tried everything and it all ends up the same!" the girl kicked the T.V, which wobbled then stood still again as if it wasn't even touched "What must I do to make this more interesting? I've run out of ideas to try. It's one thing after the other and he just shrugs it off as if I wasn't trying"
The girl stopped stomping her foot after she came to a realization.
"Wait a minute…" she gripped her chin with her thumb and index finger "I've tried one thing at a time…soooo…why not try them all at the same time?" an evil smirk graced her delicate face.
Snapping her fingers the girl made a key board and mouse appear. Grabbing the mouse the girl proceeded to click away on the screen that only she could see. Through her eyes we see the white haired girl clicked on a folder labelled:
Naruto
"I think I lost them" panted one Naruto Uzumaki as he hid behind a dumpster. He had paint stains all over his outfit: which was an orange jacket, which was tied around his waist; a black shirt with an orange swirl in the middle; an orange pair of pants and to top off his outfit he had a pair of green goggles on his head.
"Suckers" the boy said in triumph, getting up and walking out of the alley he hid in, as he turned the corner and bumped head first into someone.
"I'm sorry. What was that?" Naruto looked up fearfully to see his homeroom teacher glaring at him, one of disappointment.
"I-Iruka-sensei!" the blond said in shock as the man reached down and picked the boy up by his sleeve.
"You've done it now Naruto" the man said pointing at the Hokage monument, that had graffiti all over it "How could you go and deface the Hokage monument like that?!"
"Because it sounds fun" Naruto mumbled loud enough for Iruka to hear. Said man was about to blow his top, and Naruto was waiting for that.
However it never came.
Looking up, from hanging his head in shame, Naruto saw that Iruka was frozen in mid-speech mode, which shocked our blond protagonist. The boy then proceeded to look around him to see if anybody else noticed this and saw that everybody else was frozen as well.
"I-Is this some kind of joke? Because I'm not laughing!" Naruto yelled out but no one reacted.
"It's not a joke" the boy looked beside him to see a white haired girl standing there with a loose fitting white yukata on. The girl grinned up at him and placed her hands on her hips "it's all my doing"
"…riiiiiiiight…" said Naruto rolling his eyes "I don't know what happened here kid and I'm not about to believe that a little girl did all this"
"LITTLE GIRL?!" the girl screamed in shock, making Naruto step back in surprise as the girl was now panting from that shout "I'll have you know that I'm at least 50 times your age"
Naruto stared at the girl in shock and disbelief. However the disbelief vanished when he realised that the girl and him were the only ones moving at the moment, so that meant that she had some sort of bloodline or something.
"I don't have a bloodline" the girl said shocking the boy more.
'How did-'
"Know what you just thought?" the girl was now smirking at the boy.
"Okay stop that, it's creepy" said Naruto with a sweat drop "your…strange powers aside. Why are you here?"
"Ah! Yes" the girl hit her open palm with her fist "I almost forgot. Well you see where I come from there are many, as you would call them, Gods" she pointed up towards the sky making Naruto look up "when we were, for lack of better words created, we have to choose which Universe to watch over. I chose this one because I thought it would be cool" she glared at Naruto "it was the worst decision of my life"
"Why are you glaring at ME?!" yelled Naruto glaring right back at her.
"Because YOU are the main character of this universe" that threw the blond for a loop.
"Me?"
"Yes you" the little girl sighed "in this world you are someone who will change the world using a burden that has been placed on you by someone close to you" the girl shrugged "well that's what's in the script anyway"
"Hold it!" Naruto grabbed the white haired girl's shoulders "what do you mean a burden placed on me?"
"That? We'll get to that" the girl hit the boy's hands off her shoulders "right now I'm going to explain what I expect of you, or else"
Putting his questions on hold for the moment Naruto looked at her in confusion "or else what?"
"Or else I'll destroy this whole universe that's what" she said it with such an innocent face. The blond boy in front of her fell onto his butt with a horror filled look on his face.
"Wha-What?! You can't do that!" he screamed defiantly. The girl shrugged her shoulders.
"I can and I will" she crouched down so she could look Naruto in the eyes. The blond boy saw a flash of pink and looked down. Apparently the God currently crouched in front of him had let her yukata open a bit for the blond to see her pink panties, that had a teddy bear on it.
Turning his head to the side Naruto contemplated if it was wrong to do this, because honestly this little girl said she was 50 times his age.
'Is it wrong to enjoy this view? I mean she is older than me…way older, but she has the body of a 10 year old girl! I'm so confused' he was so confused at the moment.
"Now listen here boy I've created, broken down, changed, heck I've once talked one of my friends into merging our two universes together" she got in his face with a evil look "so you better believe me when I say that I will destroy this world with nothing more than a snap of my fingers"
Naruto gulped. If she was telling the truth then he didn't want to test her patience.
"Now for the reason I decided to meet you face to face" the little goddess straddled him making the boy gulp and lean way, as well as tries not to let certain things become apparent.
"You see, the original script said that you're an orphan who has a burden placed you from birth" there it was again, Naruto wanted to say something but the little girl moved a bit making him shut up. He felt his member harden some more and prayed that the girl would get off.
Whether she felt it or not, the girl didn't show any visual reaction "you eventually become a ninja and go through many trails that will shape your choices in the future. I know your dream is to become and I have to tell you, you are very persistent for a brat" that just didn't look right coming from someone who looked younger than him, but Naruto again wasn't going to say anything.
Or that could because the girl was rocking back and forth making the boy grit his teeth.
"Every time I do something hoping to change your future you always end up making it all end up the same way" a frown found its self on her face. Now she was rocking faster, making our blond protagonist make fists in the dirt.
"I take away things, you bring them back. Someone close to you dies, you get more pumped. I make you leave, you come back. I throw a strong foe at you; you always somehow beat them without turning away from what you want. And don't even get me started on that Hinata chick!" by now the girl was moving furiously on the blond boy who was half paying attention and the other half was raging a war to either enjoy or try to resist.
"SO!" the girl stopped abruptly and got up, that made Naruto whine softly "I've decided: If I doing one thing to your Universe won't change you. Then I'll just have to do add more!" she smirked down at Naruto and placed her bare foot on the tent in his pants, making the boy jump in surprise.
"So here's the deal" the girl proceeded to rub her foot up and down. This made Naruto's arms give out and he fell back with a huge blush on his face well he panted "I'll reshape this world, don't worry you won't feel a thing. There will be many things that will be added and if you're smart enough you will see that they all have the same function. My amusement" the girl smirked at Naruto, who was trying really hard to pay attention at the moment.
"So please…amuse me" the girl took her foot back, making the boy growl unconsciously. This only made the goddess laugh and stand over his face. Naruto blinked in surprise when it got dark.
When there was light, he had a perfectly clear view of the girl's pink panties, which were wet and it wasn't urine. A droplet made its way down her leg and travelled down towards the curious blond. When it was at her ankle it stopped and glistened.
Curiosity getting the better of him, Naruto turned his head and stuck his tongue out. He touched the droplet with his tongue.
It was in this instant that Naruto's taste buds were treated to the best taste in the world. He'd go as far to say that it tasted better than ramen! (And that's saying something)
Not caring anymore about if it was right or wrong, or even dangerous. The boy sat up and licked the met stain on the panties. This made the small goddess laugh and click her fingers.
Naruto found himself on his hands and knees in front of her with a surprised look on his face. They were still in the middle of the street with everybody frozen in place.
"Go ahead" Naruto turned his attention back to the small goddess, who had opened her yukata to show him that she had A-cups and her nipples were perky. She gave the boy a smirk and pointed down.
The blond looked down and gulped when he saw that she had pulled her panties to the side to show her nether lips.
"Don't sit there gawking go ahead and taste my sweet nectar" the girl had mocking look on her face "unless you're intimidated by little ol' me"
Naruto gritted his teeth, how dare she mock him. Goddess or not he wasn't gonna let her get away with that. He grabbed her legs and placed them on his shoulders as he placed his face close to her honey pot. The white haired girl laid on her back with a pleased look on her face, she was loving this.
The white haired Goddess laughed as Naruto stuck out his tongue and licked at her pussy. Why didn't she try this before? It was so much fun to see the boy so flustered and aroused with his earthly hormones catching up to him.
But she can't get off of topic.
"I will implement my plan the minute we're done here" she looked down to see Naruto licking and sticking his tongue inside her like a hungry deprived man.
To our blonde protagonist this taste, it was the best thing in the world to him. It tasted like all his favourite flavours together. It tasted like happiness, joy, bliss (as odd as that sounded).
But how come she wasn't reacting to this?
"Maybe it's because I'm an entity way above you" the girl said with a smirk "and please call me Yumi"
Naruto was so enthralled by the taste that leaked from this goddess to say anything, but he remembered her name that's for sure.
Yumi made a waving motion and a little metal device appeared in her hands. Naruto looked at it curiously as he kept on licking away at the girl's nether lips. The white haired girl paid him no mind and hit buttons on the device then held it up to her ear.
Naruto could hear a few beeps before he could faintly hear someone on the other end saying a 'Hello?'
"Tami!" Yumi said cheerfully and heard an equally cheerful tone on the other end "how have you been girl?" there was some noise on the other end that Naruto couldn't make out. The blond decided to turn his focus to his current activity and noticed the bud on Yumi's pussy. He reached out and started rubbing it that made Yumi give an affirmative sound, this, for some reason, made Naruto feel warm inside.
"Hm? What was that sound?" asked Yumi as she gave Naruto an affectionate pat on the head "oh my little protagonist just found my bundle of pleasure" she giggled at Naruto's panicked look. He wanted to move away but Yumi wrapped her legs around his head to keep his head where it was.
"I know. He'll make a woman VERY happy one day" Yumi gave Naruto a smirk "but besides that" she laid back again "I need a favour. Can you get the others together? I know tonight's not game night but I need a favour to ask"
There were some more words on the other end of the phone then Yumi smiled widely.
"Thanks!" she said enthusiastically then made the phone disappear after pressing another button. She looked down and saw Naruto was looking at her with questioning eyes.
"Oh don't you worry my little sex toy" she patted his head making the boy look at her with annoyed eyes "now…I do think you deserve a reward for all your hard work" after she said that Naruto felt her squeeze his head close and released into his mouth.
If the taste before was so good, now was it was fucking utopia to him. His eyes rolled into the back of his head as his tongue greedily licked all the sweet nectar.
When the nectar stopped flowing Yumi let his head go and Naruto sat on his knees with a blissful look on his face well he panted.
"I have to say I'm impressed" Yumi sat up and leaned forward so she was close to the tent in Naruto's pants "you're the first person to last that long without getting tired" she reached forward and unzipped his pants to let his member fly out and smack her in the face.
"Oh! You went commando today" Yumi looked pleased as she reached forward and grabbed him around the base. Because of the size of her hands, Yumi had to use two hands to start jerking the boy off.
Yumi smirked and leaned forward so she could stick her tongue out and lick the head slowly and seductively. Naruto moaned loudly, this was the best feeling in the world. It was even better than when he tasted ramen for the first time or got his first real present ever.
"It's unfortunate that I currently have this body, or I'd give you a perfect titty-fuck" Yumi smirked at the boy, who was now on his back with his mouth open and his tongue hanging out "but I prefer it. Less maintenance ya know" the white haired Goddess put the tip in her mouth for a quick suck, before letting it out. That one action made Naruto twitch in pleasure.
"Now! Prepare for pleasure beyond everything you know!" the little girl opened her mouth and, in one motion, engulfed his length in a deep throat. Naruto's eyes rolled into the back of his head as he felt the most heavenly feeling ever. He wanted to blow his load right then and there but Yumi tapped his balls. Instantly he didn't feel the need to blow anymore.
Yumi let his cock out with a pop and continued to jerk Naruto off "ah ah" she said kissing the tip again "you can't finish just yet. I want you to enjoy this thoroughly" with that she went back to deep throating the blond who was now drooling.
Yumi hummed in her throat sending even more pleasure to Naruto. This made an animalistic part of the blond wake up. He sat up and grabbed the white haired girl's hair. Yumi looked up at him with amused eyes and that made Naruto growl.
The blond threw every thought he had about everything wrong with this situation and started face fucking the Goddess.
Said Goddess just allowed the boy to fuck her throat and didn't even react. Her body made the normal human noises that a woman in this situation would make, by that it meant she was gagging whenever Naruto pulled out and pushed back in.
After 5 minutes of glorious face-fucking Naruto could feel his load about to burst forth. He gripped the girl's hair and forced her all the way on his dick.
"I-I'm gonna cum!" he yelled just as he let loose one shot down Yumi's throat. The Goddess with surprising strength forced Naruto back so on the tip was in her mouth. Each rope of cum was kept her in mouth as she gave Naruto a pleased look.
When the boy was spent he fell onto his back and let go of Yumi's head. The Goddess swallowed what was in her mouth and let the tip out. A delayed spurt was let loose onto her face making the girl laugh.
"That felt so good…" said Naruto as Yumi petted his dick, making him moan.
"If it wasn't for me you'd have blown your load way beforehand" said the girl using her finger to scoop the white substance off her cheek and taste it "tastes good" she said seductively.
"Now what?" Naruto asked, tucking his pecker back in his pants and closing it.
"Now? Now I go back to where I came from and deal with my friends about putting this plan forth" the girl smirked at Naruto with a wink "I'll be back, oh, and don't tell anybody of what happened"" with that she vanished
No poof, no smoke.
She just vanished.
Naruto blinked in surprise as time caught up again and he was on the floor in front of Iruka, who was surprised that the blond wasn't in his grip anymore.
"What the? How did you get on the floor?" the scarred instructor asked as Naruto stood up and dusted his pants off.
"I don't know" lied Naruto, he didn't want to incur the wrath of a Goddess.
"Well, whatever. You still need to clean up the monument!" said Iruka pointing at the defaced monument, that made Naruto groan lazily.
"But I don't wanna!"
"To bad!"
Naruto sat in class with his head on the table looking like he was asleep, but he was remembering all that had happened between him and Yumi when time froze. He might have lingered on the sensations he'd experienced for the first time but he was also worried about what Yumi had in store for him and his universe.
'Huh, it's weird to say it like that. My universe' the blond chuckled.
"Having fun my sex toy?" the boy's head shot up in surprise to see Yumi sitting on the table with a tilt of her head.
"Y-Yumi!" he said in surprise. Yumi smiled and patted his head.
"Nice to see you remembered" the girl's smile turned into a smirk when Naruto realised she was indirectly calling him stupid and glared at her.
"Hey!" Yumi laughed and hopped off his desk. Naruto took note that the girl was now wearing a different coloured yukata this one was orange in colour, his favourite colour.
"It's done" she said well she walked around the class. Naruto stood up and walked behind the girl, who stopped in front of a boy that was eating chips in class. He was chubby with a weird cap on and a normal outfit except he had wrappings around his hands and swirls on his cheeks. Yumi reached forward and grabbed the packet, the girl then started munching on the chips.
"What's done?" asked Naruto as the girl walked to the front and sat down on Iruka's desk.
"What I said I was gonna do. This whole world has changed" the girl looked up in thought "well actually it while change in 10 seconds when I start time again"
"What exactly did you do?" asked Naruto as he squinted his eyes.
"Have you ever played a video game?" Yumi asked munching on a chip.
"Once or twice, yeah" said Naruto not understanding what that had to do with anything.
"In short your world has just become similar to a game" said Yumi smirking at Naruto's shocked look.
"What do you mean my world is a game?!" he screamed in surprise as Yumi looked bored.
"Exactly what I mean" said Yumi, then looked up in thought "well actually, it's more like I added certain abilities to this world"
"Added them how?"
"It's like pickups" the girl finished the chips and left the packet on Iruka's desk. Said owner of desk was frozen mid lecture "each pick up is different from the last. Some strong, some weak, some useless others earth shattering" Yumi grabbed Naruto's hand and pulled him forward.
When the boy was standing in front of her Yumi leaned forward and kissed him. The blond was shocked at the sudden feeling. The next thing he knew there was a pleasant sensation going up his spine.
When Yumi pulled back the sensation was replaced with discomfort and some pain.
"Wha-What's happening?" groaned Naruto falling to his knees. Yumi looked down at him with a smile.
"Your genetic code is being rewritten that's what" said the Goddess shocking Naruto.
"What?!" he yelled and tried to stand up, only to fall to his knees "Why?!"
"Because you are the first person to experience this new transition to befall this world"
Naruto looked down at his hands and screamed in surprise as the skin on his fingers started burning away and turning into embers. He saw his bones and screamed in fear.
Just as fast as it happened the skin appeared again. Before he could breathe a sigh of relief he felt a thousand shocks going through his body as electricity shock off his very being and left a burnt mark on the floor.
When that vanished Naruto felt the temperature drop and made him wrap his arms around himself to keep warm. He felt even colder when he did this and retracted his hands. When he looked down he saw his hand had icicles standing out of it.
Then all of a sudden the sensations stopped. Naruto blinked in surprise and stood up to look at Yumi, who was smiling at him.
"What was that?" asked the boy looking at his hand. He thought of the flames that burnt his skin away. As he finished this thought the tips of his fingers caught alight and made the blond jump back in surprise then start screaming.
After realizing the flames weren't hurting him Naruto looked down to see the flames dancing on his fingertips, which was shining like a fire.
"Wow" he said in amazement.
"This is what I mean" said Yumi putting a leg over the other "throughout your world there are, let's call them power ups. Each power up is modelled after abilities people in other universes have. The one you just acquired is a power that allows you to use certain elements and powers. I'm unable to tell you the real names and they are used differently from the one in the other world" Yumi smirked at the blond "never say I don't treat you right sex toy" she made a pointed look at Naruto's junk.
The blond blushed up a storm and held his hands over his junk, but forgot that his fingers were on fire. The minute his hand came in contact with the fabric of his pants it caught a light.
"AHHHHHH!" Naruto screamed as his pants started burning at a rapid pace. He tried to pat it out but the flame was defiant and burnt up his entire outfit. Oddly enough it left him burnt free.
"My clothes!" the blond shouted in surprise, he realized he was naked and covered himself up. Yumi laughed and jumped off the table and stood in front of Naruto.
"Oh man up it was ugly after all" the girl said making Naruto huff in anger.
"It was not!" he frowned at her. Yumi just rolled her eyes and moved his hands away. When she laid eyes on the boy's junk she smirked again. Grabbing the obi on her yukata and gave it a yank making the rope break off.
When the obi was gone Yumi shed the yukata and stood butt naked. The minute Naruto laid eyes on her his penis stood at attention to greet her.
'A-Am I-' Naruto thought fearfully.
"No. You're not a lolicon" said Yumi reaching forward and grabbing the dick in front of her. She started walking forward and towards the classroom door "your dick reacted like that because my body is something that would make any earthly man desire it" Naruto walked behind her as the girl led him by the penis making the blond moan and struggle not to fall over "I could make a 90 year old man get a hard on as if he was 18 again"
Yumi led the blond out of the academy all the while giving him jerks, enough to give him pleasure but not enough to make him fall over because of his knees buckling.
"Y-Yumi…Wh-Wh-Where are we going?" asked Naruto in moan as Yumi led him down the street passing frozen villagers. Yumi stopped and turned around to face the boy, all the while letting his penis go.
"We're gonna get you new clothes" said the girl reaching up and grabbing the boy around the neck and jumped up. When she was at eye level the Goddess wrapped her legs around Naruto and made sure his hard on was between her butt cheeks "now mush well I make you feel good"
Not about to deny someone who could destroy him with a snap of the fingers Naruto put his hands under the girl's thighs and started walking. The boy groaned as Yumi started moving her rear up and down on his dick (he didn't remember her butt being bigger).
"I'm a Goddess baka" said Yumi rolling her eyes "I can make myself grow bigger knockers if I wanted but it's fun to watch you keep having inner debates with yourself" she smirked at the frowning blond.
The turned a corner and Yumi started nibbling on Naruto's skin, making the boy moan loudly as he struggled to walk with all the pleasure being given to him.
"You know" Yumi looked up at Naruto and smirked evilly "we could have sex. Pop your cherry now"
Naruto stopped in his tracks as Yumi said this. The hell? Where did that come from?
"I know that you find me attractive and you'd love to fuck me" the girl reached up and stroked his chin "so why not?"
"B-Because…" the blond couldn't come up with anything. Everything in him was screaming to fuck the Goddess with little regard for how he felt about it, like an animal instinct was waking up.
"Don't because me" said Yumi with a frown and made herself rise up slightly. She rubbed the head of his dick with her pussy lips "you want to ram your dick into this pussy don't you?" she gave an evil smirk as Naruto's brain went into over drive.
Yumi moved so his penis was between them and started rubbing it between her pussy lips. Naruto was now on auto pilot as he headed for the clothing store and enjoyed the sensation. All the while his brain was having a war with itself.
'Oh this is too good' thought Yumi. She could turn into her older self and give the blond peace of mind, but she was playful by nature so tormenting the boy was enough.
When they stopped walking Yumi looked up to see a clothing store with a person half inside holding the door open. Naruto walked inside at Yumi's request.
The white haired Goddess started directing the boy to go down different rows of clothing. When they passed by clothing the girl liked she would grab it and put it over her shoulder, even as she did this she didn't stop moving up and down on Naruto. Said boy was nothing more than a zombie now, he was just moaning and walking around slowly.
'Poor kid' thought Yumi reaching up and stroking the back of the boy's head to comfort him, it made the moaning go down a bit but it didn't stop.
"Ok Naruto to the changing room" said the girl hit his ass cheek with her heel. The blond walked to where he was supposed to go with no complaint.
Ok! I hope y'all enjoyed that!
If you feel weird about the Yumi thing I would like to point out that in Anime, some girls never look their age. I refer you now to ToraDora's own Taiga! She looks like a middle schooler but yet Yuuji falls in love with her and heaven only knows what happened after the series ended.
But anyway leave a review and tell me what you guys think.
P.S: Tell me if y'all prefer Yumi to go away or if you want her to pop up at random points in the story. She might not be as intimate as she is now but she will be a big tease.