Hello the people who read the first chapter of this story. I want to saw thank you for read it. this is my fist story i post here and i'd honesty never thought i was going to over a hundred people reading it. so thank you but back the reason i'm writing this. I'm can't think of a way to continue it, well i do but maybe a little different. So for the time being i'm rewriting the first chapter with some help of my friend who agree to be my beta reader. So the new chapter one will be posted tonight.