Hello out there in Internet City! I've just gotten to work on a brand new story that won't be very many chapters long. And do you know why? It's because I plan to write out the whole thing as a single chapter after this little introductory!

And just to warn you, the beginning of this particular story is going to seem a little dark and depressing. But it's also going to be very long and it's all going to be written in a single chapter, so that's why I said that it won't take very many chapters.

At the least, I plan for this story to be 20,000 words long. This is to make the story both long and interesting. I hope you guys enjoy it. And here's the deck I built and tested on Yu-Gi-Oh Pro.


Monster Cards


Dark Magician

Red-Eyes Black Dragon

Elemental HERO Sparkman

Elemental HERO Clayman

Elemental HERO Burstinatrix

Elemental HERO Avian

Legendary Knight Timaeus

Legendary Knight Hermos

Legendary Knight Critias

Buster Blader

Evil HERO Malicious Edge (2 copies)

The End of Anubis

Infernity Destroyer

Dark Magician Girl

Evil HERO Infernal Gainer

Elemental HERO Wildheart

Evil HERO Infernal Prodigy (3 copies)


Spell Cards


The Eye of Timaeus

The Fang of Critias

Dark Calling (3 copies)

The Claw of Hermos

Polymerization (2 copies)

Raigeki

Double Summon (3 copies)

Dark Hole (2 copies)

Legend of Heart

Dark Fusion (3 copies)


Trap Cards


Tyrant Wing

Mirror Force (3 copies)

Crush Card Virus (2 copies)

Zoma the Spirit (3 copies)


Extra Deck


Timaeus the Knight of Destiny

Evil HERO Malicious Fiend

Tyrant Burst Dragon

Amulet Dragon

Dark Paladin

Mirror Force Dragon

Evil HERO Wild Cyclone

Evil HERO Dark Gaia

Dark Magician Girl the Dragon Knight

Red-Eyes Black Dragon Sword

Evil HERO Lightning Golem

Evil HERO Inferno Wing

Evil HERO Infernal Sniper

Doom Virus Dragon


Well, I've gotta get to work on this story. Since it's going to be so long, you probably won't see any of my other stories being updated for a while. I hope you understand. Anyway, here's a sneak peek at what will be in the story to tide you over.


Walking through the dark streets of Coruscant, fourteen year old Ahsoka Tano was reflecting on how things had gone horribly wrong for her. One minute she'd been on a mission and made one small error that caused hundreds of clones to get killed, next thing she knows the council confines her to the temple for four months, and she's hated by just about everyone she knows.

Her master, Anakin Skywalker, hasn't been around her for the most part, and even her closest friends like Barriss and Padmé seem to not want anything to do with her. And let's not forget all of the hateful glares and the whispers behind her back.

She'd decided that she's had enough, and snuck out while her master and everyone else was asleep. Honestly, this is the first time in over a month and a half that Ahsoka's had any interaction with the outside world.

Thunder boomed to signal an oncoming storm, but our young Togruta couldn't care less. She felt as though she deserved it after all the lives she caused to be lost. Felt as though everyone would finally be happy again if she just died. Be it on the battlefield, or of pneumonia, it didn't matter to her.

...Did I forget to mention that Ahsoka has developed a case of depression?

As the rain began to fall, Ahsoka stopped to take a look at herself in a cracked window. Her skin had turned from a once vibrant orange color to a more pale pink, which was dangerously pale for her species, and you could tell that she hasn't been eating right due to her more prominent cheek and collar bones. And due to her borderline indecent top, you could definitely see her ribs jutting out of her sides. And her once crystal blue eyes seemed to have dulled so much, you couldn't see any amount of life in them.

Ahsoka sighed as she began to shiver in the cold rain that was now pouring down.

"This is all I am. Just a worthless, pathetic, hated failure of a girl! Nothing more than a waste of space!" Ahsoka thought to herself.

Ahsoka sneezed and began to hug herself as she was pelted by the cold rain. Even mother nature seemed to have it in for her.

"Hated… pathetic… worthless… screw up… no one will miss you…! Just die already…!"

Ahsoka shook her head as she tried to get the voices in her head to go away. But she couldn't. And every time she managed to get them to leave for a while, they just came back louder and stronger than before.


***To Be Continued…***