Hi guys! Okay, so a while back I reread 'The Fury's Bite' since I was really bored, and I realized just how bad all the grammer and some plot details were. So I've decided to rewrite it! I'm not going to change any major plot details or anything like because it would just screw up everything in the other stories that take place in this AU. So I hope you enjoy this slightly less crappy version!

"Wow, Useless, it's such a fitting name for you. I'm such a genius for thinking of it." Snotlout sneered as tears shimmered in Hiccup's eyes as he and the twins, Ruffnut and Tuffnut, continued to beat him up.

"And I talked to your mom the other day, she said she's disappointed in you too, being in Valhalla is too close to your pathetic self." He smirked as Hiccup let a single tear streak down his face and he finally escaped his tormentors and made a mad dash for the forest, where he then proceeded to wander around for a bit, not really going anywhere.

"Oh the gods hate me. Of course I'm the scrawniest kid in the village and the chief's son." He mumbled angrily before punching a tree.

"Ow!" He yelped as he stepped back and held his hand.

"Of course." He muttered before a twig snapping caught his attention, making him clumsily grab his dagger out of his pocket and hold it close.

"W-Who's there?!" He demanded, his voice shaking slightly as a shadow leapt from the bushes and circled him, it was a dragon. A big black dragon with large wings and a pair of acid green eyes that could pierce through one's soul.

"Night Fury." Hiccup squeaked, the unholy offspring of lightening and death itself looking him dead in the eye.

"S-Stay back." He threatened, holding out the little dagger. Fear prickled every inch of his body as the dragon stopped circling him and then pounced! Pinning the young heir to the ground before snarling, Hiccup looking deep into its wolf-like eyes as he struggled against the dragon's force, but to no avail. Then, a big pair of jaws clamped down on his shoulder as darkness consumed him.

Hiccup woke up a few minutes later with an awful headache and a throbbing arm.

"What just happened?" He asked himself before looking at his blood covered arm curiously, strange. Why didn't that dragon kill him? He brushed it off and started to walk back towards the village, seeking medical attention as a trail of blood followed him for about a minute or so before he felt a strange sensation explode through his entire body as he looked back down at him arm, it was totally black. Well, technically very dark green but still.

"Ahhhhhhh!" He screamed in shock as the dark green covered his entire body, the same color scales started to form as well as he jumped back in shock, his entire body was now covered in a coat of dark forest green scales and his fingernails turned to claws as his arm started to shrink, it getting stronger and stronger by the second as his other arm and legs followed in suit. His hair started to recede back into his scalp as scales took over his head, which was starting to get longer and flatter with little spikes popping up down the top of his head as they trailed down his back, getting bigger as they poked holes through his clothes and his ears turned to strange flaps along with his teeth turning triangular and sharp as a knife.

"HELP ME!" He pleaded, but it sounded more like a ferocious roar than a scream for help.

Finally, wings and a tail slowly started to make their way through his shoulder blades and tailbone, he screamed again as the wings and tail completely destroyed his clothes, except for his vest, which had fallen into the ground with nothing more than a bloodstain on it. Then, Hiccup finally opened up his eyes. Demon. The first word that came to Hiccup's mind.

'I am a demon.'

Stoick paced back and forth in his house frantically. Hiccup was almost always back by now. The sun was dipping below the horizon as the orangey sky started to turn a deep purple as stars began to dot the clear sky.

"Where is he?!" He snapped before a blood-curdling roar erupted from the nearby forest, a dragon's roar. Stoick instantly snapped up and listened intently. Nothing, just, silence afterwards.

"Hiccup." He breathed before grabbing his axe and racing out of his house.

"Stoick! Have ye seen 'iccup?!" Gobber exclaimed as he chased after Stoick, who finally slowed to a halt once he reached the tall trees, Gobber panting behind him.

"Stoick, why are ye-"

"Sh!" Stoick snapped as he listened to the forest intently. He heard it, little grunts and growls. But from where?

"Wait a minute. Is 'iccup-"

"Follow me." He said, not paying any attention to his friend as Gobber gulped and followed Stoick through the dark green forest before jamming his foot into the ground and gasping, Gobber doing the exact same thing as they saw something, blood. A little trail of blood.

They followed it nervously before a shadow darted into the forest and they looked down to see three things, one; a dark green scale, two a dagger, and three a little notebook. Stoick's jaw dropped before he collapsed onto his knees as Gobber put a sad hand on his shoulder.

"Hiccup." He muttered before looking back up with a mix of sadness and rage.

"This dragon is going to pay for what it's done. He only just turned 15! WHY MUST THE GODS DO THIS TO ME!" He screamed in anger and sadness as Gobber took off his helmet in respect.

"Stoick, I'm so sorry-"

"This thing will pay for what it has done." Stoick snarled as he stood up and clutched the green scale before breaking it in two.

"Odin help us." Gobber muttered as Stoick walked over to a tree and punched it before screaming;

"HIIIIICCCCCCCUUUUUUPPPP!"

"Follow me."

"Oh no." Hiccup muttered as he squinted through the thick forest brush and spotted his father and Gobber quickly walking towards him.

He quickly dove for the bushes and quickly hid in the leaves, his dark green scales blending in with the dark leaves as he watched intently.

'Dad...' He thought sadly as Stoick picked up the scale, but then gasped quietly as he snapped it in half.

'He's going to kill me.' Hiccup thought in horror before he watched Stoick and Gobber solemnly walk back to the village and he felt a hot breath on his neck. He slowly turned around and his emerald eyes met with the other Night Fury's acid ones.

Sooooooo, what do you guys think about this newer version? Should I keep rewriting it? Or should I just stick with the original? Leave your answer in the comment box below! (P.S. If you guys want me to continue to rewrite it, I won't delete the original, so don't worry, no matter what the original isn't going anywhere.)