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A/N: Hey...this is my first fanfic...so go easy on me; constructive criticism/flaming is okay, heck, anything is okay, just don't use vulgar language. There's profanity censor (i.e.: F**K) just incase for little kids ;)
Key:
'text' = what the character is thinking
Lost Miroku
"MIROKU!!! YOU B*ST*RD!!!" a feminine voice screamed which caused all the birds in the area to fly away while a resound *SLAP* echoed after.
"Ite...ite...I'm sorry Sango, but my heart is onl—" a male voice replied.
"Will you cut the cr*p Miroku?" was a heated reply.
At this, Miroku was silent and decided to observe Kagome's and Inuyasha's arguement over which type of ramen to cook.
"You b**ch! Just cook that one!" shouted Inuyasha. Then he muttered silently:
"Stupid b**ch...can't even choose what kind of ramen to cook."
"INUYASHA!!! I am NOT a b**ch! You know what? SIT!!!!" retorted Kagome.
"KUSO!!!" Inuyasha screamed as he "hit the pavement".
Miroku just sighed and peeked at Sango who was petting Kirara and watching the fight with a sweatdrop.
"Well the sun is setting. Good night Sango," Miroku politely said.
"Humph..." was the only reply Miroku got.
'Hmm...she still seems mad at me. I guess it would be proper to apologize.'
"Sango, I'm sor—"
"Just go to bed housi," Sango cut-off Miroku.
Miroku just sighed and did as she wished. (A/N: I actually never paid attention to where Miroku sleeps if he doesn't find a mansion. So he sleeps against a tree in my fic)
As the sun was setting, Miroku sat against the base of a tree and got comfortable thinking about Sango.
'Hmm...something feels wrong...'
As Miroku was pondering these thoughts, he drifted off to sleep.
/*/Dream Sequence\*\
"Hey guys, I'm going to go for a walk. I'll be back in about half an hour."
Miroku's replies were: "Feh, whatever", "Okay Miroku, be careful", and "Humph, he's probably going to a teahouse or something."
Miroku sweatdropped at the last remark but left. As he was walking through the forest pondering many thoughts, he felt his right hand tighten, then an immense pain on his right palm erupted.
"ITEEEE!!! WHAT THE HELL!" Miroku agonizingly screamed...
- Back at the camp -
"Did you hear that? It sounded like Miroku," Sango said with concern.
"Yeah, I heard it too. It sounded like a scream, we should go check it out." Kagome replied with worry etched onto her face.
"Feh, let's go."
"Kirara!"
- Back to Miroku -
"Kuso, kuso, kuso, kuso!" Miroku shouted while grabbing his arm.
'The air void must be sucking me in!!!'
This was one of the first times in his life that he had been scared of something. And most likely, this would be the last thing he would ever be frightened of.
"MIROKU! WHAT'S GOING ON?" shouted Sango as she entered the clearing Miroku was standing in.
"Sango! I think the air void is sucking me in! RUN SANGO!" Miroku shouted over the winds emanating from his right palm with tears his eyes. The reason for the tears was because he knew he wouldn't have time to confess to Sango.
"MIROKU!" Sango screamed also with tears in her eyes, "YOU CAN'T DIE NOW!!!"
Sango watched in horror as Miroku's face was distorted with pain and watched with pain in her eyes as she saw Miroku being sucked into his own hand.
Miroku's last thought was: 'I love you Sango...'
/*/End Dream Sequence\*\
Miroku woke up with a cold sweat coating his body. He looked around and saw it was a few hours before noon and everyone was up.
'That was a horrible nightmare' Miroku thought with wide eyes making sure that it was only a dream.
"Oi, Miroku, come on, let's go!"
This snapped Miroku out of his thoughts and he nodded and left the tree with Sango.
centerQuite a Few Hours Later While the Group was Resting.../center
"Lady Sango, Lady Kagome and Inuyasha," Miroku calmly said while Inuyasha glared daggers at him, "I am going to go for a walk, I'll be back in about half an hour."
"Okay Miroku," Sango and Kagome replied at the same time while Inuyasha just 'Feh-ed'.
As Miroku walked away, Kagome tried to convince Sango to confess her love to him with psychology.
"Hey Sango...you like Miroku right?"
Sango blushed while mumbling: "I do not like that lecherous houshi...though he is sort of cut—EEP!" The last part of her sentence made her blush even more.
"Oh c'mon Sango, you know you like him. It's also obvious that he loves you but isn't making his move. Why don't you go after him and confess?"
Sango grumbled (*grumble grumble*) and reluctantly agreed and walked toward the direction that the group had last seen him go.
Kagome and Inuyasha watched Sango's retreating figure. Kagome had an enormously large grin on her face while Inuyasha was...just Inuyasha.
"Feh. I think Miroku likes Sango, but only her body."
"Inuyasha...SIT!"
"F**K!"
¯\_.'– Miroku and Sango -'._/¯
Sango ran through the forest calling Miroku's name. On the other hand, Miroku was walking at a slow but steady pace admiring nature in all its beauty.
"Miroku! There you are!" Sango shouted while running over to Miroku.
"Eh?" Miroku turned around to face Sango.
Sango bent over and put her hand on Miroku's arm for support and panted trying to regain her breath.
'This feels like my dream...but the samething's aren't happening. Probably just all the stress and tension building up' Miroku was paying slight attention to Sango who was now blushing.
"Neh...Miroku, I need to tell you something—" Sango was cut-off as Miroku grabbed his arm and started sweating profusely.
"Sh*t...Sango, I need to tell you something very important," Miroku gritted his teeth while saying this, "I had a dream last night about how my Kazaana sucked me in when i went for a walk in the forest just like now...seems like it was a premonition..."
Miroku fell to his knees panting. "Sango, you have to get away from here, I can feel the Kazaana pulling me in. If you don't get out of this area, you'll be sucked in with me..."
"Miroku! But—"
"No but's Sango, get out of here now!" Miroku's voice rose as the the excruciating pain got to him.
Sango just nodded with tears pooling in her eyes and she ran back out of the clearing and watched the scene unfold in front of her...
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A/N: Well that ends chapter one...tell me what you think
A/N: Hey...this is my first fanfic...so go easy on me; constructive criticism/flaming is okay, heck, anything is okay, just don't use vulgar language. There's profanity censor (i.e.: F**K) just incase for little kids ;)
Key:
'text' = what the character is thinking
Lost Miroku
"MIROKU!!! YOU B*ST*RD!!!" a feminine voice screamed which caused all the birds in the area to fly away while a resound *SLAP* echoed after.
"Ite...ite...I'm sorry Sango, but my heart is onl—" a male voice replied.
"Will you cut the cr*p Miroku?" was a heated reply.
At this, Miroku was silent and decided to observe Kagome's and Inuyasha's arguement over which type of ramen to cook.
"You b**ch! Just cook that one!" shouted Inuyasha. Then he muttered silently:
"Stupid b**ch...can't even choose what kind of ramen to cook."
"INUYASHA!!! I am NOT a b**ch! You know what? SIT!!!!" retorted Kagome.
"KUSO!!!" Inuyasha screamed as he "hit the pavement".
Miroku just sighed and peeked at Sango who was petting Kirara and watching the fight with a sweatdrop.
"Well the sun is setting. Good night Sango," Miroku politely said.
"Humph..." was the only reply Miroku got.
'Hmm...she still seems mad at me. I guess it would be proper to apologize.'
"Sango, I'm sor—"
"Just go to bed housi," Sango cut-off Miroku.
Miroku just sighed and did as she wished. (A/N: I actually never paid attention to where Miroku sleeps if he doesn't find a mansion. So he sleeps against a tree in my fic)
As the sun was setting, Miroku sat against the base of a tree and got comfortable thinking about Sango.
'Hmm...something feels wrong...'
As Miroku was pondering these thoughts, he drifted off to sleep.
/*/Dream Sequence\*\
"Hey guys, I'm going to go for a walk. I'll be back in about half an hour."
Miroku's replies were: "Feh, whatever", "Okay Miroku, be careful", and "Humph, he's probably going to a teahouse or something."
Miroku sweatdropped at the last remark but left. As he was walking through the forest pondering many thoughts, he felt his right hand tighten, then an immense pain on his right palm erupted.
"ITEEEE!!! WHAT THE HELL!" Miroku agonizingly screamed...
- Back at the camp -
"Did you hear that? It sounded like Miroku," Sango said with concern.
"Yeah, I heard it too. It sounded like a scream, we should go check it out." Kagome replied with worry etched onto her face.
"Feh, let's go."
"Kirara!"
- Back to Miroku -
"Kuso, kuso, kuso, kuso!" Miroku shouted while grabbing his arm.
'The air void must be sucking me in!!!'
This was one of the first times in his life that he had been scared of something. And most likely, this would be the last thing he would ever be frightened of.
"MIROKU! WHAT'S GOING ON?" shouted Sango as she entered the clearing Miroku was standing in.
"Sango! I think the air void is sucking me in! RUN SANGO!" Miroku shouted over the winds emanating from his right palm with tears his eyes. The reason for the tears was because he knew he wouldn't have time to confess to Sango.
"MIROKU!" Sango screamed also with tears in her eyes, "YOU CAN'T DIE NOW!!!"
Sango watched in horror as Miroku's face was distorted with pain and watched with pain in her eyes as she saw Miroku being sucked into his own hand.
Miroku's last thought was: 'I love you Sango...'
/*/End Dream Sequence\*\
Miroku woke up with a cold sweat coating his body. He looked around and saw it was a few hours before noon and everyone was up.
'That was a horrible nightmare' Miroku thought with wide eyes making sure that it was only a dream.
"Oi, Miroku, come on, let's go!"
This snapped Miroku out of his thoughts and he nodded and left the tree with Sango.
centerQuite a Few Hours Later While the Group was Resting.../center
"Lady Sango, Lady Kagome and Inuyasha," Miroku calmly said while Inuyasha glared daggers at him, "I am going to go for a walk, I'll be back in about half an hour."
"Okay Miroku," Sango and Kagome replied at the same time while Inuyasha just 'Feh-ed'.
As Miroku walked away, Kagome tried to convince Sango to confess her love to him with psychology.
"Hey Sango...you like Miroku right?"
Sango blushed while mumbling: "I do not like that lecherous houshi...though he is sort of cut—EEP!" The last part of her sentence made her blush even more.
"Oh c'mon Sango, you know you like him. It's also obvious that he loves you but isn't making his move. Why don't you go after him and confess?"
Sango grumbled (*grumble grumble*) and reluctantly agreed and walked toward the direction that the group had last seen him go.
Kagome and Inuyasha watched Sango's retreating figure. Kagome had an enormously large grin on her face while Inuyasha was...just Inuyasha.
"Feh. I think Miroku likes Sango, but only her body."
"Inuyasha...SIT!"
"F**K!"
¯\_.'– Miroku and Sango -'._/¯
Sango ran through the forest calling Miroku's name. On the other hand, Miroku was walking at a slow but steady pace admiring nature in all its beauty.
"Miroku! There you are!" Sango shouted while running over to Miroku.
"Eh?" Miroku turned around to face Sango.
Sango bent over and put her hand on Miroku's arm for support and panted trying to regain her breath.
'This feels like my dream...but the samething's aren't happening. Probably just all the stress and tension building up' Miroku was paying slight attention to Sango who was now blushing.
"Neh...Miroku, I need to tell you something—" Sango was cut-off as Miroku grabbed his arm and started sweating profusely.
"Sh*t...Sango, I need to tell you something very important," Miroku gritted his teeth while saying this, "I had a dream last night about how my Kazaana sucked me in when i went for a walk in the forest just like now...seems like it was a premonition..."
Miroku fell to his knees panting. "Sango, you have to get away from here, I can feel the Kazaana pulling me in. If you don't get out of this area, you'll be sucked in with me..."
"Miroku! But—"
"No but's Sango, get out of here now!" Miroku's voice rose as the the excruciating pain got to him.
Sango just nodded with tears pooling in her eyes and she ran back out of the clearing and watched the scene unfold in front of her...
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A/N: Well that ends chapter one...tell me what you think