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Dedicated to Debbie Hicks, who even after a two year hiatus of this fic, came back to spoof it in the reviews! I've learned to appreciate you, you funky little troll, so thanks for reading!
Debbie Hicks' Chapter 12
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The only review I left of Debbie Hicks' is on the second to last page of reviews if anyone would like to read that absolute masterpiece of a rewrite of chapter ten.
Debbie, whatever motivated you to continuously comment, despite 16-year-old me continuously deleting your comments, I can only guess. Thank you for being the biggest troll I've ever encountered.