A/N: Hey guys! So this is my second Undertale fic. I'm giving up on Everyone's Safe for now, as I don't like where my OC's character is going. I'll revise it later. But for now, this idea came to me and I really like it. It will follow the six humans' stories before the events of Undertale. Each of those humans had items and colors specific to them. They also had traits specific to them. Whereas Frisk had DETERMINATION, the 2nd human soul had PATIENCE, the 3rd had BRAVERY, the 4th had INTEGRITY, the 5th had PERSERVERANCE, the 6th had KINDNESS, and the 7th had JUSTICE. So I feel like there's a lot to work with on their characters and story. Not only that, but this'll also cover the backstories of all the other characters. Eg Sans' powers, how Undyne and Alphys met, etc. There may be some pairings as I go along (besides the obvious Alphyne). I hope you all enjoy!


Chapter 1: Untold Stories

You withstand another barrage of energy beams, barely staying alive. But you were DETERMINED to see this through to the end.

Asriel blocks the way.

You Struggle. Can't move your body.

"Ura ha ha! Still!? Come on... Show me what good your DETERMINATION is now!" Asriel yelled.

You withstand yet another barrage, barely able to move enough to dodge any of them. You feel your soul threaten to break in to a million pieces. But it refused.

The whole world is ending.

You Struggle.

Can't move your body.

Nothing happened.

You struggle...

Nothing happened.

You tried to reach your SAVE file.

Nothing happened.

You tried again to reach your SAVE file.

Nothing happened.

Seems SAVING the game really is impossible.

...

But...

Maybe, with what little power you have left...

You can SAVE something else.

You SAVE.

You reached out to ASRIEL'S SOUL and called out to your friends.

You see all your friends; Toriel, Papyrus, Sans, Undyne, Alphys, Asgore; all in the state that you met them. You tell them words of encouragement, motivation, and love. You give out a few jokes, hugs, and fake punches. They all remember you, and are ready to stand beside you.

You've SAVED them all, but Asriel is still standing. You wonder who else there is to SAVE, when a light blue light suddenly appears beside you.

You see a girl, surrounded by the light blue glow.

You ask the girl who she is, since that's only polite.

She snivels. "Who cares anymore...?"

The girl sends light blue knives flying at your soul. You stay calm and patient, not moving and avoiding the damage.

She can't hear you.

You CHECK her.

CRYING GIRL- ATK 15 DEF 20

Her face is covered. Around your age. Must be pretty PATIENT to have been waiting down here so long.

She sends the light blue knives again, this time waiting until sending a white one when you least expect it. The knife hits you, and you take some damage.

You haven't met her, but she seems familiar.

You ask for her name again.

"I've been waiting so long..."

You are used to the knives this time, and dodge them correctly.

She's mumbling to herself.

You ask her what she's been waiting for.

The girl finally heard you. She looks up at you. She looks very sad. "Nobody else has the PATIENCE for it."

She grows a gigantic white knife above you. It's huge, there's no way to dodge. You're afraid it'll cut you, but as it comes down, you keep your cool. It suddenly turns light blue at the last second, and you stay still, avoiding the damage.

Her crying intensifies.

You explain that you have a lot of time, and can at least try and listen.

The girl remains sad.

She sends more knives, which you dodge.

She is waiting for you to do something.

You ask her what her name is.

She finally heard you. "Um...Pei..."

The knives she sends this time are all light blue, and don't seem intent on hurting you.

Pei is crying a little less now.

You introduce yourself. She only nods.

Less knives come at you.

She seems ready to talk.

You smile and encourage her to explain what she's been waiting for.

The girl waits. You can't tell if she's thinking or if she's just waiting in general. She sobs."I don't know anymore."


Let me know what you think! PS not all of the story will be told in reader perspective. That's going to be specific to fights and Frisk. PS this takes place in the Asriel battle, in case you didn't know. Alright, review if you can. Byee