Donquixote Law
Title: Donquixote Law
Rating: T
Fandom: One Piece
Summary: Corazon failed. The Op-Op Fruit didn't save Law and he succumbed to illness. Doflamingo didn't kill Corazon; he kept him prisoner. A year later, Doflamingo has a biological son, whom he named after Law.
Everyone was floating in a white void. "That was a terrible way to go," Sicarius commented.
"Shut up Sicko," Future Law said.
"Hi Daddy!" Two year old Law was floating around, away from the group.
"Law!" Doflamingo floated after him.
"I blame Doflamingo for this," Trafalgar said.
"It's not my fault!" Canon Doflamingo snapped.
"Still, the entire thing was really confusing," Corazon commented. "First we encountered Sicko and thought he was an enemy. Turned out he was from the future. When we were at Nazo, we experienced crazy stuff,"
"We probably would've gotten the same experience when we're hallucinating," Future Corazon added.
"Then there's this whole problem with Jackass and Asshole," Future Law said, motioning to Kaido and Blackbeard who were struggling to stop spinning around.
"This feels like a terribly written story,"
I decided to rewrite this story. It felt too confusing. I originally wanted Sicko to be the actual villain. I have no idea how it came to this path.
If you didn't already know, the first chapter of the rewrite is up. It's called Donquixote Law Rewrite. It'll have a better storyline than this randomness.