Ok thank u to all that reviewed my story fan
I appreciate ur reviews allot , so thank u
And here is ur second chap of the story
So here we go
Fan!
A week had passed since Naina had met the cid team , one day , Sunday night , cid team had just packed up after shooting and were setting off to the hotel all the cid team were in a van together ,
Hrishikesh: sir aaj bohut taand hai nah
Adi: haan saach bola , saachi bohut taand hai …
Daya: taand toh hogi nah , akhir baarish hoyi hain toh phir barf hoyi hai , no I mean hori hain
Everyone smiled , they were all cuddled up together ,warm and cozy , it was a really bad weather today, it was constantly raining an hour ago , thunder storm and now it was snowing , it was all ready 9 inch snow , and thay didn't know when it was gonna stop .
While here a young girl , 13 years old stood at the bus stop , waiting for the bus , which was impossible to come , cuz of the bad weather , the roads were empty , no taxies were available, all the city was closed due to the bad weathering . she had been waiting for 2 hours , she would have walked it home but her legs were tired , she would hav called her mum but her phones battery was dead , her body was turning numb every second that was passing by , it was like she's gonna die any second , her body was losing that warmth , her feet were un able to move , they were frozen , she was drenched from head to toe with the rain , and now the snow , it was her bad luck that she forgot her coat at home , she was freezing cold ice .
Here , suddenly Aditya said stop to the driver , all were wondering why he said stop , Aditya got out of the van , holding an umbrella on top of his head , and headed towards the bus stop , where that girl was standing , he touched her , the girl turned around …. He was shocked and screamed NAINA!
Naina: turned around to find her adi uncle standing she hugged him , she was feeling weak , she needed support , she felt happy to see him here , he was her cure , just then Naina was about to fall and Aditya caught her , he picked her up , her body was shivering due to cold , he brought her in the van , everyone was shocked to see Naina in this state, everyone hurriedly made space for her adi made her sir in the position , they saw her body going cold , blue , adi quickly took off his jacked and put it on her , everyone started rubbing her hand , they were scared what if something happened to her. Thay couldn't do anything, the doctors were closed , and neither they had naina's parents number . son they couldn't call her and tell about Naina , after few minutes they saw her body turning back to normal , they all sighed relief , they were holding their breath since they saw her , in that state . just then adi said
Adi: sir isseh humareh saath hotel leh jaateh hai …
Shivaji: bar Aditya beta , yeh kaiseh , kahaan reh gi yeh haan ..
Adi: sir meh isseh apneh paas raklun ga , aur iski family ko subha phone karkeh pata dungi
Shivaji sir just nodded , in about half an hour they reached the hotel , adi picked up Naina in his arms and brought her to his room , he lied her down on the bed covered her up with a blanket . Then he opened a drawer, took out some medicine and gave her it . he came out his room and Shraddha standing there tensed. He closed the door slowly making no noise. He looked up and said smiling fakely
Adi :areh Shraddha tum yaha , kya hua
Shraddha was fiddling with her fingers and tears were present in her eyes
Shraddha: kessi hai Naina, teek hai nah , medicine deh di hain nah
She shot questions at him , Aditya was surprised . But maybe not cuz the first time they met Naina , there was a different shine in her eyes , a different kind of love , a different type of fan , she was ., the first time she met them , they all felt like they knew her , they were soo much into her . Aditya came out of his of his dreamland, as he felt constant staring on him, he looked to find her standing there, with tears in her eyes , and he said , taking a deep breathe
Adi: medicine dedi hai , abhi sori hain , baki kal subha pata chaleh ga , aur subha hi uskeh parents ko phone karreh gay , … ek kaam karo tum tum jaake sojao , kal subha mil lenaa usseh , kal subha saab milenah . he smiled and gently put his one hand on her head and entered back into the room, Shraddha smiled , she wiped her tears and went back to her room.
Here Aditya looked at Naina sleeping peacefully , he went up to her and gently put his hand on her head creased her hair , for a while , and then checked her temperature , it was seeming to get back to normal , he smiled slightly , and then went to the bathroom , washed his face and changed his clothes , he came out . and set up the couch , and fell asleep .
Morning: 7 o clock
He woke up and saw her sleeping , he went to the bathroom , freshened up , changed his clothes , just then he herd a knock on the door , he opened it , and was surprised to see Ansha , Janvi and Shraddha , standing there , and said
Adi: arreh tumlog , tumlog yaha , who bhi subha subha
Ansha: who sir yeh kapreh deneh theh naina keh liyeh , who uskeh kapreh gandeh hongeh .
Aditya smiled and said thank u , and took the clothes . and then janvi asked
Janvi: who kessi hai
Adi: pehleh she bohut better , bar abhi soyi hui hai
Just then daya came up and said ,
Daya: Aditya , bp singh tumhe bula reh hai bolreh hai , breakfast karlo toh phir shooting
He nodded and moved in the room , placed the dress on the chair and grabbed a paper and sat writing , after five min he came out and went to the canteen to eat
7: 45 o clock
Naina woke up , rubbing her eyes , she looked around , she was surprised , she had no idea where she was , then she remembered last night , and she got out of bed and headed towards the door , but then she stopped , she saw something sparkling lying on the couch . she moved towards the couch to find a beautiful pink and black dress lying there , then she found a note and read it
Good morning Naina beta
Akhir aap utgayi , acha aab ek kaam karo , fresh hokeh
Yeh kapreh penkeh , ready hojayeh
Meh thori der meh ata hoon
Aap keh liyeh breakfast lekhe
Ok
She smiled and quickly got ready , she combed her hair , she was about to wear her shoes , just then there was a knock on the door , she shouted come in , the person entered , and bowed in front of her , Naina laughed at his actions , and then she looked at him from head to toe , he was dressed as a servant . Naina laughed harder .
Naina: areh , adi uncle app… who bhi iss servant ki dress meh ( she laughed and Aditya just smiled , then he came forward and placed the tray on the table and said
Adi: abb beta kya kareh haan who joh karus dcp uncle hain nah , unneh mujhe servant banadia ( with this sentence Naina burst out laughing Aditya joined her and after few mins he said
Adi: acha cholo aab breakfast karlo , toh phir mujhe tumhari parents ka number do , akhir unko bhi toh patina hai
Naina nodded a bit and then started eating the toast, she was only half way through the toast when she said
Naina: bas uncle aur nahi … warna meh moti hogaongi …aur wessehbhi mujhe toast nahi passand its soo dry .. meh subha sirf aur sirf apple kati hun
Aditya smiled and said : but beta tumhe kaana parega , tabiyaat karaab hojaygi
Naina: nahi meneh nahi kannah , she made an angry face
Adi : naina …..acha teek hai toh phir yeh milk pee lo good girl keh jaiseh
Naina: nahi ….milk gandha..bohut ganda ….meh sirf hot choco piti hun
Adi : ok abhi toh nahi hai choco powder but agar tum yeh pura dood piyogi nah toh tumhe meh chocolate doon ga ok
Naina smiled and quickly gulped down all the glass of milk cuz she loved her sweets , and chocolates , she will do anything for them . she finished and said
Naina: acha aab do … chocolate ….kaunsi hai ..
Here Aditya satared laughing seeing her , naina was confused
Naina: adi uncle aap has kyun reh ho
Aditya managed to control his laughter and said
Adi: tumhari …. Mouch hahahaha
Naina laughed a bit too and wiped her mouth , adi stopped laughing
Adi: acha aab yehlo … he handed her the chocolate …. Ok beta aab mujhe chalna parehga ….shooting hai , servant keh jaiseh ban keh , janvi aur sharddha tumharah kyal rakeh….
He was about finish his sentence , when naina just jumped up in happiness and said
Naina: kya bola , ansha aur Shraddha di mera kyal rakeh gi ….yay
Aditya frowned at her and said
Adi: acha apko mereh yaha maza nahi ata
Naina looked at him and said
Naina: sorry …actually mujhe bohut acha lagta hai jab aap yaha hoteh ho but ….
She was about to say more but adi stopped her by saying
Adi: arreh baba mazak karrah tha…acha aab meh chaltah hoon , bye
And he left the room and ansha and Shraddha entered the room with chocolate and flowers
Naian jumped up and shouted : diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
She came and hugged them tightly , both of them smiled widely and said
Ansha: kesi ho pari ….
Naina: meh , meh toh tee khun di .. mujhe kya hona hai haan .
Shraddha: haan sach kaha meri gurya ko kya hona hai , akhir who itni brave hai
All of them smiled
Naian: yeh aap layi ho , mereh keh liye …. She said pointing to the chocolates
Shraddha: nahi yeh tumhareh keh liyeh nahi …yeh meri guriya keh liyeh
Ansha : haan , who pata hai nah jo number 67 room meh hai …who achi si fan .. shes sooo cute
Shraddha: haan hum toh sirf tumseh milneh ayeh hai
Naina's face dropped down from a happy to sad she went back and sat on the bed , Shraddha and ansha looked at each other and walked to wards her and said
Ansha: arreh arreh .. dekho meri pari naraaz hogi
Shraddha: arreh , guriyah hum mazak karreh theh ….tum hi toh ho meri di hain na
She tried to take her into a hug , but she moved away
Ansha: arreh …yeh kya haan.. naraaz kyun hogi haan
Shraddha: acha ok …kaan pakar keh sorry boleh
Naina didn't turn , Shraddha signaled ansha 1 , 2 ,, 3 ,, ATTACK!
They both started tickling naina , and she burst out laughing
Naina: ..eh…..ch..o.. …diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii….p…llll…ssssss
She wasn't able to stop laughing , after 5 mins they stopped and naina hugged both of them and said
Naina: choco….
Shraddha…. Nahi abhi nahi …tumneh abhi abhi choco kayi hai ..hai nah
Naina: ok ..but haan mujhe apnaa hissa chayeh ok
They both nodded , they all got busy in plying games , laughing joking . with all this 5 hours passed , it was lunch time ,
They heard a knock , and called the person in , it was Aditya , naina got up from the bed and jumped and ran towards Aditya , and hugged him .
Adi: toh acha naina beta bohut kush lagri hon , kyu ,
Naina: who meri di neh entertain kiya
Adi smiled and said
Adi: acha cholo naina , aab apneh papa ka number do , uneh pata toh doon ki unki guriyah yaha hai
Nainas face turned down , she went sad , she moved back and sad on the face , all 3 of them looked at her , they were surprised ,
Ansha: arreh beta ghar nahi jana
Naina: jana hia …
Ansha : toh phir number doh nah papa ka …
She looked down even more, tears formed in her eyes and she said in a very low tone so that hardly anyone could hear
Naina : ….nahi …hai…chor ..keh chaleh gayeh
They were shocked to hear that
She continued
Paanch saal ki thi meh , sirf paanch saal ki thi meh , jab papa chor keh chleh gay theh
Meri mummy ki duniyah hilgayi thi
Papa cancer she marrah theh ,they faught cancer for 2 years aur akhir meh haar gay battle
Papa ka ek sapna tha ki unki kio ladli hoyeh , aur akhir meh meeh agi
Papa loved me allot , he loved me more than his life , agar meh roye thoh who parshaan hojateh , agar chot mujhe lagti toh unko dard hota , ansu unkeh anko meh likltheh , mamma danteh toh who mujhe bachayeh
My papa was the best , 3 saal ki thi meh jab mamma ko pata chalah ki papa ko cancer hai , toot gayi thi who
Baar ussneh Kabhi ansu nahi dikayeh , apni zimadaari sambhale , papa har waqat mereh saat rehteh the , he didn't want to leave me , akhir meh unki pari jo hun ….she smiled a bit
2 saal guzar geh , papa lost the competition against cancer , papa chaleh gaye chor keh mujhe , Hamesha Hamesha keh liyeh .
Mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai who last words jo papa neh boleh
Naina beta , meri pari , mujhe bhool nah maat
Sorry beta tumhe chorr keh jaara hoon , bohut bura hoon na meh
Apna mummy ka kyal rakna , Kabhi unkeh anko meh ansoo nah anneh dena
Im gonna miss u pari
Mumma ka kayaal rakna aur mumma ko tang maat karnah
School meh kio fight nah karnah
Bari hokeh doctor banah
Beta samaj reh ho nah meh kya keh rah hoon
Uff meh bhi nah paagal hoon , kyun nahi samjogi akhir tum toh clever ho …beep beep beep the monitor turned of , sorry but he is dead
Naina burst out crying, all 3 of them had tears in their eyes, Aditya walked up to her and brought her in a comfortable soothing hug. she cried her heart out , it was the first time telling about her father , she always kept it a secret , even from her friends . she never wanted anyone to know she kept it to herself . for the first time she told , she told someone that she trusted . after 10 minutes Aditya separated from the hug and cupped nainas face and wiped her tears
Adi: aab kabar daar royi …warna….he raised his hand up in action of slap
And they both laughed and he hugged her again , and kissed her on her forehead , and then said
Adi: acha cholo , mumma ko phone karteh hai , pata toh deh ki unki pari yaha hai
She nodded adi called her mom and told , she said she will reach in 15 minutes
Adi said acha cholo luch karlo toh phir gaar jaana aur haan apna kyaal bhi rakna
The all sat and had lunch , adi fed naina and naina did the same
Soon they finished , some one came and called Aditya ,
Person: mr aditya someone has come to meet u
Adi: yes let her in
The lady came in , naina looked back and juped of her chair and ran towards her mom
Naina: mmmmoooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmm
N m ( nainas mother ) : nainaaaaaaa
Nainas mother flung her hands open and naina jumped into a hug , they both had tears in their eyes , nainas mother kissed her forehead
After few minutes they broke the hug , nainas mother looked at Aditya and asked him to come forward , he came and touched her feet , for blessings
N m : jeeteh ro beta
Naina: mumma yeh dekho yeh hai merh nayeh dost / uncle , adi uncle
Mumma apko pata hai yeh saab nah bohut acheh hai
She introduced everyone to her mother and her mother to everyone
And then
N m: acha ab hum chalteh hai , late hogaya hoga , thank u for keeping care of her .
Adi: arreh nahi nahi ..tank u ki baat kya … bohut pyaari bachi hai
All every one smiled and then
Adi: aunty meh aplogo ko chorr aun ..akhir mujhe pata hona chayeh ki iska ghar kaha hai , toh kio musibaat ayi toh meh isseh pickup , ya help kar saku
Nainas mom nodded , and he drove them to their house with the instructions of nainas mom
And soon they reached ,
Adi: bye naina , bye aunty
N m : arreh Aditya beta chai , pee jao
Adi: nahi aunty late hojaoga , shooting bhi karni hai , bye aunty , bye naina
N m: teek hai bar next time zarur
Adi : ok , he took blessings and left
Ok friends that was the end of another chap
Hope u enjoyed it
Sorry for mistakes
And yeah I forgot to tell u this is all a dream , of mine , actually the girl naina suppose to be me , but I wish rather not , cuz only I know whats gonna happen next , :D
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Thank u , bye take care
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