Hello everyone. It is I, Le MAO- I mean, P. T. Barnum (Yes, I watched The Greatest Showman. And I liked it. A lot.), here to give a bit of an announcement.
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This story will be undergoing a rewrite.
Before you say anything, it's not that I don't like what I've written. It's more like…..it could be better.
I want it so that Walt and Jesse are more established in the world of Remnant. Especially given what happens in Volume 3. And given that that (presumably) happens near the end of their second semester…maybe. Probably. I don't know how the RWBY timeline works. I'm just making educated guesses.
Still, a couple more months before the dock incident in Volume 1 (or even some time before the first actual semester) could be a better start for the story.
It will still be Walt and Jesse in Remnant, of course. That will never change.
I just feel that they need more time before the big event in Volume 3. And while that's months away from the end of Volume 1, I don't think it's enough time. After all, Breaking Bad had over 9 months at least because of a new baby.
Plus…I have a bit of an idea for that pairing problem I had for Jesse. I want to play with an idea I came up with, and a rewrite will help me do that. Not sure if I'll actually have Walt be paired with anyone, mainly cause he's, well, 52 years old. I don't think any of the female adults in RWBY are anywhere near that age.
So yeah…a rewrite will happen. Some of you may have liked what I've written already (so have I), but I feel that a rewrite is necessary to better improve the story. Besides, some if not all of what I've written here will still be addressed in the rewrite, and possibly some ideas and suggestions I've seen in reviews. Just a bit more defined, hopefully.
And really, a rewrite is the only way I see this story continuing.
So yeah…sorry about that, but it needs to be done.
I'll update this story again when I have the first chapter of the rewrite finished and published.
*twirls cane and grins*
See you next time…and prepare for quite the show.