Hi to Everyone Reading,
First of all thank you for reading my fanfic.
This is my first fanfic and I'm very open to criticism!
That being said, please keep in mind I'm a teenage girl so please no unneeded flames. I might get emotional ;) If you have a problem with my writing or my story please tell me so I can improve on it. I need all the help I can get!
Secondly I'll try to write chapters of about 800-1000 words once a week or every two weeks. Chapters may be delayed because of Exams or Class Trips.
Thirdly I might Translate this Story to German if anyone is interested, cause I've noticed there are not many German Timetravel fics.
Please Enjoy...
Hermione was running, the final battle, the battle of Hogwarts was over. The dark side had won, so she as a dirty mudblood had to flee. She was hobbling/running into the forbidden forest the only place she was safe from the dark forces, even they would not dare step foot into it. The forest was pitch black the tall daunting trees blocked the moon out. Hermione's breathing was uneven and ragged, blood was flowing out of the cuts and wounds spread across her body. A particularly deep gash on her left leg caused her to limp, blood gushing out with every step. A part of her was berating herself for so blindly and recklessly running into the forest, there were acromantulas, centaurs even werewolves, but she argued to herself at least then death would come easy and fast. The death eaters would surly make an example of her, Hermione Granger, last of the golden Trio, brightest witch of her age and mudblood extraordinaire! At the thought of the golden Trio, Ron and Harry she let out a little sob. She kept running not looking back, 'what was left in this world for her' she thought as she passed out, a spike in the forest floor breaking the time glass of the timeturner she wore around her neck. The golden dust spreading on her body as her blood seeped into the ground mixing with the time-dust. Then with a golden flash she was gone.
When Hermione came too she was in the clearing before Hogwarts the nearly full moon shining brightly in her face as if too laugh at her misfortune, the dirt beneath her was soaked in her own blood, for a moment she was disoriented trying to remember what had happened, but wishing she hadn't tried to remember when the flood of memories hit her, the battle of Hogwarts, Ron's death, Harry's death, Ginny, Luna, Neville, Professor McGonagall, Professor Flitwick, Molly and Arthur, Fred, Percy, Lavender… she mentally stopped herself from counting, pay attention to the situation she reprimanded herself! There were two figures standing above her, 'death eaters' she thought grimly 'just my luck, but well haven't had much of that lately'. Her vision was blurred and her ears were buzzing. She jumped up and drew her wand, wincing at the pain that shot through her body.
"Easy there" she heard a voice say as the buzzing in her ears slowly subsided. She staggered and blindly threw two stunning spells at the two figures, blinking furiously to clear the blur on her vision. The figures dodged her stunners easily.
"Jeez, calm down woman. We're not gonna hurt you" one of the figures claimed but she wasn't fooled easily.
"Prove it," she hissed.
The figures were slowly getting clearer. They were both male around her age. The one closer to her looked suspiciously like Harry, but he lacked Harrys emerald eyes that could see through your soul. She looked to the other figure and her breath stopped in her throat, he looked like the younger version of man she'd known dead, that she'd seen in an old Order photo. She shook her head, she couldn't trust her eyes, blurry or not, there were lots of ways to hide your real identity in the wizarding world, glamors, polyjuice potion, etc. A voice pulled her out of her thoughts,
"Hey, are you okay?" she turned her head sharply ignoring the pain to look at the Harry lookalike putting a hand on her shoulder. Without hesitation she drew her wand at his neck.
"Hands off" she hissed.
"James, be careful she's defending herself. She's hurt badly!"
At that name the wheels in her head started spinning,
"James as in James Potter?" she asked forcefully voicing her thoughts.
" How does a stranger like you know my name?" the Harry lookalike called James demanded, trying to look threatening, which Hermione thought was rather amusing. It is extremely hard to look threatening when you're held at a wandpoint!
"James don't make your situation any worse mate, she's unstable like a hurt animal" the other figure said as Hermione glared at the James, (as she called him) and dug her wand further into his neck. At this point enough was enough for the other figure, his best mate was literally about to choke. Feeling immensely brave he shouted to the mystery girl:
" Hey girlie, enough is enough, you cant just appear out of thin air looking like you fought a war-" "I did" "and when we try to help you, you attack my best mate. Look, despite the way you've treated us I'll take you to Madame Pomphrey or whoever the hell you need to see!"
"Way to make the situation better Padfoot you hypocrite!"
"Shut up Prongs at least I'm not the one she's holding at a wandpoint!"
As they bickered back and forth inappropriately for such a situation Hermione froze up at the nicknames, was it possible that Wormtail told the Death Eaters about the Marauders even though he was dead, or was it something else entirely, like perhaps Timetravel the voice in her head teased her. That was too much for Hermione she dropped her wand from James's throat and falling into his arms with a final "Please save me whispered" as she passed out.
That was the first chapter, I made it so that Wormtail died before the Battle of Hogwarts, so yes this is AU! Sorry about any spelling or grammar mistakes!
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Disclaimer: J.K Rowling owns Harry Potter, not me :(
