This is my first story I've never posted anything before. I was actually watching the movie the other day and got inspired to write a story and have a twist on it.
Chapter 1
"I just hate those guys, had we moved here at the start of the year I would have shown them how good of a soccer player I am" An angry brown haired guy vented as he paced back and forth in his room. On his bed laid his twin sister, who looked just like him but, girl version, listening to his rant.
"Hey, don't let those jocks get to you. Now that you're going to another school, you have a fresh start and no one knows you" she said as she repeatedly threw a soccer ball in the air.
"Yeah you're right.. I don't know what they have against me, since we got here all they did was pick on me. Even Justin" he spat how he hated that guy
"Hey Justin isn't that bad, sure he acts immature time to time but, he has defended you from his teammates" Sabrina defended
"Yeah, only when you're there" he mumbled
"What was that?"
"Hm? Oh nothing but, yeah I plan to join the Illyria soccer team, get first string, and make those guys regret not having me on their team"
"Good luck.. I heard their team is really good" Sabrina warned, she heard last year Illyria destroyed Cornwall at a home match and Cornwall has a very good team.
"Can I ask you a favor though Sabrina?"
"Shoot"
"Um, well I kinda want a different image than the one I had at Cornwall, there I was an outcast. Back at our old school I was average, I was known mainly because of soccer.. I want you to help me be popular" he ended looking hopeful at his sister now sitting up
"Of course! So does this mean we can finally get you a new haircut and some new clothes!?"
"What's wrong with my hair?" he turned over to the mirror, touching it with his hand
"Well that bowl cut of yours isn't gonna get any girl, especially because I don't think you'll be able to see them with your hair covering your eyes" She pulled him away from the mirror to take him to the best hairdresser she knows
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"Hey Paul!" Sabrina walked over to a blonde haired guy wearing a teal button down shirt with a black shirt over it.
"Sabrina what can I do you for?" He asked releasing her and then looking over to Viorel
"We need your help to make this.." she waved her hand around Viorel's head "look WOW"
"Hmm well you have come to the best person. After I'm done all the girls will be turning their heads to see the owner of those cute blue eyes" Viorel smiled awkwardly and looked away feeling weird having Paul stare at eyes
Some time later…
"And done! Sabrina come over and see!" Paul called
Once she arrived to where Viorel was sitting Paul turned the chair around to show her his masterpiece
"What do you think?" Paul asked as Sabrina looked at Viorel's new look
"Wow indeed, you did great Paul! Vio all the girls are gonna go crazy for you, this is a good look for you"
Viorel looked back to the mirror and looked at his new hairdo. His hair was shorter his bangs no longer hovered over his eyes. He now had a fade and his thick brown hair on the top of his head was combed forward as the front was spiked to the side. It didn't look greasy or shiny, Paul did a good job having it look natural and dry. With his hair out of the way you can clearly see his bright blue eyes that no person can resist.
"Thank you so much Paul!" Sabrina squealed as she gave him a huge hug
"Yeah thanks man, it looks great" Viorel said as he gave Paul a quick hug and pat on the back
"No problem! Dude.." He finished awkwardly giving him a soft punch on the shoulder
"Anyway... we're off to buy him some new clothes at the mall."
"What? The mall.." Viorel grunted
"Yes, remember what I said? You need new clothes yours are getting old and if you wanna be cool you gotta look cool too" Viorel grumbled at that, he hated going shopping
"See ya Paul and thanks again you're amazing!" She said as she pulled Viorel outside
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After a long day of shopping the two finally got back home and finished packing for Viorel's move in day.
"Thanks for today Sabrina I couldn't have done this without you"
"I'm happy to help, I am you big sister after all" she said with a smile
"Only by 15 mins.." He retorted
"Point is I am and I can't wait to hear how things go! Keep me updated!"
"Okay" he yawned "I'll see ya tomorrow. Night" he said as he walked to his room
"Good night!"
Tell me what you think so far almost done with chapter two. Not entirely sure where this story is gonna go so we'll see...