Okay many people must be mad at me for what I did in the last chapter, and really I must inform you that I am not sorry, at all. So with that being said, god exams were two days ago, which is when I thought I'd finish this chapter, however, two days later and here I am, writing, like, finally. But other then that I hope you still enjoy this story, and if you want can you tell me things that would make it more interesting? And please if you do, don't be offended if I change it up a bit, I will ask you.
Well now that I've told you this, I wonder if I should change the rating, I mean like there are no lemons and only rape has ever been mentioned and even then it wasn't graphic, only mentioned. But then again in the future I might do a lemon or a lime. But then again he's only twelve so XD, but yeah. Also for those who are hoping for a harem, or are expecting it, I'm not making this a harem story. I don't like harems and it's really a turn off for a lot of good stories with good plotlines, it's a bit over used but I'm not saying I have anything against them, if you like harems that's fine, hell it's great. but not my thing.
Well I don't like incest but it's only for Kushina and Naruto, or Naruto with any of his sisters or female cousins. brothers and male cousins, sure GO AHEAD I LIKE YAOI AND GOD I don't care. XD don't judge and if you have a problem with it and call me a hypocrite, I possible won't care but please refrain from calling me a faggot or dumbass since it's the same thing, I get it a lot of it and it's annoying.
Also no harem, just no. He will he multiple people who he just might be interested it, or someone liking him, even then I'm not taking that far and I'm not caring about pairings until the second part of this story.
Then again most are interested in where this story will go, so I'll tell you something that I've been thinking of. There are going to (maybe if I'm not lazy) be two books. The first series, the original, is this one, and I might make Shippuden a different story and change the rating there. It would be easier and so this story isn't too long, and I know some people don't like those overly long stories with 100 chapters, it'll maybe end around the 35-40 number of chapters. At the end when I do the first chapter of that I may put a link.
just continue along.
Standing in front of him was a girl his height, with short cut mint hair that was a little dark, held from her eyes with a red pin. She had sun-kissed skin, covered by a white crop top showing her flat muscled stomach, with chainmail under the shirt. She had a white skirt, with black tight shorts under it with mesh attached to her end going just above her knees. She had her headband around her waist, and her ninja pouch was under her skirt around her right thigh. She was also wearing black shinobi shoes that shoed her toes but went halfway up her shins.
But what caught his attention was her eyes. They were hazel in color with no pupil in them (which made him wonder if everyone who had problems didn't have them. Haku didn't, Gaara, and a few others, like Hinata. He knew of the timid girl's past, but then again all of her family didn't have pupils, but if her heard right, they enslaved the side branch so maybe there was something there... But that would not make sense since he'd gone through things, things he can admit had gone wrong for him, but he still has pupils. Shigito hadn't had pupils, and Naruto, since he was him, knew he went through some things he couldn't tell Kikumi).
But it was what he saw in them. They were bright and happy, cheerful. But he saw those eyes in his, before he 'awakened'. It was of someone trying to act happy in front of others, and he understood why. Jinchuriki's weren't treated right, they were seen as cannon fodder and used for wars and even then they're village hated them for what they held in them, why would this girl be different?
Mito was respected though, since most of the leaf at the time when she sealed it in herself had only been a few clans and very little civilians, so they understood how it was with her and the seal. She was respected for sacrificing herself and the burden she had to bare with losing her husband, leaving her a widowed mother with a demon that she had to seal inside her.
But as time changed people stopped respecting Jinchuriki, well the new generation after Mito's children had had theirs did. Which would explain why most elders, who have lived for seventy years or more, still respected him and didn't treat him like the others. He had always liked the old people, and had a few conversations with a few certain elders.
(One was an old woman, who, for some reason, always needed help with her groceries. He'd help her time to time when he was in the academy, and he still did. For some reason she said he reminded her of a boy who used to help her, but she never saw him again and said he might've died in a mission, which made sense)
But he knew it wasn't the same for others, they didn't understand how it was to suffer knowing a demon is living in you.
So the only way to protect yourself was to block yourself off from others, only allowing limited contact with others.
And it was the same for this girl, for Gaara. She distracted herself from the loneliness with happiness and joy, large smiles and joy filled shouts.
He could actually see a little of his old self in her. well he still acted that way sometimes, couldn't get rid of old habits.
He then noticed that everyone was staring at them weirdly, a few from the other countries were glaring at her, muttering things like 'Monster', 'it's one of those things, we better keep our distance or it'll kill us'. It made him ball his fist before he registered what she was going to say next.
"So you're the ni-"
Before she could say more he had covered her mouth with his right hand and grabbed her arm with his other. He glared at her and turned to look at the confuse looks his old classmates were giving him. He didn't want them to know about that, well yet anyways. He didn't want to work with two people who were already irritating as it was, didn't need them to hate him anymore.
"I have to talk to you" He then pulled her out of the examination room ignoring al the confused and narrowed eyes on him. Shikamaru especially as he was staring suspiciously at the two.
He closed the door and pulled the girl to the stairs.
"Sow what was that about?" she asked. Naruto sighed and rubbed his forehead. "Fuu... was it?" seeing her nod he continued, "You see the things is no one in the village knows of my status" she nodded, her mouth forming an O. "You could be disqualified if anyone ever found out, it's punishable by death" she nodded.
"No wonder, I only sense a little dislike from those kids, not hate, no wonder they let you talk to them" at he sad look he shook his head, "No that's not it. but never mind that, so..." he glared dangerously at her. "Seven tails huh? I assume you met Gaara?" he asked. she tilted her head.
"The one tails Jinchuriki"
"Ah yeah I met him!"
"Yeah well, I'm Naruto " she nodded.
"Yeah the nine tails right?"
"Yeah"
"Well-"
The door opened and Sasuke was peeking out, "Hey the exam is going to start now"
they nodded and both walked back into the exam room.
They all stared at the man standing in front of the exam room, his hands in his grey coat, and a frown on his scarred face. He surveyed all the student until he looked at all the Jinchuriki in the room, which didn't go unnoticed by them, and spoke.
"Welcome to the first part of the Chuunin exams, I will be your proctor"
Naruto tuned him out, knew knows it's a bad idea but he had to know, to see if the Namikaze were in the room. He looked around at all the contestants, looking for hair like his since that Menma guy had black hair, which would almost make it impossible to see him. When his research bared no fruit, he had to go get a number and sit down.
He sweat dropped at his seat number.
99
he rubbed his forehead and ignored the amuse smirk from the proctor, Ibiki.
Sitting down somewhere close to the front, like four desk from the front, he sighed and put his number in his pocket. He didn't care, and didn't notice, when two females sat beside him.
His eyes widened, for some reason he felt a Namikaze's chakra around him. He had noticed this before, that for some reason the Namikaze has this feel to them that made them... feel alike.
He looked around him and looked to his right noticing Hinata, who waved shyly at him, no it wasn't her. He smiled at her before he looked to his left, and his eyes narrowed. Sitting beside him was a girl with white hair staring at him with cold icy eyes. He stared back at her with bluebell eyes. They both stared at each other not backing down.
"So you're one of them" he said, he didn't want anyone to know about it yet, and he didn't know if the Namikaze had come out of hiding yet.
She nodded, "Cry"
"Naruto"
They turned to look at the board, well this is going to be interesting.
Fuu sighed, she was sitting beside some dude with black hair styled into a ducks ass, well in her opinion it looked like one. She noticed him looking at her. Then she remembered that he was with Naruto, the nine tails Jinchuriki.
She had been happy to know that there was more like her, and always wondered if they went through the same treatment she went through... possibly. That gaara guy's teammates seemed scared of him and when they learned what she was they grew even more scared.
But then again maybe the blonde, Naruto didn't have to go through that since no one his age knew about it, and no one was allowed to talk about it. She sighed again and thought about the blonde.
He seemed cool.
Gaara seemed like a scary guy, not that it fazed her, because she knew she could possible win, she had the stronger demon. But it didn't really matter, the seven tails told her, since if he was strong enough he could kill her easily, it did not matter what tailed beast they had.
Though if they were matched then maybe she could win, it was all confusing.
But deciding to focus on what was going on she looked at the guy beside her.
"So you know Naruto?" She asked. He looked surprised for a moment before nodding.
"How do you know the loser"
Loser?
She chuckled, "Loser? How the hell is the j-" she stopped herself remembering what he said. He must have been bullied or something, well whatever, "I mean... he might not want me to tell you, but we just met now"
He narrowed his eyes, noticing what she was going to say something, but didn't bother with it and turned away wit ha grunt. Fuu stared at him with a raised brow. Muttering 'emo' under her breath he now had a tick mark on his head
"Now you have one hour to complete the test"