Hello! This is my first ever fanfiction so go easy on me if I suck. Reviews and criticism are welcome but no flames.
I was at a loss of what my first story should be, but I came up with a popular topic: Pokémon: Ash betrayed.
I've seen a lot and decided to do one of my own and there are really good ones out there, but thanks to Snivy24 for the Fanfic that inspired me to do this, His Ash Betrayed story is really good.
The Paring is Ash x Legendary, I'm not ripping Snivy24 off, This is my Favourite Shipping.
Also Ash will be smarter before he got betrayed.
Please let me know what you think and like if you Like It!
DISCLAMIER: I don't own Pokémon, It Belongs to Nintendo. and Snivy24's "Return of the Chosen One" is his own story and if they are any problems, Fanfiction has the right to remove this story.
Key:
"Speech"
"Thoughts"
"Telepathy"
"Pokémon Speech"
Chapter 1:
FLASHBACK: 20 years ago, The Hall of Origin.
The great Goddess Pokémon Arceus had finally made up her mind. This child would be the Chosen One, Saving the Legendries, destroy Criminal Organizations. and restore peace to the earth when needed.
She had called a meeting for this very special occasion, Soon everyone arrived.
"Lady Arceus, What is the occasion?" Asked Dialga, The ruler of time.
"My Sons and Daughters, I Have made up my mind, I have decided who the Chosen One is going to be."
This sent a flurry of exited chatter through the hall.
"His name is Ash Ketchum, He shall live in Pallet Town until he is Ten to go on his journey." Arceus explained.
"That Sounds so similar to his Father." Said Ho-Oh, Thinking back to when his Father, Red Ketchum was the Chosen one.
"Lady Arceus, Are you sure it is wise to leave The Chosen One with these humans?" Asked Cobalion, "I have seen them, There are some humans that Abuse our kind and even Force them to battle!"
"It would be best if he stayed with the former Chosen One's wife, She's the only family he has left" Replied Arceus.
" I agree with Cobalion on this one my lady." Said Zekrom "Some of the humans there are not as pure as the ones you talk about"
"Yes you're right Zekrom" Said Arceus "Which is why I will be there for him"
"He's almost about to be born!" Squealed Celebi in Delight.
"To Ash Ketchum, The Chosen One!" Cheered the Legendries.
And that is my first chapter of my first story! Please tell me your opinion and I'll try to answer any questions that you might have.
Bye All!