Hey guys so I'm sure you're wondering about this. So I've decided to rewrite the first chapter. Make some changes add better dialogue, that sort of thing you know. I like the first chapter, but I could have done so much better. I'm so glad though that you guys actually are enjoying reading this story. I will admit, I didn't expect this much. But I do think that more Minato x Minako/Hamuko fanfictions should be out there and complete. I'm not sure how to put it, but I see complete fanfictions of the two of them paired with other people then when they are paired with each other.

A theory: So anyways I have this weird theory. I think its canon that the Shin Megami Tensei series which Persona is a spin-off of is actually a multi-verse. If I have the correct information, it's been confirmed that that the names of the protagonist are all canon they are just different universes. So in my opinion a lot of the fanfictions that people write, can be considered canon, the serious ones at least. They are all just part of a different Universe then the one that we have actually seen. PM me if you agree with that, I'm just curious about you guys.

Anyways I hope you enjoy this rework, when I complete this I hope to see it on TV Tropes, because that is the ultimate goal. Also I give you guys permission to circulate it on writing sites that I haven't been on, as long as you give me credit for the story, and of course as long as you send me a link to it so I can read the reviews. Anyways I ramble way too much. Let's begin the story, it's going to be a crazy ride.

April 6, 2009 (Monday)

A train sped down the tracks. Inside the train were only a few people, two of which stood out. They were both sleeping, their heads leaning against each other. One of them was a girl with auburn colored hair that was tied back. Red colored clip-on earphones with music blaring from them were in her ears.

Leaning against her shoulder was a boy the same age as her. He had dark blue colored hair. Silver colored clip on earphones were also in his ears.

The train jarred, causing the girl to wake up. The girl's eyes open, revealing a striking scarlet red color. She blinks looking over at the weight on her shoulder. A smile graces her lips, as she gently shakes the boy leaning on her shoulder. He groans opening his eyes revealing a mesmerizing deep blue color. He picks his head up from the girl's shoulder. Suddenly a male voice comes over the intercom.

"Due to a malfunction in the switching system, today's rail schedule has been greatly altered." The male voice reported. "We apologize to any customers who were in a hurry. The next stop is Iwatodai… Iwatodai. This is the final train bound for Tatsumi Port Island. Please take care to board before our departure. As the train comes to a stop, the girl looks over at the boy.

"Come on we're going to be late if we don't hurry." The girl tells him. He only nods tiredly in response. They both grab their bags before exiting the train. The girl looks at the clock at the train station finding it reads 11:59. "I hope they aren't mad at us for being this late." She says biting her lower lips.

Just before the clock became 12:00, a glowing blue butterfly passes before them. Then the clock strikes 12, both the girl and boy's MP3 players stopped working. The lights go out, and the train doors don't close. It seemed like everything electronic had stopped working.

As the two of them walk outside they find the sky tinted an eerie green color. A few coffins lined the streets. There were puddles of a red liquid which the girl didn't even want to think about what it was. She looks around nervously, anxiety rising inside of her. She jumps slightly when a hand slips in her. But then she takes a breath, looking over to the boy. A small smile graces her face, while the boy gives a reassuring one.

"Thank you." She tells him. Both of them begin to walk down the street. Soon they came to the front of a large building. This was the Iwatodai Dorm where they were supposed to be.

"There you two are, you're both late." A voice says. The girl jumps a bit, with the boy just staring blankly ahead. They turn to find a boy who was wearing a black striped shirt. He had chilling grey eyes and black hair. "Please sign this, it's a contract that states you'll both take responsibility for your actions." The child hands the paper over to the girl.

She grabs it, eyes filled with distrust. She looked down to read the contract, only to find one line on it. [I choose this fate of my own free will.] Underneath the words were two line that they could sign. The girl takes a pen, writing her name down. [Minako Arisato] She then hands the pen over to the boy who signs it. [Minato Arisato] Then he hands the paper over.

The child takes it looking it over. "Very well. Time is something no one can escape. It delivers us all to the same end. Wishing won't make it go away, no matter how much we hope that to be true. And history is always bound to repeat itself. And so it begins." After saying that with an ominous tone of voice, the child fades away until it was like he was never there in the first place. Chills run down Minako's spine when she saw what happened, and she squeezes Minato's hand.

"Who's there!?" A female voice shouted. They could hear footsteps coming down the steps. Turning they find a girl standing there. She had short light-brown hair and brown eyes. Her clothing consisted of a pink sweater jacket, a loose red ribbon, a black miniskirt, black stockings with white lines, and a heart shaped choker. Her eyes were widening in shock as she saw the two of them standing there.

"How can you be… but it's… don't tell me!" The girl began reaching for something that was in a holster near her hips. Minako's eyes widened as she noticed that it looked like a gun. Her body tensed, getting ready to protect Minato. Her scarlet red eyes narrowed dangerously, pupils becoming cat like.

"Takeba wait!" A female tone of voice ordered. The girl stopped, her body visibly tensing. Walking down the steps was another girl, more like woman. She had a voluptuous figure. Her skin was pale, maybe even more then Minato's. Her red eyes, which were darker then Minako's took both of them in. Long dark red hair covered her left eye. She wore the Gekkoukan high uniform, except she wasn't wearing the jacket. This was put together with a white blouse, and a big red ribbon. Her shoes were black high-heeled boots and Minako wondered how much they would cost wanting a pair for herself.

Nobody moved for a few minutes before the lights came back on and the girl visibly relaxed. "Perhaps we should take this to the lounge so I can explain." The woman told all three of them. They all nodded, walking to the lounge. Minako and Minato both sat down on the couch. Minako felt a weight on her lap. She looked down to find Minato's head was resting there. She smiled bringing her hand up to pet his head. Meanwhile the woman and girl watched this silently, before the woman finally spoke up.

"I wasn't expecting you two to arrive late. My name is Mitsuru Kirijo. I'm one of the students who live in this dorm." The girl looks between the two of them.

"Who are they?" She questioned.

"Their transfer students. It was a last minute decision to have them moved here. They'll eventually be moved to rooms in the normal dorms." Mitsuru explained.

"I'm Minako Arisato." The girl cheerfully told them, a smile occupying face. She combs her fingers through Minato's hair. "This is my twin brother Minato Arisato." She tells them.

"That's going to get confusing do you have another name we can call you?" Mitsuru asked. Minako gave her a smile and nodded.

"Yes, everybody normally calls me Hamuko." Mitsuru nodded, before turning to the girl.

"Allow me to introduce her, this here is Yukari Takeba. She's going to be a junior like you two this spring. Anyway, can you please escort them to their rooms? I have to go check up on some things." With that Mitsuru walked up the stairs, leaving Yukari alone with the Arisato twins.

Gently Minako shakes her brother awake. He groans, just nuzzling his head into her stomach. "You two are awfully close for twins." Yukari commented. Minako just gives a smile.

"We've been close since ten years ago." She responded. A questioning look appears in Yukari's eyes.

"Ten years ago?" She questions. Minako's smile falters and her bright scarlet red eyes seem to grow darker.

"I don't really feel like talking about it. I wouldn't ask Minato either." Yukari shrugs, deciding not to push the questioning any further. "Come on Minato, we're going to be shown where our rooms are." Again Minato groaned unable to get away from his twin sister's constant shaking. He lifts his head up from off her lap.

Soon the two of them were following behind Yukari to the second floor. She led them to the end of the hallway. "The second floor is where you can find the guys rooms." She hands Minato a key. "This is your key, don't lose it or Mitsuru is going to be angry." She then turns to look at Minako who is chewing her lower lip in worry. "Is something wrong?" She questions in concern.

Minako turns her head to look at her. "Oh, nothing really. Don't worry about it." She then watches as her brother opens the door, before shutting it behind him.

"Okay lets head to your room next." With that Minako finds herself following behind Yukari once again. She leads Minako up to the third floor, where they head down the hallway. "This is your room, here's your key. Like I told Arisato-kun, make sure you don't lose it." Minako nods, beginning to open her door.

"I forgot to mention it with Arisato-kun here, but I would appreciate it, if you two didn't mention anything about today." Yukari told her.

"I promise I won't. I'll also make sure Minato doesn't either." Minako's voice was laced with exhaustion. She enters the room, closing the door behind her. Looking at her new room, she found it to be very clean and orderly. 'So this is going be where we are going to be staying; I wonder what this year will be like?' As Minako thought about this, she got undressed. She put on orange shorts and a red night shirt. Then she got into her bed. It didn't take long for exhaustion to take hold.

Minako's Nightmare

An elven year old Minako was searching desperately for her younger twin, unable to find him. Bodies lay strew around, two of them their parents. Tears brimmed in her eyes, as she looked around. It wasn't long before she saw a familiar head of blue hair. She rushes towards him, uncaring about the carnage that surrounded her. When she reaches him though, he disappears. She looks around in confusion trying to locate a sign of her twin.

Tears stream down her face. It was then that she heard the terrifying roar of a monster. She turned to find a black clothed figure standing in front of her. It raised it sword before bringing it down. Minako screams before waking up.

Real World

Minako shoots up from her bed. Tears streaming down her. She looks out the window only to find that it was still dark outside. Taking a deep shuddering breath, she gets up from her bed. She had known this would happen. She couldn't sleep without Minato nearby. Quietly, so as not to wake the other members of the dorm up, Minako opens her door. She tiptoes downstairs, before heading down the hall to Minato's room. She opens his door, before quietly shutting it.

Minato lay under the covers. He was wearing no shirt, and only had on a pair of blue colored shorts. Minako as silent as a mouse crept over, pulling the covers back, before slipping into the bed. Minato groans, opening his eyes to see that Minako was in bed with him. He moved over, until his back was touching the wall. Minako gives him a smile.

She moves closer to her twin, before burying her head into the croak of his neck. She wraps her arms around him, needing to feel that he was actually there and he would disappear. "Promise me you won't leave Minato." She whispered. "Don't you dare leave me! I don't know what I would do without you." As she said this, tears begin to go down her face and her voice hitched. Minato sighs, wrapping his own arms around her. He gently begins to pet her head.

"You idiot, I would never leave you. After all we only have each other." He said in a quiet tone of voice. It was this voice that helped Minako to calm down. She smiled as she began to drift off asleep. Minato kept petting her head for a little bit longer, before falling asleep himself.