Hey guys, I just realized how late I am again with updates and what-not. But as promised, here's the re-write version of Neon Love; how this story will be introduced will be differently; each OC will have their own main focus and their first encounters with their intended crushes. But first, a prologue and my OC's first encounter with her crush (which most of you would already know who ;) )
Enjoy! ^^
Prologue...
Neon Love...this feeling, this condition...involves our utmost vital organ: our heart. Neon Love is more than just a feeling, it's an illuminate aliment which involves the glowing aura coming within the heart. It's known to be the rarest condition in the whole world as only 7 girls worldwide posses that unique feeling. The cause of it or the origin is yet to be known, yet it is mysterious. Some people claim that the source of the lambent condition would be due to their potential of making the feeling of love a new hope for life.
Legend has it that whenever a girl falls in love with her fateful crush, her heart begins to illuminate in a color to her liking. Only the affected girls will see the neon light from their chest,. The same result will happen towards others who share the same symptom. Moreover, the color increases in contrast and brightness whenever her relationship is taken into another level. Soon, her destined partner will share the same color and he'll shine brightly with her.
Thus, this story will focus on these 7 beautiful girls worldwide who have discovered the world's rarest aliment. The 7 colors: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, violet, and pink seem to be the most prominent colors of sit back and enjoy the beginning of this illuminate journey, starting here in Tokyo, Japan...
Tokyo, Japan...
"Whew! Those were fun and effortless battles as the usual!" A 16 year old's feminine voice states.
"I know right? But I don't know if my Lucent Phoenix can endure more unexpected battles for another day," a masculine voice sighed.
Here in the modernized city of Tokyo, Japan, a 16 year old scarlet haired girl was hanging out with her 17 year old childhood best friend, battling different bladers as the usual. She's wearing a cute light gray Ariana Grande Emoji crop top with a simple pleated black skirt and a hot pink Kanji symbols vest. This Italian teen also wears a beige bowtie waist belt and black ankle-length combat boots with shoe laces. For accessories, she wears a lovely black laced head band, black and pink, kawaii fluffy Neko finger less gloves, neon pink heart earrings, and a black music sheet bracelet on her left wrist. Her hairstyle was in a semi-ponytail with the rest of it left loose and slightly wavy.
"C'mon Frieda, can't we have a little break, even if it's just only for 5 minutes?" The Italian-American guy known as Matthew asks wearily. He's currently wearing an ombre black and white plaid shirt, simple slim blue denim jeans, and white hi tops converse sneakers. This chestnut haired dude even wears stainless steel black ear piercings, a white Baymax-themed beanie, black Norton sunglasses, and a rainbow kitten pin on his shirt.
"Don't worry Mattie, I know a top-notch candy shop nearby and we can just mess around there, whadd'ya say?" Frieda suggests with a cute wink. Matthew smiled back.
"You're optimistic as usual, Fri Fri. Of course I'll join!" The Italian-American teen replies. Despite, Matthew's downside to his personality, he's relieved to the due fact that his friend's been positive, that is, if he stays on her good side. Aside from that, the 2 teenagers entered Mecha Neko's Candy Shop and were in complete awe. A huge galore of lolipops, gumdrops, chocolates, bubblegum, sweet baked goods, and even more really struck the spot to their orbs.
"Told you so, Mattie! " The scarlet haired girl exclaims.
"I know! Shut up and grab some candy!" Matthew cheers gleefully. Frieda began finding candy to her liking and the ones she wanted to purchase. Within a few minutes, she heard a familiar voice that made her heart pound and her face fluster.
"Hey! Fancy seeing you here again Frieda!" A masculine voice cheers.
Periwinkle orbs glanced at chocolate brown ones as she was literally standing next to him. Oblivious of the fact that Matthew continued to find some eye-catching candy, Frieda's heart continues pounding and a neon pink light shines from her heart.
"This feeling...am I'm really in...in love again?" After a paused moment, the scarlet haired girl went back to her senses as she playfully flirts. "Masamumu! What a surprise. I never knew you'd be here at this very moment, lovely."
"Yeah, I wanted to chill after battling with some petty bladers. You should've seen the looks on their faces afterwards!" the Japanese teenager, known as Masamune chuckled.
"Well what a coincidence! My friend here and I wanted some sweets in our mouths." Frieda responds, blushing a little. The 2 of them bought some sugary sweets and sat down on the seats near the window.
"I know that feeling," Masamune replies, smiling. "Hey! Mind if I get your number? I noticed we haven't talked much in forever, so maybe we can hangout or something tomorrow."
"Okay, I'm so down for it." The scarlet haired girl answers, taking out her pink covered iPhone6 to exchange phone numbers with Masamune. "And how about we hangout by the Bey Park, if you really don't mind."
"Nah, it's cool. I'll be there no problem!" The Japanese ravenette replies, with a wink. Frieda smiled back while she blushed some more. She even wonders how far she's willing to take it with Masamune in the future, but that's pretty much another story. After a few moments, Masamune said his goodbyes with the scarlet haired girl and Matthew returns with a bag of sweets and noticed that the 16 year old girl was blushing quite a bit.
"Hey, something wrong, bestie?" The chestnut haired teen wonders.
"Oh, it's nothing really. It's just that I may be falling for someone..." Frieda whispers, closing her eyes giggling.
"I see..." Matthew replies, smirking. "You're in love, aren't you?"
"Sh-shut up!" The scarlet haired girl laughs.
The following day, Frieda sat on a park bench, watching the other bladers battle and play it out, growing in both strength and maturity as bladers. Right now, her best friend Matthew stayed alone in their apartment with Madoka, his girlfriend. The Italian girl flusters as she suddenly felt her heart race and the same pink neon light appearing. Today was the day that she'd meet Masamune Kadoya here. After exchanging phone numbers, the 16 year old recently texted him back that she was merely waiting for him. Within a minute, 2 hands obstructed Frieda's vision as they covered her periwinkle eyes.
"Guess who?!" the familiar masculine voice was heard.
"It's you again! Masamumu!" The Italian teen guessed, smiling.
"Bingo!" Masamune uncovered her eyes and immediately sat next to her. Another heart pounding experience has begun for Frieda as she was now sitting next to the guy she was hoping for.
"Masamumu, I certainly love your surprising sense of humor," Frieda giggles.
"Yeah, well I try. Anyways, wonderful weather we're having huh?" the Japanese ravenette asks as he looks up at the blue sky and cumulus clouds.
"Mhmm...and the temperature's quite nice for today. No one was really bugging you at the moment, right?"
"Nah, except I inconveniently encountered some mob of fangirls, though they must've recognized this number one as a former Gan Gan Galaxy member!"
"Geez, you never change Masamumu," The scarlet haired girl giggled. Masamune smiled as he found her laughs to be...cute. It wasn't until after a few moments of this enjoyable conversation that Masamune has said the unexpected, according to Frieda, that is.
"Oh, I almost forgot! I'm really itching to ask you out on a date in like 3 days. It'll be fun, I'll promise you that!" Masamune proposes.
Another heart pound has really struck Frieda. She found it quite unexpected that Masamune would ask her out at such short notice. Of course it would be a downright insult to the Japanese blader that she'd turn it down, so instead she decided to accept the offer.
"Of course, I would never say no to this opportunity. You're such a sweet gentleman for asking me out anyways," The Italian girl replies with a bright smile.
"Awesome! I can't wait then! See ya by then!" Masamune excitedly chants before dashing out. The 16 year old was a bit confused at first, but shrugged to the fact that all she had to do was accept the dating offer. However, she seemed to be a bit clueless on how these dates typically work. The scarlet haired girl stood up and continued walking on the streets. Her heart continuously glowed in the same neon pink color.
"So...I could be in love, yeah?"
End of Prologue...
Bleh, I know the prologue's short and crappy, but didn't know what else to add or how to change it (I'll try doing that later). Anyways, this is one of those fanfics where I'll be needing OC's. The OC's Form is now posted in my profile, just underneath my current info/ contact places.
Bonus: any accepted O's will have a concept art of their own via my DeviantART account, so check that out too.
And here are the rules (I know they're pretty straight-forward, but it's for good measures)
1. 1 OC per author (as space is limited)
2. Only PM me the filled forms (forms via review will be ignored)
3. Use good English grammar (unless English's not your first language)
4. Crushes are obviously first come-first serve! (Same goes for neon colors and neon charms. I'll let you know when each one of them are taken)
5. Be as descriptive as possible.
Any questions, just ask moi! :D
List of Accepted OCs (by name, neon color, neon charm, crush, and creator)
1. Frieda Belvini Love-Sala- pink, heart, Masamune Kadoya, Kawaiino Tenshi Kiki (me)
2. Ninel Bychkov-blue, whirlpool, Dashan Wang, Lemon Quartz
3. Alicia Nightshade-violet, moon crescent, King, sweetcupcake11
4. Akemi Misaki-yellow, star, Dynamis, EvilArchAngel
5. Gin Sakaturo-green, flower, Tsubasa, The Lonely Potato
6. Katsu Mura-red, dove, Nile, CalyptoTheDarkKnight
7. Kadeja Daley-orange, teardrop, Kyoya, EndlessEcho
Update: All spots have been filled, but there will be one mysterious OC coming in later! XD