This idea came to me after I saw all of the verbal and sometimes physical abuse that Bit had to endure in the original Zoids New Century Zero. That, and the various things that I felt were wrong with Bit's personality. So, I'm writing a new story which I am posting as a challenge to anyone willing to accept. Also, I just managed to set up a Deviantart account today! Check out the art I've posted.

Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids!


"..." = Talking

"Italics" = Thinking

"Italic Underlined" = Dark Judge Talking

"Bold" = Yelling

"Bold Underlined" = ZBC Judge Talking


Prologue: Rebirth of a Hero!


"I... Lost...! I'm sorry, everyone! I failed!" thought a man floating in a void.

This man looked to be about sixteen years old. He was wearing a red and white coat over a teal shirt with grey pants. He wears maroon gloves with a gold, four-pointed symbol on the back of the palms. He has blond, spiky hair and green eyes.

This man is Bit Cloud, former member of a Zoid Battle Team known as the Blitz Team. But it didn't end up so well for Bit. He and his Zoid, Liger Zero, tried hard to prevent the Berserk Fury from destroying the world at the Royal Cup, but they failed. Everyone died along with him, and Bit felt it was all his fault. The last thing Bit saw before his death was the dying face of the woman he loved.

"Forgive me... My love... I failed you..." Bit thought to himself.

"You have not failed anyone, Bit Cloud." said a melodious voice.

Bit looked around as he tried to find the source of the voice, only to be blinded by a white light that seemed to appear out of nowhere. The harshness of this light forced Bit to cover his eyes or risk being blinded by such a powerful light. When it died down, Bit opened his eyes and gasped in shock.

Standing in front of him was a woman that looked to be in her early twenties. She had porcelain skin, long silver hair that fell to her waist, an hourglass figure, and chocolate brown eyes. She was wearing a snow white kimono with a pink cherry blossom petal print on it, and had a huge zanbato blade strapped to her back. But the strangest thing about her was the fact that there was a golden halo above her neck, and eight beautiful white eagle wings on her back.

Bit got into a defensive stance as he didn't know who this woman was, but he sure as heck didn't want to find out who she was in a real fight. But the thing that threw him for a loop was the two words that she said as she walked towards him.

"Hello, son…" she said.


Like I said, this is an adoptable story for anyone willing to adopt it! And I have indeed started a deviantart account if you guys wanna check out my artwork. Review or PM me if you'd be interested in adopting this story, and would like any additional info on how to write this one. Also if guest reviewer Omnipotent 18 is reading this, know that the story you requested is currently a work in progress! I don't know when I can post it, though.