RESPONSE TO THE REVIEWS:
Linkwonka88: wow…tough stuff. I just arrived at my Nona's house a few hours ago after staying in the car or like 7 hours. We usually go to my grandma's house (which I prefer), but not this time. Oh well. All bad things come to an end, at least. And I think u should make an account, then u can just PM and not have to wait until there's an update.
MikeTeaveeTheGreat: (btw I LOVE ur username) Thanks! ^^
Smiley101: thank you! And I think Charlie would act about something like this. But then again, he's only 12, so yeah. But it's a fictional world and everything's possible in those.
*EACH PARAGRAPH TELLS THE STORY OF EACH FAMILY.
*CHARLOTTE WONKA BELONGS TO FANGURLZ. GO CHECK OUT THEIR STORIES.
*ENJOY AND PLZ TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK
EPILOGUE:
The two adults were deeply asleep when two nearly identical figures crashed onto their bed. Violet was the first to wake up, staring firmly at the two jumping four-year-olds that invaded her and Mike's territory. "Get over here, Britts!" Then she tackled the little choppy-haired girl, while Mike (who had just shaken himself awake) grabbed the small boy by the torso with a cry of "THIS IS SPARTA!" The four wrestled for a bit, until the twins managed to pin the couple down (correction: they only pinned Mike down cuz Violet was too strong and Mike was kinda weak as it was). The family laughed and stayed splattered around the bed before they all decided to get up and eat breakfast.
"And this," Veruca presented to the three-year-old, "is where all the ladies and machines sort the nuts." The little jewel had an awe-struck expression on her pale face, her small, chocolate eyes as wide as they could ever get. Two years after adopting this angel, Veruca Salt, now the owner of Salt's Salty Nuts, decided to show her daughter around the place where all the 'magic' happened. The posh business-woman smiled down at the raven-haired girl, silently thanking the Lord for letting her be a part of young Ruby's life.
Augustus Gloop took the fifth tray of biscuits out of the oven and dropped it on the stone counter, the warm sugary smell of triple chocolate-chip and ginger cookies intensifying even more. Little Julliett sat on the counter beside the cookies, her mother and soon-to-be-born brother in a different room sleeping soundly. This was usually what the two gingers did on Saturdays while the woman of the house slept: go to the gas station and buy Popsicles, bake cookies, or just eat whatever they found in the storage. The usually noisy butchery downstairs was unusually silent, as if it were also taking a nap. Suddenly, a loud snort came from the master bedroom. The two glanced at each other for one second before trying unsuccessfully to hold their laughter.
"One drop of nerds green" Charlie exclaimed in his 'scientist voice'. The mixture glowed a striking neon green.
"Three drops of Mistletoe red!" Charlotte announced in a similar voice, hints of her excitement unhidden. Their 'potion' sparkled red like a rose. The two laughed and turned towards their son William, who seemed more interested in picking his nose and ingesting the finds than in creating the utmost perfect and completely unusual Christmas candy. The two smiled sadly and scooped him in a hug, the family of three bursting out laughing again.
So after 5 months and 3 days (more than that actually, since I had written the few first chapters earlier on) the story is FINISHED! Damn I'm so happy. Not sure why. Oh well.
But anyway, please tell me what you liked, didn't like, what was your favorite part or how can I improve my writing so I can give you better stuff to read!
So yeah, I have no idea of when I'll be updating my other stories…I kinda lost my inspiration for the 50 one-shots so there's a chance I'll re-write it. Lil Ones is on the waiting list and will be put back on track after I finish Once Upon A Time In CATCF, which I actually just had an idea for. If you're completely bored, then just see if you can find any Easter eggs in Music To My Ears.
LAST QUESTIONS OF THE DAY: WHO HERE LIKES LOCK, SHOCK, AND BARREL FROM THE NIGHTMARE BEFORE CHRITSMAS?
AND WHO SHIPS LOCK AND SHOCK?
Just asking cuz I got recently obsessed with these guys. I just love bad kids.