Hello readers!
The reason I'm posting this additional note is because of a review I just got that caught my attention and so I want to share it with everyone else. I was from a guest who goes by the name of Bluecloud:
"Uh . . . Is it just me, or is Veruca being too nice? Great story otherwise!"
YES. YES SHE IS. I THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TYPING THIS! Seriously, I do.
I wanted to share this with you guys bc he/she pretty much pointed out one of the main reasons why I'm re-writing the story:
Bad interpretation of the characters.
By turning them into know fairy tales, I pretty much doomed myself to change their personalities, something I can't easily forgive myself for.
And this brings us to the informative news: a sneak peek of the re-written version! Well, not really. Just the main changes.
Instead of being set in a world with known fairytale characters(ex. Snow-White) being substituted by the kids, this version will be more open and more fantasy-au-like.
How? Now the characters are different creatures/beings that all live in the great Wonks.
The overall plot is still the same: a wizard casts a curse, five kids have to fix it all, honor, lessons, fairies, kufu (I won't give up on this guy), pirates, blah blah blah.
However, the way to fix it is different.
The oompa loompas will remain as they are
AND LASTLY BUT NOT LEAST:
MIKE: (little) Demon (who cracked the system)
VIOLET: Witch
VERUCA: fairy princess (or just a fairy who just happens to be royalty)
CHARLIE: either a satyr or a werewolf (werepup). Feel free to vote!
AUGUSTUS: I really need help with this guy. IT'S SO HARD! I might make him a mud/rock troll or something of the kind.
OK, last thing:
Since I'm planning on writing a great deal of the story beforehand so the hiatus breaks don't happen again, I'll try to keep this alive until then through drawings on DeviantArt. I already have a few sketches and character design ideas.
Anyway, my DA is DYPWCUS, so heads up for any OUATICATCF art I might post.
OK THEN. I'M OUT. HAVE A GOOD DAY/NIGHT.
