Adder Notes: Hey I just watched Rio 2 and well.. it sucked. Call me a Rio 2 hater but if you really think hard on the plot, its just there to make more money. I'll explain why soon. Thank you Alexriolover95 and Lunar Froxy for reviewing I'll improve my story and lengthen it. oh and Alexriolover95 Rio 2 didn't suck the first time I saw it, but when I started to think hard and why some of the main plot events happened, that's when I saw the faults, but I except your opinion. Adder out...
Chasing The Sun
Chapter One: Across The Border
Blu woke up to see light flickering in though the hollow opening. He slowly picked his wing up off of his sleeping gem, his loving wife and mate Jewel. he strode over too the edge of the hollow gaze upon the raw beauty of the jungle.
"it's nice here" Bu thought aloud.
"hmmm?" mumbled a half awake Jewel. She shook the sleep off of her face,
"oh nothing Jewel, I'm just admiring the breath taking view." what Blu said was right, the view their hollow gave was spectacular.
"was there anything like this back in America?" Jewel questioned, Blu shook his head
"well no, no jungles but epic cities and stunning sunsets" Blu said. Jewel laid her head on his neck
"can we go there, just us. Bring your credit and debit card for hotels and stuff" Jewel replied
"really right now, just us pack up and go to America a three thousand mile flight" he looked exactingly at Jewel as if she might be joking.
"yeah just you and me," she eyed him happily. "in America." Jewel finished. Blu glanced out side nervously
"ummm... yeah... Jewel I'll be right back" Blu said before taking to the sky. that was weird, some one woke up and the wrong side of the nest. Jewel thought, well I might as well go get some breakfast was he final thought before she rose up into the crystal blue sky.
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Blu drifted down into Linda's window still. he cawed out, as soon as he did he heard noise coming from the living room
"ah... be right there..." said Linda. Then the sound of a plastic bowl hitting the floor rang out Blu couldn't help but laugh. before Linda arrived he grabbed a pen and a piece of paper and wrote: how was you adventurer getting here? Anyway Jewel wants us to go too America with her. Can you take us, I know its a lot to ask, but can you?. When Linda finally arrived and read the letter she looked up,
"of course I can! you haven't been out side Brazil seance we first came here! go back and tell Jewel, I'll find a flight" Linda said Blu was shocked yet grateful. Then she walked back towards the couch. That's when Blu saw the 'No Signal' sign coming from the TV and spilled popcorn everywhere. Seams like some one had a busy night. Blu laughed in his head as he flew home.
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"Jewel, I'm home!" Blu called as he stepped inside, "Jewel?"
"well am I late?" Jewel said, this startled Blu causing him to spin around.
"There you are Jewel, where did you go?" Blu asked. Jewel looked down, and so did Blu. When he did so, Blu saw two ripe mangoes, "oh, thanks." While they were eating Jewel asked
"So Blu, can we go to America, and tour the best cities?"
"Linda said yes" Blu replied
"yeah!" squeaked Jewel and ran into Blu's wings "thank you." she breathed
"your welcome my priceless stone." Just as he finished a flicker of movement caught his eye. He starred at the figure until it flew away.
"something wrong Blu?" Jewel said. her joyful expression changing to worry, her words brought him back to earth
"no, not at all..." Blu replied and moved towards the entrance of the hollow still staring at the tree across the river.
"Blu your not acting yourself, whats wrong" Blu turned to look at her sapphire blue eyes
"I saw som-" Linda's call cut him off
"Blu, Jewel I got tickets for a flight to Los Angeles in four hours so pack up!"
Blu turned to Jewel
"wish granted Jewel we'll be going across the border" Blu said
"I'm so excited" Jewel said and hugged him tightly
"so am I" Blu said half halfheartedly.
So how was my first chapter, did you like it? If you have any questions or suggestions just slap the review button in the face and start writing! next chapter will probably come to tomorrow. Till then Adder out..