Hi all! An update for you all! Again, I got some lovely reviews about my story. & I thought that I would share. Now, there were three seperate reviews, but because of the poor spelling & the general lack of sense, I am going to assume that they are all from the same person.
"sarahmint,sleeping with someone a few times doesnot always mean you may have done it with her afew times so what!HE DIDNT MARRY HER DID HE?GROW UP!you know you can hate someone and still be mature on it."
"so now you can write naruto better than the creator !im sure you are a talented writer so why dont you write you own story with your perfect chracters and leave kishis characters fantastic readers and reviewers will apprecicte it. sasuke very much loves his wife i assure over your pathetic really unbecoming."
"your story is do you have to insult sakura to write a good story?and you call her shallow.i really dont get the way some of you think or write."
All from a guest, who was too shy to actually log in and share their opinion. Yay for hiding behind a computer! ANYWAYYYYYY, apparently Sakura lovers hate my story? I can't warn you enough, this is NOT a pro sasusaku sotry. This is an ANTI sasusaku story. But, it isn't even really that. It is a SASUITA story. Like, if you love sasusaku, read sasusaku. Don't go looking for stories not about your couple. I only post these reviews because, to me, it is a big joke. I find this funny. Please, keep reading my story. I mean, it is great. LOL.
To those who read for the SASUITA, please enjoy. :)
Danzo sat quietly as the men before him spoke. They told Danzo about the mysterious stranger who had shown up, claiming to be a run away. The story was Ludacris, but that damn Third would never realize this. Danzo sighed, looking out the window. He was angry. Those damn Uchiha had started this mess. With their sharingan, they were the only ones who could have possibly summoned and controlled the Nine Tails. Danzo couldn't help but notice that the Uchiha didn't lose a single person in the attack. Because of this, and the fear that it may happen again, the Uchiha were asked to move from their current residence safe within the walls of the village, to the outskirts. Construction of their new home had begun, but the Uchiha were clearly unhappy. Their unhappiness had begun to show, and citizens of the village had expressed their concern that the Uchiha may be behind the attack of the Nine Tails.
Danzo hated the Uchiha.
And it had nothing to do with the Nine Tails attack. Simply, they were a clan filled of over-powered, arrogant ninja, who took way too much pride in their eyes. Danzo frowned thinking of the discussion he had had with the Third and Fugaku, the head of the Uchiha clan.
"After this devestation, and to help calm the village, we think it would be best if the Uchiha clan relocated." The Third said softly, eyes downcast.
Fugaku stared angrily at the Third.
"You expect me to move my entire family just to make these… people… feel better?" Fugaku hissed, arms crossed.
The Third sighed, causing Danzo to roll his eyes.
"You're people can control the beast. You expect me to believe that you didn't have a thing to do with this?" Danzo asked.
Fugaku growled, eyes flashing red. Danzo merely laughed.
"Look at how pathetic you people are. Any emotion, and those stupid eyes come out."
"I'll show you stupid eyes." Fugaku hissed, narrowing his eyes.
"Enough." The Third demanded.
Sarutobi sighed. He was still shaken up from the events that had unfolded. He had retired from Hokage. Stepped down, because he believed that those who were younger could change the world. But, Minato had died protecting his son, and his village. And Sarutobi was forced to take his place as Hokage again. He looked at Danzo, the man always picking fights. Then he looked at Fugaku. There had been murmurs that the Uchiha were unhappy, and he was sure that this wouldn't help with that.
"Fugaku-san, we are more than willing to pay for your relocation. This is only temporary. The Nine Tail's attack left the village weak, and afraid. The Uchiha clan is a symbol of strength, but even you can't deny that the sharingan has the ability to control the Nine Tails. I am not suggesting that this is true. But, the villagers are scared. And fear is not logical."
Fugaku's eyes returned to their deep black, and he seemed to relax a bit. He remained quiet as his eyes traveled from Sarutobi to Danzo.
"Understood, Hokage-sama."
Danzo knew that there was no understanding. That clan. That damn clan. Danzo knew they were a bunch a traitors, and what was worse was the fact that the head family's eldest son, Uchiha Itachi, was turning out to be some sort of genius. In fact, the Third had just recommended that the boy join the academy. At the age of five. It was a joke. And as if that wasn't enough to make Danzo stressed, this new man in the village required his attention. Danzo sighed.
"Like the Third said, keeps your eyes on him."
Sasuke didn't realize how truly hungry he was until he had gotten outside. He figured that he would stop by a long time favorite place of his to grab something to eat. He walked the familiar route to the dango shop located across from the academy. Just like when he was a kid, the shop was busy. People often stopped on their way home from work or school to watch as the kids practiced in the practice yard which faced the dango shop. Luckily, Sasuke found a table located outside, and closest to the training yard. He took his seat, ordered a large plate of dango and a cup of tea and just sat, looking out into the yard that he spent much of his time as a kid.
All the kids were clumsily throwing kunai, or sparring with each other. But, there was one kid who moved like a pro. He tossed his kunai with such ease. Sasuke wasn't the only o0ne to notice, people around him started speaking in hushed tones, marveling the child as he worked.
"Wow, he is amazing." One said.
"He must be a prodigy or something." Another whispered.
"That's that Uchiha kid, I bet."
Sasuke froze. He strained his eyes, begging for the child to face him. But the child had his back turn to him. Could this be Itachi? Sasuke frowned. Suddenly the child faltered, ever so slightly in his footing and tumbled to the ground. The crowed that had been watching the boy all let out a small gasp. Sasuke got to his feet, instinctively. Suddenly, a man was rushing towards the boy. Sasuke was confused as he watched as the man reached the boy, yanking him to his feet. It took Sasuke a moment, but suddenly he recognized the man as Danzo. Sasuke felt rage boil in his stomach. Without even thinking, he started towards the two.
"Itachi, how do you expect to make the academy with that kind of foot work?" Danzo hissed, roughly letting go of Itachi's thin arm.
Itachi's face was covered in dust, and both of his knees were scabbed up. His shoulder long hair was shiny, but filled with pine needles. His eyes were downcast, and his body totally erect.
"Yes, sir." Itachi said in such a small voice.
Danzo looked annoyed.
"The Third praises you on your ability as a ninja, but I have yet to see this skill. Don't you want to make your family proud?" Danzo asked.
Itachi tried to stand even straighter and nodded. Danzo just sighed and shook his head.
"What's going on here?" Sasuke asked, suddenly on both of them.
Itachi looked up with curious eyes, along with Danzo who seemed taken aback.
"Excuse me?" Danzo hissed, turning to face Sasuke.
"He's just a child. Where do you get off yelling at him?" Sasuke growled.
Itachi's face melted into a look of total confusion. Danzo's eyes narrowed.
"Who are you?"
"Doesn't matter."
Danzo looked unimpressed when another person suddenly appeared.
"Danzo-sama, what have I told you about speaking to Itachi like that?"
Sasuke turned to look over his shoulder, taken aback to see his mother. Mikoto advanced on the group, quickly moving so that she was between Itachi and Danzo. Danzo looked between Sasuke and Mikoto.
"Do you… know each other?"
Mikoto hardly glanced and Sasuke before she turned her attention back to Danzo.
"Leave Itachi alone." She said sternly.
Sasuke could only stare at his mother as Danzo turned away from them. She was a vision. Mikoto had been known as one of the most beautiful Uchiha. Her long, glossy hair reached her lower back. Her round eyes were framed by thick, black eye lashes. Inky bangs framed her face, and just the slighted tinge of pink gave life to her pale face. Mikoto had still yet to fully look at Sasuke. She turned her attention to Itachi, gently scooping the boy into her arms. A look of concern crossed her face as she examined the boy's knees.
"Thank you." She finally said, turning to face Sasuke.
Sasuke smiled and bowed.
"I just couldn't watch some man yell at a child like that."
Mikoto stared at Sasuke. Something about him… She nodded absent mindedly.
"Danzo-sama…" She paused, thinking better.
"I appreciate you helping out my son. But, I must be going. Thank you… uh?"
"Yuki." Sasuke stumbled.
The name struck Mikoto as strange. She stared at Sasuke for a moment longer before turning and leaving. Sasuke stood in her wake, making eye contact with Itachi for the first time. His brother stared at Sasuke with such a sad look, that Sasuke felt the wind being sucked from his lungs. He was motionless until he saw Itachi's small hand raise and wave at him.
Sasuke gently waved back.
