I have considered making this scene: An elder, Paletail, is telling kits about Dapplekit. Oh, and The Unlikely Undergo is going back up, I did not know how to make docs for stories... Now I do!

Elder scene:

Hello, Firekit and Leafkit. Let us continue our story, yes? We are skipping time, to where Dapplekit is six moons. Hear this story, and pass it on...

6 moons later...

"Dapplekit!" A meow came from a ledge. "Come here!" Her mother, Foxnose, called. "Fine!" Dapplekit meowed. Her sister, Sunkit's, apprentice ceremony was delayed for 2 moons for trying to shove Dapplekit off a cliff. Sunkit sat on a small rock, because she had tiny legs, while the other cats had long legs, allowing them to jump higher. She sneered at Dapplekit, saying, "Look. There's the stupid spoiled kit who is pretty and loved!" Dapplekit ignored her, walking over to Foxnose.

"Today is the big day." She said. Dapplekit was suprised when Foxnose walked away without grooming Dapplekit. Then, she heard it:

"All cats old enough to leap from cliff to cliff gather around for a tribe meeting!" The leader, Petalstar, said. "Today we have the announcement of a kit becoming a apprentice, for a new warrior life to begin. Dapplekit. Step up." Petalstar announced. Dapplekit padded up, her pelt tingling with excitement. "Do you promise to follow the warrior code, and fight alongside your clanmates?" Dapplekit said, "I do."

"Then you are named Dapplepaw." Petalstar meowed. The clan yowled, "Dapplepaw! Dapplepaw!" Dapplepaw hoped when she looked at Sunkit, she would see pride in Sunkit's eyes, but when she turned around, she saw hate in Sunkit's eyes, her claws unsheathed, scraping the ground. Dapplepaw frowned. Why does she hate me? Dapplepaw thought. Afterwards, Sunkit and her friend Angelkit, who hated Dapplepaw as much as Sunkit, walked towards Dapplepaw. "Stupid." Sunkit growled while she and Angelkit pounced on her, trying to slash Dapplepaw's throat. Petalstar saw this, and said, "Are you trying to kill Dapplepaw? Five moons in the nursery for both of you. Increased to five for Sunkit." Dapplepaw smiled, and said, "Thank you for protecting me."

"No problem. If they keep this up, you'll be an elder by the time they are warriors." Petalstar replied. Dapplepaw thought of Petalstar as a second mother. Dapplepaw went to the apprentice den. There she saw a gray tom with electric blue eyes. "Hello, Dapplepaw! I made you a nest."

"Hello, I made you a nest." Dapplepaw joked, hoping that the tom was okay with the joked. And he was. He laughed, then said, "No, my name is Rainpaw." Dapplepaw looked around. These apprentices looked nice. "Meet the apprentices. This is Sorrelpaw," Rainpaw said, pointing to a brown tom clawing at the moss in his nest. "This is Firepaw," Rainpaw pointed to a pure orange tom with amber eyes. "This is Shadepaw," Rainpaw motioned to a she-cat in the corner, sleeping. "She was the only she-cat except when you arrived." Dapplepaw knew why she was in the corner, because she was the only female. Rainpaw sighed, then said, "Your nest is next to me and Shadepaw. Sorrelpaw is oldest. Firepaw is youngest, he may get his warrior ceremony in... Five moons." Dapplepaw saw that all these apprentices would be gone by the time Sunkit and Angelkit was apprentices.

Sunkit looked at the nursery entrance. I will kill Dapplepaw, even if I have to become a rogue!

I will get you one day, Dapplepaw. So watch out and keep alert, for I will unsheathe my claws itching for your blood when you least expect it.

One day, my claws will be the killers of Dapplepaw. Five full moons? I will impress somebody, and you will be the one waiting for five moons.

One day, you will ask for forgiveness. And all cats will gasp.

One day, your precious fur will be dust,

And everybody will forget about your existence.

Sunkit watched in shock as a cat appeared before her. The cat said, "You want power?"

"Yes." Replied Sunkit.

"Go to sleep, I will train you so you can kill Dapplepaw."

Sunkit smiled. This would help her get revenge.

How did you like it?

Questions: Who is this cat? Why does Sunkit hate Dapplepaw? Do you see a RainxDapple going on? Do you think Sunkit will succeed killing Dapplepaw? And what about Angelkit? Is she a boy or girl?

Thank you for reading,

YelliGal