Here's the next chapter!

WARNING: lots of sarcasm.


"Omigish(HOW DO YOU MISSPELL GOSH?!) what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" she eskes when she say the cats that she new.

"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest!(We all wish that were true)" gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln! said the she-ca. It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?"(hm, let me think. I can name about 50 places she should be. Jupiter comes to mind)

"Yuo dont need to be so red! said StarGlame she was mad."(OH NO! *sarcasm*)

sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made."

"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE?

"TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret"

"Wait so then I'm died?(Yes stupid, you're died)" StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!"

"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing(Nice accent) very imptent to tell you first."

"Omg(since when did they know text lingo?) what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew"

"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!"

"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?"

"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four(WRONG TYPE OF FOR!) us!"

"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with her.


Hope you all liked this chapter! 'Cause if you didn't, then I lost brain cells for nothing!