Finally, the lemon chapter is ready!
It took a lot more time and effort than I thought it would. All I can say is that I now have a lot more respect for people who write smut, and even more respect for people who do it well.
I won't be posting it here, since I want this fiction to be visible by FanFiction Net's default search filter.
Instead I will be posting a separate complete M-Rated rewrite of the fanfic. The rewrite will divide the story into chapters. The original story was a 6'000 word monstrocity and it was a bit difficult to follow. I also rewrote a few scenes and omake in order to tie the fic better to the movie (for example, Kumiko is now the girl that pulls Naruto away from Hinata in the movie)
In order to see the M-Rated version, just click on my profile name and scroll downwards. The story will be there.
The Lemon chapter is the third one. Make sure you read the omake (previous chapter) before you go on and read it because I am referencing one of them for dramatic effect.
It's the first time I am writing erotica so all sorts of feedback is appreciated. I really want to know if the chapter works for you and if you think I am staying true to the characters, particularly Hinata.
Please, anything positive or negative, tell me what you think!
The story as it is is pretty much finished but I won't change the status to "Complete"… Yet… I might want to send everyone a final message sometime later.
I want to thank everyone who read, reviewed, faved and followed me. You made this effort worth it!