This is my own ending to Allegiant. Also my very first fanfic. Hope you like! :)

Tris's POV

My eyes open to the sound of a steady beep. Dark circles at the edge of my vision give the illusion of shadow people dancing in the corner of the room. Scanning my new surroundings, my eyes stop and I notice that I'm hooked up to a machine. Pulling tubes out of my arm, I try to sit up, but am soon horrified as images start flashing through my head. Gunshots, blood, and an older man sitting in a wheel chair. Wincing I lay my head back down on the soft pillow. The door opens and a number of people walk in who's faces I don't recognize. I notice there whispering, but my head is pounding to hard for me try to tune in. One of the people, a male, pulls out a phone and starts to call someone. Then everything goes black.


"I'm okay Four," I grumble. It's been a day since I woke up from my coma, and even though I still feel week Tobias still insists I need help doing everything

"Are you sure, that spoon looks very heavy," he replies with a smirk.

"You know I'm fine, so stop teasing," I snap back at him. He chuckles then plants a small kiss on my cheek. I try to cover up my sigh. I don't know where our relationship is right now. After all it has been a year and a half. He could be in love with another girl for all I know. Time really goes fast when your sleeping. I start to shove another spoonful of soup in to my mouth when the door opens and Dr. Lee invites himself in. Tobias walks out of the hospital room's chair and turns to look at the doctor. I can barely make out what there saying through their hushed voices.

"I got the tests back, and your friend Beatrice has made a full recovery. She is suffering no brain damage, and will be free to go home soon." Tobias thanks the doctor, and comes to sit down next to me, sharing the good news.

"So are you starting to remember anything that happened yet?" Tobias questions.

"Nothing new, my last memories are of telling Caleb that I didn't want to leave you," a single small tear starts to roll down my cheek. "I'm so sorry," I start repeating, barely going over a whisper. I've been trying to keep these emotions bottled up inside of me for the past few days, but I knew I couldn't keep them in forever.

"It's okay," Tobias's calm voice reassures me. And I know for the first time scene I woke up, things might actually turn out to be okay.


"I wake up to see Tobias snoring loudly in the seat next to my hospital bed. I look around taking in every little detail. A small TV set sits across the room from my bed, and to my right, near Tobias, hang some ugly blue curtains covering the only window in the room. I bury my face into my crisp white pillow, letting the smell of sanitation supplies burn my nose. I turn towards the clock, noticing the time, 2:14. I let out a long groan, hoping the night will end soon. I realize I was probably too loud, when Tobias's snoring ends abruptly as he jolts awake.

"Tris! Are you okay? Whats going on?" Tobias says, his voice still sluggish from sleep. I examine his face, trying to memorize every characteristic. Everything from the small scar on his chin, to his slight stubble, showing his lack of shaving for the past few days, is handsome. He hasn't changed much in the past year, but I could say differently for myself.

My hair grew out of it previous chin length cut. My shape is more womanly, showing more curves in places that weren't there before, and I'm a few inches taller. It's a strange knowing your a few months form turning 17, then waking up to strangers telling you your going on 19.

"Tobias lightly kisses the top of my head, "Whats the matter?"

"Just a bad dream, I'm fine," I mumble. Tobias says nothing, only leans over my bed, giving me a tight embrace. He repeats to me what he said in the amity compound the last time I came to him after a bad dream.

"We're all right, you know. You and me, okay. Nothing else is right, but we are."

And I believe him.


"Okay Beatrice, Four provided you with some clothes. You know where the bathroom is right?"

"Yep, down the hall first door on my right. Thanks again Dr. Lee."

"Your welcome little lady," he replied happily. I started down the hallway using Tobias to support most of my weight. Physical therapy has helped, but I'm not at the point where I can walk on my own yet. After reaching the bathroom I struggle for a moment to get my clothes on. After finally putting on my undergarments, I give into my lack of strength, and fall to the floor. My family is gone, my friends are gone, and even my strength, which makes me who I am, is gone. I give into my defeat and yell to Tobias to lend me a hand. This is the closest he has been to seeing me to naked, but I don't care anymore. He looks slightly embarrassed, the red creeping up his face, but he pushes away his feelings away as he helps me with my clothes.

"Thanks," I awkwardly say.

"No problem," Tobias replies, and together we step out of the bathroom. Tobias grabs a wheelchair for me to sit in, as he rolls me down the long, narrow, whitewashed hospital hallways.

"I have a lot to explain to you in the ride home," he whispers in my ear.

"And where exactly is home," I ask him.

"You'll see."

This is the first time I have shared my writing with unknown people. Sorry it's so short. This is the new edited copy of the story. Please tell me if you like it. :)