Act 1: Chapter 1

As of 23rd December 2015 this is the updated version. I have returned after my long absence.

Summary

When Galen Marek sensed a powerful disturbance in the force, he traveled far outside wild space to a small planet called Earth. This disturbance drew him directly to 4 Privet drive, he takes this powerful unknown force sensitive to be his apprentice to help fight the betrayal by his former master. While finding out about the 'new force'users on Earth, he also finds out about young Harry's destiny.

This will be largely cannon with Harry Potter concerning the events of the books/movies in the philosopher's stone. Harry's character will be different guys, just an advanced warning as he is far more powerful than anyone on earth including Galen. With Galen's character I might get a few things wrong.

This is in an alternative universe, where instead of Galen following Vader after being healed, he goes to earth. This is where events of my story come in, this story features 'Galen Marek'; the original one in the force unleashed 1. The story won't feature a dark side Harry just a more powerful Harry as well as a braver and more outspoken one. This story does change Point of Views quite often so watch out for that.

Chapter 1: Defiance, Sorrow and Anger

Vader will pay for what he's done to me...eventually, Galen thought. This whole killing the emperor destiny crap is Vader's grand plan for me to do his dirty work, we were in front of the emperor, clearly strong enough to kill him and he chose him instead the spineless bastard, Galen thought while meditating on his ship. Juno, being the pilot, was driving it towards my plan of forming an alliance against Vader and the emperor and to do that I need to find Master Kota, the young renegade Sith thought.

Proxy interrupted my meditation when I heard a lightsaber ignite, my eyes snapped open to see a blue lightsaber rapidly closing on my cross-legged form. Using the force, I pushed proxy enough for him to stumble, allowing me time to summon my lightsaber and strike at his Obi-wan form. Proxy recovered and blocked in time but he was completely unprepared for a force repulse which sent him crashing against the wall. I burst over and stabbed him in the chest ending the duel. He transformed back in to his droid form and said to me.

"Well done master that was in record time. Although I still haven't completed my primary programming master" Proxy said to me in a disappointed tone.

I chuckled and said to the droid "Don't worry, I'm sure you'll do it eventually, I need to find Master Kota so…..."

"Yes of course Master" Proxy left me to my own doings.

I sat down in a meditative position and reached out in to the force to find the presence of Master Kota. What some would call a gift I received a vision through the force.

It was powerful force sensitive, 1-year-old child, being struck by a serpent like man with red slit like eyes, with a flash of green light, to my surprise the man with the red eyes disintegrated in a loud explosion destroying the dwelling the man and the child were in. To my complete surprise the child was completely unharmed except for a lightning shaped scar on his head with blood oozing off, of it.

This child has real potential in the force more so than the emperor I thought while double checking the child's force presence again through the vision. I have to find him before Vader or worse the emperor does. The galaxy would have no Jedi left if Vader trains this child I internally thought. I got up from my meditative trance and I made my way over to the cockpit to update Juno on the new destination, not actually knowing where it was apart from that it's on a hyperspace route just past wild space. It was discovered by the ancient Sith Lord called Exar Kunn.

"Juno set course for...here it's a small solar system unknown to anyone apart from an ancient Sith" I said pointing out a region on the galaxy map to Juno. I acquired the holocron containing the solar system I am just about to go to when I was just 14 in training with Vader. I trusted the force on the destination and I pointed out to Juno that the empire doesn't have any presence in wild space. The only danger are Mandalorian's and pirates.

"Are you sure, I mean trusting a Sith was what got you in this position" she said to me.

I glared at her and said"I trust the force in this Juno, if the empire gets their hands on… just do it Juno"

"Ok, if you're sure. Setting course now" she said. For the first time I ever saw Juno I was captivated by her beauty. She was truly worthy of the title goddess. It was the type of beauty that would cause men to chase after her, unfortunately I personally know how she can defend herself. I am only 21 and she looks only 20 at the most if not younger. Vader had picked her to pilot my ship as a replacement for that incompetent fool last time, the first time I saw her she was making modifications to my ship which made her seem even more attractive as I did like a woman who knew how to work on a ship.

I didn't realize we were already in hyperspace and I was staring directly at Juno while she was looking at me while waving her hand in front of my face, trying to get my attention, bringing me out of my thoughts. "Sorry Juno what did you say"

"I said you should get some rest whilst you were daydreaming, this is going to take two days maybe more depending on the imperial presence in the outer rim." Juno expressed worryingly looking at me with concern.

"There's no point, but I'll try" I said. I got up and made my way over to the door and walked to the training area. "Tell me when we are there" I said as I was walking out of the door to Juno.

2 days later.

After a series a 20 jumps from system to system we were finally there. Past a massive gas giant similar to Bespin, following that it was another minute until they were in orbit above the Naboo look alike called Earth. We were finally there. I found out from what the locals called the internet, the planet was named Earth and the general jest of the situation and countries on the planet. The internet was pretty basic and based on that I knew they were pre-Starship level tech. So I had to hide the ship in stealth when they entered the atmosphere. First though Proxy told us it would be wise to have a plan before we went down there. That brought us to where we are now, parked in a large crater on the moon of the planet earth.

"Why did we come here because I am starting to feel as if this is a waste of time. Those people on the planet below haven't even got a world government or Hyper drive technology, I mean they still use slug throwers" Juno said addressing Galen.

"I came here because I sensed a disturbance in the force and I need to find this disturbance before the empire it could be the key to their downfall, you do remember their policy on force sensitivity don't you" I said while getting increasingly frustrated at her.

"But they ..."

"Just SHUT UP JUNO and let me meditate"

I heard an "Hmmpf" coming from Juno as she swiftly exited the room. I got in to a meditative trance and started to meditate in peace and quiet. Reaching out in to the force within another vision, I saw an impossibly old man in Jedi like robes, only more colourful, placing this child on a door step with a real paper letter, god they really are primitive. Then I saw him walk away with a giant bearded man on a small strange speeder-like vehicle and an old woman. The old woman and old man both disappeared into thin air leaving a heavy force presence behind covering the entire dwelling that the boy was placed upon the doorstep of.

Almost instantly after that vision I saw the same boy who looked 1-2 years of age being hit by a very large man who was shaking with anger. While a horse faced women looked on not caring what was happening to the young child. I brought myself out of the vision because of the boy's emotions I was feeling, Grief, Anger and Confusion. He was also very scared of the large man and the horse faced women.

I got up and calmed myself down because of how angry I felt at the large purple faced fat man, before walking down the narrow corridors of the rogue shadow to give Juno some direction of what I wanted her to do.

"Juno drop me off at a local town called….little whinging cloaked and wait for me there. I'll be an hour." I said while walking in to the cargo area to find Juno practicing sparring with proxy hand to hand. She was wearing tight leather pants and a form fitting singlet top with her trade mark imperial military boots. I gazed at her beauty for a couple of minutes.

Juno stopped and looked at me expecting me to tell her more. I knew from my time with Vader that she would question my every move unless I told her that it was part of the mission. "I am going to pick up a boy on the planet" I said and walked out to retrieve my lightsaber in my quarters. Juno didn't ask as she knew that I wouldn't tell her. Without speaking I saw her walk to the cockpit and to take off towards the planet from their lunar base.

When I had my lightsaber in my hand, I picked a blaster pistol for preferred use, who knows how they might react to my futuristic tech.

An hour later outside 4 privet drive

Juno had landed in some park to drop me off while she circled around the planet a few times waiting for me to complete my mission. I let the force guide me as soon as Juno left and let it lead me to the boy. Soon I am standing outside the house at 1am. I was wearing a Jedi robe that I found on Dantooine. It was the robe of a Jedi council member. (Like the one obi-won wore in episode 3 with the brown cloak.) I also added a green crystal lightsaber to my already purple lightsaber. I preferred to use the reverse shien style in dual grip for both my Lightsabers.

As I took a step forward towards the door I felt a presence blocking me, kind of like a red shield, shielding the entire dwelling. I couldn't physically enter it, it seemed like it was protecting the entire house from unknown force sensitive people. The strange thing was though it seemed like it was made of pure force energy. I am not going to cross whoever made this, I thought. They would have to be pretty powerful to shield a whole house.

As powerful as the barrier was, a good constant stream of force pushes and maybe a force lightning or two would solve the problem and allow me to enter the area under the shield. I unhooked my lightsabers off my utility belt and ignited them, I took a step back and raised a powerful ball of raw force energy with both of my hands and pushed it forwards as hard as I could towards the dwelling. The force energy of the blast on the red shield it faltered but stayed up. Mustering as much force as I can I struck it again with a constant stream of force lightning. It fell after a minute.

With the red shield gone I was free to proceed in to the 'house'.

Albus Dumbledore's point of view

Unbeknownst to Galen a certain old Albus Dumbledore felt his enchantments fall around the house Harry was in. He got up the speed you would expect of a younger more athletic man and went straight to Minerva McGonagall's personal quarters and sent a student to get professor sprout and tell them to meet them by the front gate. When all of them were there they left the castle grounds to disapparate to harry potters relatives house when he told them what was happening.

When they arrived there they studied the scene with horror as the blood enchantments protecting the house from anything magical were gone and the door to the muggle house was gone, blasted off its hinges through the walls and in to the garden.

'Homenum revelio' Dumbledore said. It revealed three humans, one was the man known as Vernon Dursley, next was Lilly Potter's sister, Petunia Dursley and the next was Dudley Dursley a young child. But Harry Potter wasn't there. They all went and searched through the house from bottom to attic just in case, but alas there was no luck Harry just wasn't there. On further examination of the muggles the large male adult had smoke coming from his body like he was on fire but minus the flames with burnt skin. The rest were just unconscious, like they had been stupefied.

"I'll let the muggle authorities' deal with this" Albus said to Minerva and Sprout. He Gathered the other two professors and apparated away. Albus Dumbledore was unaware he was being watched by an undetected renegade sith. He was using ancient sith technique to cloak yourself and be invisible to others he could run while invisible and not be noticed as well. He had a young child in his arms by the name of Harry Potter.

Two hours later on the rogue shadow back on the moon

"Juno I am going to train and raise this boy in the ways of the force when he is old enough, to do that I'll need to set up a permanent base here on this moon since it is far enough away from the empire for them not to notice us, any questions" I said

"Just when we're leaving" the woman said to me.

I smirked and saw Juno prepare the ship for takeoff. I had the boy in my arms still and was just about to set him down when I heard the ship lift of in to the void. I set him in to a makeshift bed then made my way to my training chambers to train while proxy was watching the child.

3 years later.

To avoid stealing I went to a specialized droid dealer on rishi who had a couple of old B1 battle droids. They are being used for building, mining and they could also go in to space without needing oxygen which is better than using humans, just in case though I was buying 200 old deactivated super battle droids for security. 2000 old b1 battle droids I 'purchased' were building a permanent sustainable base as well as a mini droid factory inside the lunar crust with a ship yard which will build me new ships. They will basically build me Training chambers, living quarters and recreational as well as a whole lot more. The whole thing is designed to be self-sufficient with us ever needing to get food or water. Also we got some animals from the planet below something called a 'sheep' which has wool for clothes as well as a strange animal called a chicken we cloned the various animals to produce more food/

I also got a few C-9979 landing crafts fitted with hyper drives of the modern day. I also upgraded my ship, the rogue shadow to a medium sized frigate.

The boy was 5, 5 months ago and started his training in the force, he was just starting to grasp the basics. He also had his lightsaber crystal which was golden yellow. He had unnaturally scruffy hair which I wasn't fond of as it was a disadvantage in battle, so I asked him if he wanted to shave his hair like me. He, of course said no so I did it without him asking, it grew back overnight. I suspected it was that strange force on the planet below.

I had actually been down on to the planet Earth a few times to find out how they use the force. It was an interesting find; they use a wand to control what they call magic. I had since purchased a wand from a place called Diagon alley after I proved I was a 'wizard'. I had translated 'muggle' money to 'galleons' to purchase all I needed. My wand was made of dark oak wood and thestrel hair which I was told was the strangest thing 'ollivander' had ever seen as he had never even seen me before.

I had also bought all spell books I could find even dark magic ones in Knockturn alley as well as school students' text books years 1-7 as they were for beginners which was me. I also got dark magic textbooks for every branch of magic including pagan rituals which I got from Knockturn alley. I was going to learn magic, all aspects of it. After reading a few spell books one particular spell caught my eye, it was transfiguration. There were a couple of spells that caught my eye of course. I brought potion ingredients and everything needed to make them as well as basic, advanced Rune, Charms and Transfiguration books.

After going back on to the moon I then started to read my first spell book. It was basic magic, such as repairing broken objects and levitating things. But as I mastered these I could in future move on to more advanced magic. After all I didn't become a powerful sith overnight. I ordered the construction of a potions lab as directed in a potions book.

5 years, 11 months later

Tomorrow is Harry's birthday he is 11. I am taking him to magical Diagon Alley for some ice cream which I know he'll love as well as getting him enrolled in to Hogwarts so he can learn his heritage of magic. I know the magical world hasn't seen harry potter since he was 'kidnapped'. So I had to play it right. I had also given harry a droid companion. He was an assassin droid. He was fitted from the old assassin battle droids that the CIS had years ago only merged to be more bulky but not so it lost its agility and speed. It had its own full personality as well as a tendency to hate the empire and all mechanical life randomly. It had a stealth field generator as well as a personal ray shield.

I also added some runes to the assassin droid. One was so it never rusted and could go into water with no problem; the next was to its modified DC-17 blaster which was standard in my personal army. It added a never ending extension charm to the ammo clip so it never runs out or overheated because of a freezing rune and refilling charm fitted to the ammo. All this was standard across my 200 super battle droids and the 800 B1 battle droids I had improved their model so they were less thin and more bulky like the assassin droid but made out of a local metal I found on mars from what the locals called it, the metal was a stronger enhanced version of titanium which courtesy of me was what my personal army was made of. The droids also handled the maintenance of the station.

I myself had progressed very well in magic because of how much of a quick learner I am. I learnt every ability spell, hex and charm known to wizards and most of them seriously over powered because of the force. Curses were a different matter I had trouble at first but I got the hang of them in the end and now know every single one they had. I had even starting experimenting with spells and creating new ones concerning the force and magic. One example is using the force and various spells mixing them together to create a masterful mind control ability (dominate mind force power and the imperio curse) that no one can resist unlike the magical version. I also mixed and created another new spell using force push (raw force energy) and the simple spell lacarum inflamare so I can use the force to cast them wordlessly as well as send a ball of fire to people. There were others, many others in fact but the fact is I am now one of the most powerful force user that ever lived. I did become an animagi a few years back, it was pretty easy and the form is a local creature known as a Bengal tiger. It represented my traits, very protective of my young and a willingness to kill as well as a protective personality.

When tomorrow morning came he was officially 11. Me and Harry apperated to Hogsmede to go to Hogwarts. I had my two lightsabers with me in my sleeves and my dark oak wood and thestrel hair wand in my hand. I found apparating easier than bringing the ship and could do it as long it was in local distances either on the moon or on earth. With a loud -CRACK- the familiar feeling of being crushed came and went and Harry officially entered the wizarding world once again.

HARRYS POINT OF VIEW

I had grown in the force over these past 6 years and knew many lightsaber styles and powers. I could force choke, heal people of various injuries, move with force enhanced speed and strength, I was very good in hand to hand combat, a mild force push and almost superhuman senses when I used the force. But at heart I was noble, kind and very friendly. I wanted to meet someone my own age as all I had seen these past 10 years was Juno who was like a mother to me and my master and father figure Galen. I knew about his past with Vader but the empire hadn't found us in the last 10 years so we were fine.

Dad apperated us to Hogsmede as he called it. I had never seen anything like it, the buildings were old English style and small but it was amazing. My dad let me go in a sweet shop and buy some things with some massive gold coins he called galleons. He never told me how he even got an income but I suspected it was illegally. My dad quickly took my hand and led me 10 minutes down a small lane. A massive castle came in to view after 10 minutes, with numerous turrets and towers and big front gates. My dad with a wave of his wand sent a patronus to the so called 'head master' so he could enroll me in the school.

An old man came in to view 40 minutes later with 10 other people behind him all at a brisk pace. They unlocked the gate and my dad's grip on his wand and one of his lightsabers tightened. A year ago I started to notice instead of just using 2 lightsaber my dad used one lightsaber which was the colour white which he got from Dantooine's crystal caves and his wand in his other hand. That's what he was doing right now minus his lightsaber being lit which was what worried me.

They all drew their wands and aimed them at my father. I got my lightsaber out while my father ignited his and aimed his wand at them at the same time. They stared at me in shock like they hadn't ever seen me before.

The old man spoke first. "Are you Harry Potter?"

"I am here to enrols

Harry here in to Hogwarts" my father said ignoring the old man's question.

"If you are the one that kidnapped Harry I am going to have to ask you to drop all your…weapons and surrender to me" he said after glancing at our lightsabers.

"He is my father he didn't kidnap me" I said

"Harry keep quiet" Galen whispered to me.

"My dear boy, he is not your father, you have been misled"

"All we are here to do is enrol him, or would you prefer I teach him myself" Galen said to the old man.

"Stupef…" the sneering man was cut off by the old man just before he cast a spell.

"Severus stop, of course you can enrol him but we will need to have a long talk about why he is in your guardianship and not with his relatives."

"Of course after all, I did….kidnap him so to speak" my father said to the old man with a slight smile.

The old man smiled and said "Come, we need to speak somewhere more private away from prying eyes whilst we sort this catastrophe"

As we both started to follow the old man all people around walked at each side like we were being guided to prison. I looked at dad and saw the same look in his eyes. 'I'm starting to think this wasn't a good idea."

The old man eventually after a long series of corridors led us to a statue of a strange creature. It 'jumped' aside when it 'saw' the old man. All of the teachers left after that apart from the greasy black haired man, a stern older woman and a plump older woman in 'robes' fit for a greenhouse. The old man saw our questioning looks and said "They are Professors Snape, McGonagall and Sprout."

We both sat down at some soft chairs so did the old man. "I am Professor Dumbledore and I have a lot of questions, one is why you took Harry?"

My father sighed before he spoke "Well…I had a vision of Harry being abused. So I took him in to my care, I trained him in light magic and here we are."

"Vision" McGonagall said in disbelief.

"But when I completed a ritual for his location it said nowhere on Earth." Dumbledore said to Galen

"He was hidden under advanced wards I put up because of the danger from death eaters." My dad said to the headmaster.

"O…k then tell me where you are currently living?" he said still not believing me.

"Cletchinsen Hall in Neasley, Devon, it came with 600 acres of land accompanied by a Quidditch pitch, Greenhouse, Potions Lab and Underground spell chamber." Galen told the headmaster while scribbling the answers down on paper.

"What's your occupation Mr. Marek?"

"I am a business man in the Muggle world"

"Muggle" the greasy haired man sneered out.

"Yeah, you got a problem with that because it's more worth investing than the limited Magical World." My dad sneered back equally as frightening as Snape.

"Do you want to file for adoption? Mr. Marek" Dumbledore cut Snape's response off.

"I'll do that myself Dumbledore. No offense but I don't trust you. Is that all you need" My dad said bluntly.

"Harry just needs his letter and you'll be all set. Perhaps I recommend…" The old man was cut off by dad but not before he handed me an envelope.

"Sorry but no thanks Dumbledore. C'mon Harry we're leaving. We have to get your things from Diagon Alley."

There you go, that's the first amongst many more revised chapters coming soon. Remember to review and favorite when your finished reading. I added in some extra scenes for everyone and should be up to a more decent quality.