3/23
So this is a reload of the first chapter. /strongIn my haste to upload my first story, I neglected some spelling and grammatical issues. There might still be some there, but I think it will flow better now. I do not own Skip Beat. Please read and review, but please refrain from nonconstructive criticism, because it helps no one.
As of 3/23/16 I am reviewing to get back into the writing state of mind. More corrections and hopefully a new chapter soon. Sorry for falling off the face of the Earth. Thank you for those who are reading for the first time or are following this story!
"Ren walked around by himself outside for a bit. He drew a ragged breath from the cigarette he was glad he was able to smoke for this role. He didn't know if he would have been able to calm his nerves without the nicotine he had long since abandoned. The crisp air helped to clear his head. 'Just what the hell was about to happen?' Ren calmed himself by switching to Cain persona. 'She is my cute little sister, and she must be worried.' With this Cain dropped the cigarette and crushed it under his worn out boot and made his way back to the hotel and returned to the room.
"Outside the hotel room, he took a final deep breath and slid the key card into the slot and listened for the beep. Closing his eyes he slid the card back into his pocket as he stepped inside. "Setsu?" Cain called in a soft voice. No reply. That's when he saw Kyoko asleep on the bed. Ren smiled, though she was blooming into a wonderful actress, in her sleep she always reverted back to Kyoko.
"Quietly, he took off his trench coat and boots at the entrance. Then made his way to the bed where she lay. Ren smiled thinking that no doubt she was dreaming of fairies and castles. 'Probably of Princess Rosa.' He thought to himself as he leaned down to cover up her shoulders with the covers. "Mhm... Corn your wings are so beautiful." Kyoko mumbled in her sleep as she turned over stirring the air around. Ren's nose was suddenly bomb-barded by her scent, while Koun's heart was warmed over her concern for her dear childhood friend. Both of them felt something inside them stir as they began to reach out to touch her. Only stopping when the watch came into vision. Ren sighed as he went to the bathroom to wash his face.
"After splashing his face with water, he looked up and for the first time say Kyoko's handy work on his neck. As the memories of that incident flooded his mind, Ren felt himself stiffen and began to breathe hard. Slowly he reached up to touch the teeth marks and hickey combo, as his fingers traced where her mouth was earlier his pants tightened. Since the introduction of the Heel siblings, Ren had not had many chances to sate his primal needs. This was an even bigger problem since the object of his affection was in constant close proximity.
"'Not now,' he thought, 'she is just in the other room." However, all three personas, Ren, Cain, and Koun, were losing a battle of self-control. The scene of Setsu on top of her 'brother' unzipping his shirt and trailing her hands down his chest while making such a bold promise as to mark him where it could and couldn't be seen was the final straw. Ren undid his pants and touched his hardened length. He moaned, feeling extremely sensitive after being so turned on without anything happening earlier. Leaning over the sink and placing one hand against the wall, he wrapped the other hand around his shaft and began to stroke. He bit his lip to keep from moaning out loud and began to imagine what would have happened if they hadn't of stopped earlier. His mind raced with thoughts of Kyoko, both above him and underneath him moaning and calling his name. He imagined her perky breasts and her beautiful face and the feeling of driving himself into her relentlessly.
His hand began to work faster as he neared release. He thought of her getting close to climax, and what it would feel like inside her warm, wet, center as it tightened around him. He thought about how much he would love to come inside her marking her as his. With that final thought, Ren growled as he shot his load into the sink.
He stared at himself in the mirror. 'I seriously need help.' With that he washed away the evidence of his desire and washed his face and slipped into his own bed and and wrapped himself up tightly hoping for a sound night of sleep.