Alright. Lets get the first official chapter of the revision started! I just wanted to state some things to get it out of the way (to avoid confusion) will be 10 at the start of the story 2. for the sake of added mystery I am choosing to avoid the portion of how Naruto got into prison at such a young age (all you need to know is that Kiri knows what he is and they they tried to detain him), plot reasons Naruto won't be…well himself at the start of this chapter and Finally 4. Naruto will be ranked at about mid genin to low chunin by the time he makes his great escape. This way I am able to increase my range of topics to write about in terms of training. Anyway onto the Chapter!

Yelling, muffled explosions, the impact of different destructive jutsu shaking his entire cell, and the sound of clashing weapons woke up prisoner A-10119471N from his slumber. While he was well aware to what was happening and had already planned his actions down to the letter. Getting up the 5'4" Prisoner began a series of stretches that worked all of the muscles in his body. His spiky, unruly, and blonde hair constantly covered his face as he went through the stretches. After about 20 minuets of stretches he felt content and preceded to walk across his 9x9 cell to the heavy steel plated door and put his hand on the lock. "katon:Suchīrukattā" (steel cutter) whispered the prisoner. His hand began to turn red with superheated chakra and he preceded to burn his hand into the lock of the door. After the lock had been throughly cut he went on to do the same thing to both of the hinges of the door, being careful not to cause the door to fall over. When he finished he ended his justu and then put his ear up to the door and awaited the sound that would signal the first step to his freedom.

Haruki was running as fast has he could. The sounds of the riot/uprising woke him up and his commanding officer ordering him and his comrades to hold the frontline near the C-Block mess hall made him nervous. He looked to his left and to his right and saw determined looks of his teammates. He just couldn't believe that 2 weeks into the youth hunter nin program and he was was already about to see actually combat! 'Im only 12…I hope I am ready for this.' He thought to himself.

He and his 4 other teammates were running down the surprisingly wide hallways of the solitary confinement wing when he heard his teammate Toji yell out in surprise, seconds later he felt a huge force crush him into the rest of his team and then everything went black.

Haruki was slowly coming to as he noticed that he was no longer in the hallway where he and his team were ambushed, but was in fact in what he thought was a janitor's closet. He saw a silhouette leave the room as he looked around and noticed the bodies of the rest of his team. Marks on their bodies suggested that he put up some kind of fight and stayed up after the initial ambush. While he wanted to go chase the son of a bitch that killed his team he felt sleep and fatigue take him over as his eyes slowly closed.

Leaving the closet where the Prisoner hid the bodies of the youth nin he ambushed the sounds of the uprising were only escalating as more and more prisoners in other cellblocks were released. The prisoner adjusted the hunter nin clothing he scavenged off of his prey and began to run down the hallways towards the armory. Ignoring the individual fights between the prisoners and the guards that he found along the way.

The Prisoner ran for what felt like ages, but was in fact only 25 minutes before he finally reached the armory. He noticed several guards that were tense and…well guarding the entry to the armory. 'How am I going to get past them while they are expecting something?' thought the Prisoner. He was formulating several plans before a shout broke him out of his thought.

"Hey hunter nin! you're finally here! We were expecting you to come get the weapon and resupply scrolls an hour ago!" The guard he noticed was a man with spiky brown hair, and in a standard kiri jonin uniform with no other special features about him, but the guard did not only lower the guard, but signaled for the other guards to open up the armory door.

The Prisoner not being one to look a gift kunai down the hilt took this chance in fate and replied while rubbing his head in a almost comic fashion "Yea sorry about that, but the guards on Cell Block-B were having trouble in their sector…" The tale seemed to be enough for the guards as they kept their guard down and let him in.

"I should have figured as much…" mumbled the guard as he and one of the other guards grabbed 5 scrolls in total and handed them to the Hunter nin dressed Prisoner. "Alright these two are filled with small weapons, katanas, and several batons. These two are filled with rations, medical supplies, and a few mini water sources sealed into tags. Finally this one is filled with stun, flash, and explosive tags." The guard explained as one of the other guard was marking down what was being taken on a clipboard. The Prisoner noticed an explosive kunai laying down on the shelf next to him and instantly new his next course of action.

With a swift swipe of his left arm the Prisoner now had the kunai and hauled ass for the exit of the Armory and soon the exit of the prison. Surprised by the sudden action the guards ordered the 3 remaining guards outside of the armory to stop the hunter nin. Rushing past the guards with speeds that no 10 year old should have the Prisoner turned around and chucked the kunai at the door of the armory. Being in a confined hallway meant that the guards had no where to avoid the blast, in a blinding instant of fire the three guards were killed and the other two were trapped in the now flaming Armory due to debris blocking the door.

After storing the scrolls in his Hunter nin robe The Prisoner ran down the hallways towards the exit all while throwing down explosive tags periodically.

A few close calls later The Prisoner made his way to the gate only to find it (much to his surprise) in the control of the prisoners. The bodies of the guards and prisoners that died to defend, or take back the gate were strewn about all over the courtyard and around the gate itself. Shrugging his shoulders the Prisoner ran past the prisoners ignoring the shouts of said prisoners (thinking he was a hunter nin) and after running up the nearby hill he turned back towards the prison, taking off his hunter nin mask, and put his hand in the tiger seal. Seconds later a little over half of the prison erupted in flames. The screams, explosions and yelling from both guards and prisoners alike filled the air. A unforgettable stench of burning flesh also hit the Prisoner's nose. The wind caused by the explosion pushed his hair back out of his face revealing a young face marred by 2 sets of whisker like scars going across his face, But the most imposing feature however were the red eyes with slitted fox like pupils. Satisfied with his work the Prisoner ran down to the beach, where he used as much chakra as he could to run across the calm yet endless ocean.

By the time the figure made it to shore the sun had faded over the horizon and was replaced by a full moon. The Prisoner stumbled onto the shore and looked around for a suitable place to rest and talk to his host. finding a good looking palm tree the Prisoner laid down and closed his heavy eyes. Before slumber took him the Prisoner thought 'I now leave the rest to you…Naruto.'

Naruto came to with the morning sun blazing into his eyes, a pounding headache, and with every single muscle in his body being as sore as can be. groaning he rubbed his head as he began to look around at his new surroundings. "where did Kurama sensei drop me off at?" grumbled Naruto. He noted he on a sandy yet still relatively flat beach with no structures or people in sight. He looked behind him and saw a few palm trees and a tree line of oak trees that led into a thick forest. stumbling up from his position from under the shady palm tree Naruto made his way deeper into the forest stopping to unseal items from the resupply scrolls as he needed them.

After walking for several hours Naruto came across a small Inn next to what looked like a main road of some kind. The Inn itself was built in a traditional style very similar to that found in Fire country he noted. This caused a mixture of worry and anger to stir inside of Naruto's mind. "I swear to the log if Kurama Sensei dropped me back in fire country as a joke then i am going to skin him alive and where his chakra fur as a coat." Naruto said to no one but himself has he made his way into the Inn.

Walking in he saw the front dest manned by an elderly lady who was mindlessly wiping down the counter. looking around he noticed that there was several people eating breakfast or drinking tea in the dining hall. Much like the exterior of the Inn the inside was decorated in a traditional fire country style, which only served to worry Naruto more. Gaining the courage to ask were he was he walked up to lady and got her attention by clearing his throat. Once she looked at him he asked "sorry to bother mam, but do you mind telling me where we I am right now?"

The old lady gave him a skeptical look before replying "well Kiri-san you are at the Falling Leaf a traditional Fire Country Style hotel. I built it here because the town once was very popular with tourism from Fire Country."

Naruto being the curious person that he was silently thank Kurama-sensei for teaching him information gathering while he was locked up. "once?" replied Naruto.

"Yes, it seems like a lifetime ago when civilians and shinobi alike from the Hidden Leaf and the Fire Country came to Rakaubi to vacation here…" said the old woman all the while she was staring off into the distance as though she was watching her memories play out in front of her.

"Wait…did you say Rakaubi?" said Naruto. He was both surprised and happy that he landed in Rakaubi of all places. Naruto (with his enhanced memory thanks to Kurama)had read about the city when he was younger. They won their independence just 30 years ago from Forest country, which had at one point leading up to the First Great Shinobi War controlled most of modern day rice and grass country. Their hidden village, the Village Hidden In The Forest had the most elite ANBU units in the entire Shinobi world. Despite this the villagers of Rakaubi managed to win in numbers, counter guerrilla warfare, and from diplomatic pressure from the great 5 who had sought to weaken the formation of a 6th great nation.

[I just want to clarify the Hidden Forest Village is NOT within the borders of Rakaubi, but within Forest Country]

Rakaubi has a whole was a tourist destination and as such the tourism and film industry were their main sources of income. Their military was made of Shinobi and Forest ANBU who had called this city home before their independence, a small navy, and shinobi that were trained at their local academy. Despite having their shinobi program being relatively new, they have managed to have a standing shinobi force of around 270 personnel and a small navy of about 25 boats and their crew.

[The force of 270 shinobi is absolutely nothing compared to that of the smaller nations let alone the 5 great hidden villages]

Satisfied with his information gathering Naruto asked for directions into the town and for a cup of tea. After finishing his tea and being pointed in the right direction Naruto walked down the dirt road until he spotted the city line out in the distance. Instead of walking into the city however Naruto walked off of the dirt road and walked for a solid 15 minutes before coming across a grass clearing. Happy with this location Naruto walked on top of a large bolder in the middle of the clearing and began to meditate.

Meanwhile hours later two people were walking down the very same dirt road. One figure was easily towering over the other at an impressive height of 6'2". His travel cloak did nothing to hide his huge muscular build. The other figure on the other hand was much shorter at 5'7". The figure resembled that of a young girl and this was confirmed when the shorter figure spoke "Kirabi Sensei why are coming to this village again?"

[WARNING EVEN THOUGHT MY WRITING SKILLS IMPROVING I AM STILL VERY BAD AT RAPPING…YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED]

The imposing figure glanced down at the shorter figure for a second without stopping and also without missing a beat replied "Yo Yo YO YugiTO. we've gotta track down this cool cat and get his inFO." rapped the now revealed Kirabi to the now revealed Yugito all of this was happening while Kirabi was making hand motions.

Unhappy with the way her question was answered Yugito glared at the taller figure and in replied by giving a kick far more powerful that a person of her body build should be able to give to Kirabi's Shin. "will you for the love of the holy log stop rapping!?" yelled Yugito.

Kirabi with a smile still plastered on his face ignored both the comment and the kick, but replied "Hey lil cat don't hate the playa hate the game…a (he his basically trying to rhyme game with playa).

"That doesn't even rhyme…" deadpanned Yugito.

"Neva mind that…listen our bellies aint gonna wait any longer, so we should just run on to town!" exclaimed/rapped Kirabi. Who was walking, rapping, and scribbling down his new raps into a tiny notebook at the same time.

'Why did he have to be the best sensei for me?' Yugito mentally and comically thought to herself. Looking up she did notice the sun had peaked for the day. She was broken out of her thoughts by he stomach grumbling. Having the decency to blush she looked away while Kirabi laughed.

"so your hungry too? well lucky for you they got good food…too." Rapped Kirabi "Infact…I also heard they have some of the best sushi-." Kirabi didn't even finish his sentence before Yugito took off into the town in search of sushi. "well now she's quite the handful…I don't even know what i'd do if I had to take care of two of them…" deadpanned kirabi. Looking up into the sky he made his way into the town. Unaware of the events that this trip would unfold.

Alright thats a wrap for chapter 1! My goal is to have each chapter be at least 2,500 words long (not including the intro) and for this chapter it just pasted the 2.5K mark. As the plot unfolds, more characters get introduced, and more just get learned Ill be forced to write more so don't worry about word count. As for the revision let me know what was good, bad, or grammar needs to change. Did you like the new intro to the story, or did you like the first one better. Please let me know what you thought about Kirabi's rapping and also the first chapter!