This story will contain some spoilers for 'Bramblestar's Storm'.

After reading Bramblestar's Storm, I couldn't help but be disappointed. The book was alright, but it just wasn't what I was expecting. The summary said this storm would be something that the Clans might not live through, but in reality only a few cats died from it. I was also quite disappointed at all the smaller 'sub-plots'. I feel the badgers and the kittypets were completely unnecessary, as well as the prophecy about Bramblestar and Tawnypelt. So, I decided to write my own version of the story with much more tragedy, adventure, and much more! This story will contain some spoilers, but for the most part it's an entirely different story. I hope you all enjoy!

ALLEGIANCES

ThunderClan

Leader: Bramblestar - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Deputy: Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Medicine Cat: Jayfeather - gray tabby tom with blind blue eyes

Leafpool - light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes

Warriors: (Toms and she-cats without kits)

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Millie - striped gray tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Apprentice: Amberpaw

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice: Dewpaw

Berrynose - cream colored tom

Mousewhisker - gray and white tom

Ivypool - silver-and-white tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes

Apprentice: Snowpaw

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom with amber eyes

Dovewing - pale gray she-cat with blue eyes

Rosepetal - dark cream she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat

Apprentice: Lilypaw

Briarlight - dark brown she-cat

Blossomfall - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat

Bumblestripe - very pale gray tom with black stripes

Apprentice: Seedpaw

Cherryfall - ginger she-cat

Molewhisker - brown and cream tom

Apprentices: (Cats older than six moons in training to become warriors)

Amberpaw - pale ginger she-cat

Dewpaw - gray and white tom

Snowpaw - fluffy white tom

Lilypaw - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat

Seedpaw - golden brown tabby she-cat

Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)

Daisy - long-furred cream she-cat

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat expecting Lionblaze's kits.

Elders: (Warriors and queens now retired)

Graystripe - long haired gray tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat with green eyes

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

ShadowClan

Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with jet black paws

Deputy: Rowanclaw - ginger tom

Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small brown tabby tom

Warriors: (Toms and she-cats without kits)

Crowfrost - black-and-white tom

Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice: Grasspaw

Owlclaw - light brown tabby tom

Scorchfur - dark gray tom

Tigerheart - dark brown tabby tom

Ferretclaw - black-and-gray tom

Apprentice: Spikepaw

Pinenose - black she-cat

Stoatfur - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat

Apprentices: (Cats older than six moons in training to become warriors)

Grasspaw - pale brown tabby she-cat

Spikepaw - dark brown tom

Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)

Snowbird - pure white she-cat

Dawnpelt - cream-furred she-cat expecting Crowfrost's kits.

Elders: (Warriors and queens now retired)

Snaketail - dark brown tom with tabby striped tail

Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye

Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back

Oakfur - small brown tom

Smokefoot - black tom

Kinkfur - tabby she-cat with long fur that sticks out in all directions

Ivytail - black, white, tortoiseshell she-cat

WindClan

Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom

Deputy: Harespring - brown-and-white tom

Apprentice: Slightpaw

Medicine Cat: Kestrelflight - mottled gray tom

Warriors: (Toms and she-cats without kits)

Crowfeather - dark gray tom

Apprentice: Featherpaw

Nightcloud - black she-cat

Apprentice: Hootpaw

Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white tom with blue eyes

Weaselfur - ginger tom with white patches

Leaftail - dark tabby tom with amber eyes

Apprentice: Oatpaw

Emberfoot - gray tom with two dark paws

Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes

Furzepelt - gray-and-white she-cat

Crouchfoot - ginger tom

Larkwing - pale brown tabby she-cat

Apprentices: (Cats older than six moons in training to become warriors)

Slightpaw - black tom with a flash of white on his chest

Featherpaw - gray tabby she-cat

Hootpaw - dark gray tom

Oatpaw - pale brown tabby tom

Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)

Sedgewhisker - light brown tabby she-cat expecting Emberfoot's kits

Elders: (Warriors and queens now retired)

Whiskernose - light brown tom

Whitetail - small white she-cat

RiverClan

Leader: Mistystar - blue-gray she-cat with blue eyes

Deputy: Reedwhisker - black tom

Apprentice: Lizardpaw

Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat

Apprentice: Willowshine - gray tabby she-cat

Warriors: (Toms and she-cats without kits)

Mintfur - light gray tabby tom

Minnowtail - dark gray she-cat

Mallownose - light brown tabby tom

Apprentice: Havenpaw

Grasspelt - light brown tom

Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat

Mosspelt - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentice: Perchpaw

Shimmerpelt - silver she-cat

Lakeheart - gray tabby she-cat

Heronwing - dark gray-and-black tom

Apprentices: (Cats older than six moons in training to become warriors)

Lizardpaw - light brown tom

Havenpaw - black-and-white she-cat

Perchpaw - gray-and-white she-cat

Queens: (She-cats expecting or nursing kits)

Icewing - white she-cat with blue eyes

Petalfur - gray-and-white she-cat

Elders: (Warriors and queens now retired)

Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom

Pebblefoot - mottled gray tom

Rushtail - light brown tabby she-cat

Cats Outside the Clans

Smokey - muscular gray-and-white tom

Coriander - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat

Jessy - brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes

Frankie - small gray tabby tom with blue eyes