Chapter 1: betrayal

This is my first Fan fiction, constructive flames are welcome, the rest will be given to Hestia for the hearth. I'm doing a different pairing for this one as an experiment. All characters will be out of character. Dark Percy/chaos. And sally had a son when Percy was 10 who was also a son of Poseidon.

Story plot: Percy gets left by Annabeth for a new, more arrogant hero, his full-blooded brother, set 6 years after TLO and HOO never happened, but Percy will run into the romans during. He is then found by chaos, who went to earth in search for a new hero to lead her army, she gives him an offer he can't refuse: revenge and a new family as king of the universe. But first they need to destroy order, chaos's good brother, to gain full dominance of the universe. Order joins the Olympians along with the good primordia's and titans.

Chapter 1: προδοσία

Percy pov:

I'm on my way back from a quest, it was a normal quest, kill a few monsters, save some demigods, all in all a nice and easy year. Yes, I was away for a year as per the god's request. I was just walking up half-blood hill, why couldn't it just be flat and normal plains. I wanted to see my girlfriend, the beautiful and amazing, Annabeth Chase, as soon as possible, so I quickly ran down the hill to see Chiron and give him a report. On my way a passed loads of campers, who started whispering and pointing as I jogged past, I thought nothing of it as I carried on walking to the big house. I had to pass the camp cabins. I was walking past when I heard moans coming from the Poseidon cabin. So I decided to check up on it. When I walked in I saw, a sight that would haunt me for the rest of my life, my 16 year old brother having sex with my girlfriend of 6 years. To say I was outraged would be an understatement. I stood there until they noticed me, which took a while. "Percy, this isn't what it looks like!" SHE nearly yelled when she saw me. "Then what is this Annabeth? It looks like you are having sex with my fucking brother!" I screamed in her face. Outside, dark clouds began to form, the waves of the beach reached 7 foot and are pounding against the beach, the ground was starting to rumble, the winds picked up until they became a hurricane. I was furious.

THALIAS POV:

I was running towards camp after a long boring hunt with the hunters and milady, I noticed that the weather in camp was absolutely horrible. I knew only 3 beings that could make this happen. Percy, Brandon and Poseidon. If it was Percy then we are all fucked. Because he can get really dangerous when angry. Fortunately, Annabeth always calms him down, before he kills everyone, what was stopping her this time? As I ran to the Poseidon cabin, I saw the most terrifying sight ever, Percy was dragging Annabeth and Brandon by their hair. Ripping out as much as he could. I just noticed that both Annabeth and Brandon were naked. Now I understand. Annabeth cheated on Percy with his own brother. That bitch. The sky darkened even more, with flashes of thunder and lightning joining the heavy torrents of rain. People looked around looking for the source of it. Then they saw me. I guess I looked terrifying, I had sparks bouncing of my skin, my eyes glowing, a foot or so of the ground. But I looked nothing like Percy, he was about 10 foot off the ground, had water swirling around him, eyes like deep pools of glowing dark green rage, hair flying around due to the hurricane, it was the personification of terrifying if I ever saw it.

Nico pov:

I was going back to camp to see Thalia and Percy, so I shadow travelled to the Hades cabin to get ready. But when I heard a storm brewing outside I knew something was wrong. So I went outside. What I saw had me in a rage. Annabeth was lying on the floor, naked next to Brandon, Percy's brother. I instantaneously knew what was happening: Percy was in a rage due to Annabeth cheating on him and Thalia saw it to so she was in a rage adding to the storm. They weren't getting any mercy from me either. As I got angrier and angrier I started to get lifted off the ground about 4 feet by a pillar of rock and earth, my hair was getting whipped around by Percy's hurricane, the dead were climbing out of the ground, the earthquake got twice as bad, and everything got darker until the only sources of light were the flashes of thunder and lightning and the glows of me, Percy's and Thalia's eyes.

3rd person:

Then Artemis ran over the hill and when she saw what was happening she called Apollo, who had a joking face until he saw what was happening then he tried to light up the area but couldn't, so they called the entire council down to earth. (AN: hades and Hestia have their thrones in this story) Hades, Poseidon and Zeus started to try and take back control of their domains, but were blasted back by a thunder bolt, a powerful blast of boiling water and a blast of the darkest shadows anywhere. "They're too powerful, if we don't stop them they will kill us all" yelled Athena, who was barely heard over the sound the thunder and the hurricane. "We must send them to Tartarus, it is the only place where they won't be able to take over our thrones." Zeus yelled back just getting over the sound of the thunder. So the big three pointed their weapons of power at their own children and shot a blast of power at them, knocking them back into a hole that hades opened up, sending them to Tartarus, were they will spend the rest of their lifes.

? pov:

'do not worry my love, you and your friends will be free soon' I thought as I watched the scene on earth from my viewing planet. Then one of my generals came running to me and bowed. "rise." I said "now what is it?" "milady, your brother order, was awoken by the blast of power that came from earth and has seen what you have done to his planet and the universe and is going to earth to help them along with the good primordia's before we can get there, so whatever your planning to help us please do it quickly so we can crush all the good out of him." He quickly told me. "alright , you are dismissed" I replied, as he left I started thinking, 'he will take a while to get there in his weakened state so I have a few years before I need to take my boy and his friends out.

The end

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Chaos out.