Hello everyone umm...yeah I think I need to rewrite this story again. Sorry I reread well some of it and my writing is still not good. I also noticed their are a lot of unimportant chapters like Superman and Lois getting married. I should have kept them married from the beginning and I the wedding chapter was irrelevant.

So now I'm going to write a version two of this story. Don't worry old man Logan will still be the base of my story and I will keep interactions with Supergirl. I apologize to everyone who was still reading this but this story needs to have good writing. I'm not saying it will be perfect by any means but my grammar has to at least be readable.