So this is my first ever smut fanfiction so please leave me a review telling me how to improve it if you have the time, thanks. This is actually a kind of practise for my major Tangled fanfic so I can get feedback here and then use that to write better smut in my longer Tangled fic so please give me feedback that would be such a great help. Anyway, I hope you enjoy!

Eric sat opposite Ariel in the small boat that they had taken out into the lagoon. He stared at her and sighed happily. She was so beautiful.

'Do you recognise this place?' he asked.

'Of course,' replied Ariel. 'It's where we went after our day out and Sebastian sang that song for us.'

'I was going to kiss you.'

'I know,' said Ariel blushing slightly. 'But then the boat got knocked over.'

That would have been the perfect kiss, thought Eric wistfully.

They brushed past the dangling leaves of the willow and passed out of sight from any potential onlookers from the shore. Eric put down his oars and leant back slightly. There was a slight silence broken only by the slight sound of splashing as Ariel ran her hand through the water. Slowly Eric dipped his hand into the water and ran it along the side of the boat until he touched the tips of her fingers. He looked up to see if she felt it. She hadn't reacted. He guessed that was good. Suddenly he felt her fingers wrap around his own. He looked up again at Ariel. She was looking at him expectantly. He leaned in and she mimicked his action. He raised his other hand brushed away the stray strand of hair that had fallen across her face. He felt her hand touch his knee. He then cupped the back of her head in his hand and pulled her in closer. Her eyes were closed. Slowly he planted a soft kiss on her lips. Their lips gently brushed together in a soft caress for several seconds. Then, instinctively, Eric ran his hand down her body to her waists and pulled her towards him. As he did this he felt her hand wrap round his shoulder. The kiss deepened and Eric felt Ariel's lips open slightly. He imitated her and soon he found her tongue exploring the recesses of his mouth. She was obviously eager.

Eric then realised Ariel had let go of his other hand and was running her fingers through his hair. This gave him a free hand with which he could explore her beautiful body. First he ran it through her long, red hair copying her action. Then he moved it down and felt one of her breasts. His hand moved to cup it gently. It was small but firm and perky. He squeezed it slightly eliciting a short gasp from Ariel. He could feel her nipple under the fabric and caught it between his fingers. Ariel gave another small gasp and bit the bottom of his lip in revenge.

Eric was pretty hard now and his large member was becoming more and more conspicuous in his trousers. He felt Ariel's hand slowly run up his leg, brushing it slightly as she went. However, instead of touching or grasping Eric's shaft her hand continued upwards towards his chest. He felt her arms tugging at the bottom of the shirt he was wearing and, realising her intention, he helped her by taking it off himself. Ariel looked at Eric's torso. It was well defined and muscly. She placed a hand on one of his pectorals, taking in his deep strength. Meanwhile Eric had his hands on her shoulders. He looked at her briefly for permission and when she acquiesced he pulled down the shoulder straps of the dress exposing Ariel's breasts to his full view. They were actually quite big- bigger than they had felt under the fabric of her dress anyway. Eric took one in each hand and softly rubbed each hardened nipple causing Ariel to moan softly.

'You didn't wear any undergarments today?' asked Eric playfully.

'I did down there,' replied Ariel, pointing to the area between her legs. 'But up here no'

She placed her hands on top of Eric's and then leaned in and kissed him again. The kiss was passionate and fiery. Eric could tell she desperately wanted more. With that knowledge in mind he removed one of his hands from her breast and instead moved it down to the small of her back where he began to make small circles. Then he moved his hand still further downwards and grabbed the cheeks of her backside. Ariel in the meanwhile had traced a little path with her hand down Eric's muscly chest until she reached the tip of his trousers. There she nimbly undid his laces and dived a hand inside. Eric gasped as she took his manhood in her hand. She slowly started to rub her hand up and down his large shaft. Eric was moaning now. Seeing how much pleasure he was feeling Ariel pushed his trousers further down his body and begun to rub his member more freely, increasing the speed. As Eric began to moan her name in pleasure she slid down his body and began to lick the tip of his phallus. She heard Eric gasp and felt his hands go to her hair. Slowly she opened her mouth and covered the top of Eric's large manhood with her saliva. She could feel Eric's hands grabbing her hair and forcing her further down onto his member. Slowly she rocked her head up and down. Eric was thrashing about a little in his agonising pleasure and after a short while cried out for her to stop before he came. Ariel obliged though not before licking the last bit of precum of the top of his shaft.

After the intense pleasuring Ariel had given him, Eric was determined to outdo her. Grabbing her waist, he ripped off the rest of the dress that was clinging to Ariel's now sweaty body. Then, with one hand still clasping her buttocks, he dived into her panties. The area his hand felt was intensely wet as was the undergarment covering it. Brushing her slit slightly with his hand made Ariel give out a satisfying gasp. Eric then lay Ariel back in the boat and began to rub her clitoris with his hand, slowly at first but then gaining in speed. Ariel threw her head back at the pleasure she was feeling and moaned Eric's name. Suddenly he stopped and she felt her panties being dragged down her thighs. She lifted her legs so as to make it easier for their removal and to therefore speed Eric along with his mission. After Eric had successfully removed her panties he returned to rubbing her wet clitoris. Then he pushed one of his fingers inside of Ariel's hole. Ariel gave a half squeal half moan at the sensation caused by Eric's finger. Eric could feel how tight she was and by the sounds she was making he guessed she was feeling the result of her tightness. Her enjoyment turned him on and he pushed a second finger inside. He then began to quicken his pace, driving his fingers in and out. He was feeling incredibly horny himself now so he began to rub his free hand up and down his large member. He felt Ariel's hands clasp the back of his head and run her fingers through his hair. Suddenly he felt her pushing down on his head, forcing him down towards her vagina. He understood what she wanted and dived in with his tongue. He first of all just licked around it, teasing her. Then, not wanting to torture her anymore, he slowly licked all the way up her vagina causing Ariel to yell out. His tongue went slowly in and out of her tight hole. Ariel was bucking about beginning to lose control as Eric went faster and faster. She was awash with feelings of euphoria. He could feel her about to climax. Suddenly her thighs were gripping him in an iron grasp as her body had waves of pleasure wash up and down it. She yelled out his name and dug her nails into his shoulder. As the pleasure subsided Eric freed himself from between her thighs. Her cries and her enjoyment had made him unbearably hard and now he positioned his mighty member next to her entrance ready to plunge in. He looked at Ariel for permission. Her chest was still heaving but she gave him a nod and lay back.

Ariel was feeling slightly nervous about this. Eric was so big and her private area so small and tight that she wasn't sure he would fit. And even if he did wouldn't it hurt unbearably?

'Relax,' said Eric calmly.

'I'm trying to,' replied Ariel although she couldn't keep the anxiousness out of her voice. 'I'm sorry.'

'Oh don't worry. If you don't want to then we can-'

'No I want to I'm just a little scared that's all.'

'Well would you like me to go slowly then, let you adjust to it so it won't hurt?'

Ariel nodded gratefully. Eric then lowered his head and kissed her reassuringly. Then, slowly, as he had promised, he pushed his manhood inside her. Ariel gasped. Eric looked at her, concernedly. He was about to withdraw but Ariel told him to stay. After a while the pain subsided and it began to feel pleasurable. Eric slowly began to rock backwards and forwards, in and out. Ariel was biting her lip trying to stop herself from screaming as Eric increased the pace. Eric was beginning to lose control. He'd promised to go slowly but a haze of lust had descended as he frantically plunged his cock into her tight hole. She was moaning his name over and over again. He needed her badly. He pulled her up close to him and passionately kissed her, all the while thrusting into her, harder and faster each time. Her nails dug into his back and she began to scream in pleasure. Eric could feel himself close to coming. He began to yell out Ariel's name combined with various curses. Ariel could feel herself start to tighten causing each of Eric's movements to become stronger. Neither of them could hold it any more.

With the loudest scream yet Ariel felt her walls clamp down onto Eric's manhood. Waves and waves of pleasure hit her. Eric couldn't hold back any longer and he felt himself empty his load into her womanhood with a moan. Her body fell onto his as they lay there, both still feeling the aftershock of the intense pleasure they had felt. After a while Eric looked up at her, his now flaccid cock still in her hole.

'That was amazing,' he panted, still out of breath from his exertions.

Ariel giggled and then sighed happily as she laid her head onto Eric's strong chest.

'Thank God Sebastian wasn't there to see that,' she said after a while.

'I don't know, he would have made a nice song out of it,' joked Eric.

'A very nice song,' replied Ariel sleepily.

'What should it be called?'

Ariel was a silent for a moment and then replied 'Shag the girl.'