this is my first fanfic. Before I start my story, I need to ask a question. I have been reading stories and some of them says that they don't own any of the charaters in Alpha and Omega. So i am asking if that I need to ask liongate if i can use their charaters for the story? And one more thing, can u guys review my story and give me your honest opinion,if its really bad do tell and why is it bad. if i don't get bad opinions and the story is bad, how do i know if its bad and to fix it for the chapter. but let start the story and pm me or review about the story.
It was a cloudy day with a chance of rain. A 17 year old boy was walking to the park, feeling the chilling breeze flowing though his fur. When he was walking, he was thinking about his life in the past...
FLASHBACK
There was a 6 year old boy that was in his carseat, waiting to going back to school. The mother was driving and the father was reading the newspaper in the passanger seat.
"Are you excited to go back to school?" the mother ask her lovely son.
"YES I AM! I got my backpack, and in my backpack theres is pencils, scissors, markers, crayons, and sunscreen!" said the 6 year old boy seeming that he was ready.
"Why do you have sunscreen for school?" ask the father in the passanger seat.
"Cause I don't know how long recess is and i don't want to get sun burnt or have skin cancer." answered by the boy.
"Man, you are going to 1st grade and you know about skin cancer." impressed by his father.
"I hope you do a great job at school and remember, ask questions if you are stuck on a problem or about the lesson." said the mother as she was turning to a restraunt's parking lot for breakfast before going to school.
They got out of the red car and started walking in the restraunt. When they walked in, they were greeted by a young, beautiful, wolf with a smile on her. She was their waitist and sat them down at a table by the restroom. They order their food and started eating it. Before they finish their food, the father saw a man walked in and he knew he was, his enemy. The father grap his son and went in the restroom.
"If you hear any thing, like a scream or something, don't come out. I will come back for you, I promise." said the father with a tone which his son started to get scare
"O-Ok, I lo-love you" said the boy feeling a tear coming out.
The father smiled and give him a hug and said, "I love you too and your mother too."
After that the father walked out of the restroom. the boy stayed there and wait. Sense the table was less than 15 ft. he heard laughter and whispers. Then he heard a man voice grow loader but wasn't his father. He was loud enough that the boy could hear.
"I didn't do that!" said a man.
"The police said that you were the one who hacked my computer and got all of my personal stuff. So we move to Jasper. I had to quit my job, get a new credit card, and restart my life again." said the father with anger in his tone.
The boy heard what he just say and he had anger for the wolf who done this. When the farther said that, there was silent, then all the wolves who in the restruant gasp and scream. The boy heard a woman screaming,
"HE HAS A GUN! SOMEONE CALL 911!"
The boy didn't know who had the gun but he was scared of who what had it. Then heard a gun shot. Then another one. The boy jumped when he heard the gun shots. He was crying but not thinking of his parents that got shot. He was hoping that every one was alright. He waited for his father for 2 mins but never came, just heard people screaming. He couldn't wait any longer so he got out of the restroom. The scene terrified him. He saw his parents lying down on the floor, with a hole in their head. People was trying to help them. He don't want to see his parent like that so he ran out of the restruant, went to the car, grap his backpack and started to run to school with tears flying off his face.
He got to school. He try to forget what happen and try to do school work. At the end of school, he went to the office to ask if he can use the phone to call his aunt and uncle to pick him up from school. When they pick him up he told them about his parents and stay at his aunt and uncle's house until he was 16.
END OF FLASHBACK
That is my way of "the boy's" parents die. It a while because im useing my xbox 360 and one. let me know how you guys think. tell me if the story is bad or not and be HONEST. If i get reviews or pms, i wil update the next update but if i get reviews or pms in the next 3 days, ill update the next chapter in less than 2 weeks. see you guys in less than 2 weeks, hopefully.